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Of Christmas Past by Chaser921

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Harry, Ron, Hermione and Ginny find themselves in a Muggle hotel in Godric's Hollow on the Winter Solstice. During an enthusiastic snowball fight, Harry and Ginny step through a stone circle that transports them seventeen years into the past. This may be the only chance Harry has to spend with his parents, and it may also be what he needs to figure out his relationship with Ginny.

The warning is for later chapters.

Edit: So, this was originally strictly a Harry/Ginny fic, but Ron and Hermione kept trying to get together too, so I felt like I had to change the category. And there's a bit of Lily/James in there too, though they're already married, and I've also added a bit of Remus/Tonks. Poor Sirius is the only Singleton (though he may manage to get a girl of his own)!

Edit: This story was cannon until after Deathly Hallows came out, so I changed it to Alternate Universe, but it's still pretty close to cannon. Only a few things will end up being different when the story ends.

Edit: I've changed all of the chapter titles to the titles of Christmas songs that I felt reflected the events in the chapters best. Tell me what you think! Does it fit?
Reviewer: Hplover0695 Signed
Date: 08/03/11 Title: Chapter 16: Have Yourself A Merry Little Christmas

This story is amazing. I've read it three times now (I only just got an account, or I would have reviewed it before) and it still affects me every time. Even this third reading I teared up five times-more than I ever have for even the real Harry Potter books! I do wish you would update thoug-on your author page you promised never to give this one up, "even if it takes me five years. Hopefully it won't, but I won't abandon the story." It's been 4.5 years since you started-5 months left! ;) Sorry to ramble-I know you have tons of reviews begging for updates, but I can't help but hope that one of these days a review will convince you that this story is worth finishing. Thanks!

Author's Response: Thank you! Believe it or not, I've been working on this story recently, and I should have another chapter written for you soon. Life has just gotten far more in the way than I thought it would, and I'm not good at keeping up with chaptered fics. But don't worry - I WILL finish this one. And I'll post a new chapter soon.

Reviewer: Hplover0695 Signed
Date: 08/08/11 Title: Chapter 17: Blame it on the Mistletoe

Yay! You really did update-and this chapter was almost worth the wait! (I say almost in hopes that it will dissuade you from taking this long again ;)) I love how well you managed to balance the humor and the sentimental moments in which Harry realizes how little time he has left with his parents. James' line about the "bloody bird" is hilarious, as is his painstaking efforts to carve the turkey well while everyone laughs at him-I could really picture it, and started laughing out loud as a read that scene. I'm excited to see where you take the "Lizzy"/Remus storyline, as well as the Ron/hermione one. I personally, rather than believing that in non-canon stories like this, they first kiss and immediately they realize they're madly in love, instead they even turn more awkward before finally figuring things out and getting together (does this make sense?) However, no matter what angle you go at their story from, I can't wait to read it. Thanks for upholding your promise-this was a wonderful chapter and I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so much - I think DH and Kerichi's Lover's Moon series have inspired me, so I finally got off my ass and finished this bit. I've started on the next chapter, though it'll probably take a bit, as I'm working a lot and school starts next week, but I'll do my best! On another note, I'm teaching two college-level classes on the Harry Potter series this semester! I'm so excited :-). That should help take care of my writer's block.

Reviewer: Hplover0695 Signed
Date: 09/16/11 Title: Chapter 18: All I Want for Christmas Is You

Yay!!! You're right-you're being so much better about updating! I really love this story and this chapter is no exception! I especially love what you've done with Tonks and Lupin, and it makes me wonder whether their kiss will change something about their future (current?) relationship or if it won't affect the future at all. Also, I'd love to see more of the Harry/Ginny and Harry/Lily/James scenes. scenes-the intensity yet heartwarming nature of those scenes is what drew me to this story in the first place! I also think you write Harry as I picture him-gentlemanly, caring, and a tad bit awkward. As is, though, this story is wonderful! No matter what you plan to do with it, I plan to stick with this story till the end-especially now that you've essentially cofirmed that there will be an end! Thanks for all your hard work, and I can't wait to see what you do with the next chapter!
PS-I hope your Harry Potter classes are goig well! I'm so jealous-I wish I could be a part of a Harry Potter class. What do you teach in said classes?

