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Arthur's Obsession by hogwartsbookworm
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 30]

Summary:

Arthur Weasley has an obsession. He can’t keep it off his mind. It tinges every thought in his head and consumes his dreams. He can’t concentrate on anything else. His friends, the ones who haven’t given him up as a bad job, tell him he’s crazy and he knows they’re probably right. But that’s not even the worst part. Do you know what the worst part is?

She’s completely oblivious.

…And you thought it was Muggle Studies he was obsessed with.

Chapter 6: Quidditch and Kids is up!

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 11353 Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Published:
07/06/10 Updated: 03/01/11


Reviewer: mollytoone Signed
Date: 03/11/11 Title: Chapter 6: 6. Quidditch and Kids

I absolutely LOVE looking in to Arthur's head as a young man! You're taking us on a great journey. Wonderful job! Cindy

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying it.

 

For Them by hogwartsbookworm
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 17]

Summary: Coming home late from an Auror assignment, Ron faces a conversation he didn't expect... at least, not for a few more years.

Just a fun little one-shot, dedicated to Lori (WeasleyMom), the Queen of all things Romione.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1673 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/22/11 Updated: 04/23/11


Reviewer: mollytoone Signed
Date: 04/23/11 Title: Chapter 1: Romione

Great job! I love how you kept Ron's witty character intact. I am a little disappointed that he will leave being an auror. His response to Hermoine's announcement was perfect and very real. I could read you all day!

Author's Response: Thank you! And I wasn't the one who decided he'd quit being an Auror -- that was JK. If you're disappointed, take it up with her. ; ) I'm glad his reaction was real. *blushes* You could read my stuff all day? That's sweet.

 

Not All Gold Glisters by hogwartsbookworm
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: Alexander Jameson has spent his last two years at the Cairo Auror office riding a desk. When a case finally comes along that the Head feels he is suited for, he jumps at the chance to take it. Now he must solve a murder, figure out the significance of the murdered man’s missing ring, and keep the only witness to the death safe. But those things turn out to be much more difficult than he expected when they are combined with the added task of safe-guarding his heart.

This is hogwartsbookworm of Hufflepuff writing for the 2011 Mysterious May Challenge in the Great Hall, Prompt #2.

The title is a rewording of a quote from Shakespeare's Merchant of Vencie.

Categories: Mystery Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 1831 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
05/18/11 Updated: 05/26/11


Reviewer: mollytoone Signed
Date: 05/29/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm on the edge of my chair waiting for the next installment! I love the humanness of both characters. He wants to be more and do more . She also wants to prove herself. It shapes up to be a match made in heaven. Hopefully they'll both find themselves as their friendship grows and their self-confidence rises.

You did a wonderful job of showing how a maturing young adult struggles with his own personal Goliath and yet the Goliath is shared by another who feels he is also on his own. I suspect you will show the characters' growth as they emerge victorious from their personal yet joint battle for recognition, adulthood, self-actualization, self-esteem and self-control.

This was a very insightful look narrated captivatingly!

Author's Response: Thank you! That is so nice of you! I, um, didn't realize I was so deep, haha. =] Thanks for the review!

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