Author's Response: I'm planning on doing more with H/G and Harry and his parents in the next chapter - I wanted to start tying up all the love knots so that everyone can have the Christmas they want and be happy. PS - the HP classes are going beautifully! They're going to have their second exam (on CoS) this week, and then we'll be starting on PoA. For that one, we're going to watch the movie and go into elements of film and popular culture. So far we've covered the heroic cycle, types of heroes, archetypes, themes of prejudice, WWII influences, parallels between Harry and Voldemort, the theme of choice, and Harry's Christ-like traits and tendencies.

The Gryffindor Gang by U-No-Poo

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Five students - Albus Potter, Rose Weasley, Scorpius Malfoy, Claudia Kelaney and Adam Finnigan. Five different stories. One house - Gryffindor.

Join The Gryffindor Gang, five unlikely best friends, as they enter Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry as first year students. Throughout the year, they must overcome their own personal battles. Albus just doesn't seem to get out of his father's spotlight - will people treat him like himself, or as Harry Potter's son? Scorpius is dealing with his family too - being a Malfoy in Gryffindor isn't exactly peachy for him. Claudia's started slowly adjusting to the wizarding world, but will her sneaky, horrible roommate cause Rose and Claudia big trouble? And Adam's just not having the perfect start to Hogwarts that he'd have liked.

These are all trying problems when you're eleven years old. But their real test happens when danger is thrown into all five of their lives, threatening them all. Will they be able to face their biggest battle yet, and live to tell the tale?

This is Part One in The Gryffindor Gang Trilogy.
Reviewer: Hplover0695 Signed
Date: 08/03/11 Title: Chapter 3: Everyone's Just Having A Bad Day

I really like this story so far! It's really interesting how you've made Lee Jordan's daughter so different from him-it makes me wonder who he married (maybe I'll find out in a later chapter?). I'm a big fan of canon, and mainly only read canon stories. I'm not sure how I feel about bellatrix still being alive, but I'm interested to see where you're taking it. I'm also a huge Scorose shipper, so I love that you have them in the same house-even thought they're only 11, it's a step in the right direction ;) I guess I just I've to keep reading to find out what happens!

Author's Response: Yes you do find out who Lee married, and Nina's character is investigated a bit more in-depth. She holds a very complicated part in the story, my wish is that I do her justice! Bellatrix is one of those characters who is better off dead - which is why she makes a perfect baddie for this story. And it's never too early to start with Scorose! Thanks for reviewing!

The Dragon Does the Tickling by jenniferes

Rated: Professors •
Summary: After the war, Hermione returns to Hogwarts to complete her seventh year of studies as Head Girl, only to find Draco Malfoy has been appointed Head Boy. Her life is further complicated by the fact that Headmistress McGonagall is strongly encouraging Malfoy and her to attend one of the three wizarding universities in Europe after they graduate from Hogwarts. The story starts HG/RW, but the focus is on the development of HG/DM.
Reviewer: Hplover0695 Signed
Date: 08/10/11 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Going Home

Wow. Just-wow. I love it! I've always cringed when I see a Dramione story, and before now, I've refused to read them. I think it's safe to say that you've officially converted me. I really think you've captured both of their personalities well, and I really like how you started it as a canon R/Hr and gradually shifted it to a Draco/Hr story. I agree that I think it's unrealistic to believe that Ron and hermione stayed together all those years-I mean, I love them together, and I totally agree with jkr's decision to keep romione a couple, but, honestly, I think this would also be a very plausible ending! Draco has the perfect amount of deviousness, but I liked how you gradually worked his charming side into the mix. I don't know how I feel about the idea of Ron getting back together with lavender, but I guess he needs someone! I just have one Brit-picky thing (which isn't really fair of me as I'm not from britain-this just bothered me a bit). In chapter 20, about 3/4 of the way through, it says "the weather was warm for a March day in Scotland, reaching close to sixty-five degrees." They use celsius, so sixty-five degrees there is not warm, it's hot-in fact, it's 149 degrees f! I really do enjoy this story, and I can't wait to read "More Wandless Magic"! :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the story and I thank you for your thoughtful review! I am not British, although I tried really hard to make the story sound less American. I did read that the UK is about 50/50 with Farenheit and Celsius, but that might be wrong. I'll go back and fix that to not use degrees at all (and thus avoid the issue). Thanks again for your excellent and encouraging feedback! Jenny

The Other Potter by georgeisholey

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: My name is Rose Evans. My parents were Lily and James Potter, and Harry Potter is my twin brother, though he didn't know. I was raised by Severus Snape. This is my story.

Reviewer: Hplover0695 Signed
Date: 06/08/11 Title: Chapter 15: The Annual Battle of Good Vs. Evil

This story is great! Sorry I haven't reviewed until now, but I just found this story this morning and have spent my day reading it...yay lazy days :) Please keep this story up-I like that it's fairly canon, but with a twist, and really enjoy reading it. I just have one nit-picky correction for this chapter-about a third if the way in, It says "I saw Luna and Harry leave, looking for something in Gryffindor Tower." In Deathly Hallows they actually go to Ravenclaw's common room. Sorry about being nit-picky, an keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Oh, right! I kind of wrote that chapter at like, two in the morning, but thanks for telling me! I'm incredibly nit-picky myself, since I reread the sixth and seventh HP books about five times to make the story work. I'm glad it's summer too... but after June's over, I'm going to be pretty busy. Lucky I have a laptop and a hotel with wireless, huh? Thanks for the review! :)

Lacuna Mentis by hestiajones

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: There were blind spots in his mind. They said he might recover the lost memories; they also said there was a high possibility he might not. Along came a girl, and everything changed.

Warning: This story is originally rated Professors, for the bunch of warning tags applicable to it. The rating has been changed temporarily only because we're having some technical problem with stories that have higher ratings. So, please click at your own discretion.

This story is written for ToBeOrNot..../Jess, my close friend and one of the most gifted writers I know. O Believer of Rarepairs, this is my fluff-free, dark and angsty present for you.

Winner of this year's QSQ Best Dark/Angsty and nominated for Best General!

DISCLAIMER: I am not J.K.Rowling. I highly doubt she ships this ship.

PLEASE DO NOT READ THE REVIEWS before reading the fic.
Reviewer: Hplover0695 Signed
Date: 11/12/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ohmygoodness. I'm blown away. Here I am convinced that "the Healer" is Parvati and that it's too obvious...boy, was I wrong! I did NOT see that ending coming. I know you've gotten mixed reviews on the pace of the third chapter, but I have to say, I think it was perfect. If anything along the lines of this story were to happen in real life, I don't think the Healer (trying so hard not to say his/her name in case people ignore your warning and jump right to the reviews) would just wait around like...well, like Voldemort every time he duels Harry (haha)! I think this story was beautifully written and definitely kept me guessing the whole time. Well done-you definitely deserved that QSQ award!!

Author's Response: Hahaha! One thing I find ridiculous about villains in general is when they spend so much time talking. You're right about Voldemort. What. An. Idiot. Although the third chapter has the longest scene in the story, it doesn't actually take much time - it's the memories which add to the word count. So, thank you for mentioning that. :) And thanks for the lovely review!


Albus Potter and the Midnight Thief by Alice Mac

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: As Albus' parents wave him off from Platform nine and three-quarters they are happy in the knowledge that their son's time at Hogwarts will be a far less trying one than their own. However, in due course, Albus will discover that there are those who would wish differently. As Albus and his friends Rose, Frank, Effie, Theron, Xander and the mysterious Tristan make their way through the year they slowly discover who is friend and who is foe and most importantly, that not everyone is as they seem...
Reviewer: Hplover0695 Signed
Date: 10/17/11 Title: Chapter 1: Last Train Home

I love this story! I only just discovered it but it's beautifully done. Both Tristan and Effie are written very well. They have the perfect combination of kindness and mysteriousness that can be so hard to describe, but you pulled it off very well. The mysterious sides to each of them are definitely there and leave me desperate for more information, but you've balanced it well enough that I can't decide whether I trust them or not! I love your Albus, Rose, James, and Persephone, hate your Scorpius (in a good way! Haha), and am excited to learn more about everyone and everything! Well done and keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for you kind review! You'll find out more about both Tristan and Effie's backgrounds in later chapters and hopefully I'll maintain the mystery for a bit. Haha, Scorpius, in this story, is a character I love to hate. You'll see, as the story progresses, that he's always on the verge of nearly being nice but then remembers himself in time to be nasty. Thanks for the review! I hope you keep enjoying reading :)

Spellbound by ravenclaw1997

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •

Ginny Weasley is extremely excited for her first year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, and knows that it will be wonderful. She has all of her supplies, her books, and most importantly, a wand.

But is she ready for the twist Tom Riddle will send her way?

This story is an alternate Chamber of Secrets from Ginny's point-of-view, with some very interesting changes that could affect her whole life.

Reviewer: Hplover0695 Signed
Date: 08/22/11 Title: Chapter 2: The Best Birthday

Very cute! I think you've got 11-year-old Ginny down to a tee! She definitely has the perfect level of childish traits (asking her diary for advice, being embarrassed to even say anything in Harry's presence, yet being resentful when the opportunity to say something to him is taken away), yet she is mature enough to balance out these childish traits (worrying about her family's finances, recognizing Harry's discomfort when forced to be photographed). My one nit-picky thing is at the very beginning of this chapter when Ginny writes, "We didn't have any other wands for me to use other than Ron's old broken one, so mum and dad said I could get a new one!" Ron breaks his wand when the Whomping Willow when he and Harry arrive at Hogwarts in CoS. So, unless he broke another wand before his first year at Hogwarts (which I doubt, as wizards typically get their first wand right before Hogwarts), he hasn broken a wand yet at this point in the story. Otherwise, this story's great, the plot is a wonderful idea, and I can't wait for later chapters when Ginny's tale differs from that of the trio-thus far we've seen an alternate view of the same scenes we see in CoS, but after arriving at Hogwarts, you don't see her much in the book. I'm excited to see your take on what she's doing behind-the-scenes. Or, at least what really happens with the diary! Well done-keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Ah! Thanks so much for the wonderful review, and pointing out that mistake... *shuns mother for not paying closer attention when reading the books* I've got to fix that... ~Manda

A Weekend by the Sea by CCMugg

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: After weeks of frustrating snoggus interruptus, Hermione and Ron try to get some much-needed alone time at Shell Cottage, where Fleur offers some sisterly advice and brings up some sweet memories for Hermione.
Reviewer: Hplover0695 Signed
Date: 10/10/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it!! Your Hermione, Fleur, Ron, etc. were all beautifully written; I really think you captured the essence of each of them quite nicely. The one part I thought was a bit...strange...was the bit about Charlie telling Ron to man up or he (Charlie) would ask out Hermione himself. According to JKR, Charlie left Hogwarts the year before the trio arrived, meaning he was probably 18 by the time they started. This makes him a full seven years older than Hermione, who I'm guessing is still 18-19 in this story-a 25-26 year old with an 18-19 year old just doesn't seem to fit into JKR's world. But then again, Tonks and Lupin are the perfect counter to my argument. Ah, well... Otherwise, I really adored this story. It would be great if you made it into a kind of micro-mini series, writing a story about Ginny/Harry preparing themselves for the first time. Ginny is often written as confident and bold, with Harry being...not timid, persay, but somewhat more cautious then Ginny. I think you could go a whole multitude of directions with this type of story-you could stick with their fanfiction attributes or use the opportunity to show Ginny's quieter, more girly, or somewhat less brave side. Even if you keep this as a solo story, though, I truly think it's great. Perfect balance of fluff/content-well done!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind words!! As I mentioned in my response below, I only meant the Charlie line as a joke between brothers--he wouldn't actually have made a move on Hermione--but I guess I didn't make that clear enough. Thanks also for your suggestions. Right now I am fixated on Ron/Hermione (I relate to Hermione far more than Ginny), but I probably should start exploring some other relationships.