My name is Christina. I'm a senior in high school. I love the harry potter series. I've recently started my own fan fiction since I like to write and I thought why not write a harry potter fan fiction.
Summary: All her life Ginny has tried to live up to the expectations set by those around her, and more importantly herself. When Harry breaks up with her Ginny thinks she realises what she must do to acheive this perfection but this soon turns into an obsession she can't escape.
Warning: The main focus of this Story is on the effects of an eating disorder, if you get easily upset by such issues I suggest you dont read.
Disclaimer: All characters and plots ect recognised as belonging to JK Rowling do belong to her and I give her full credit.
*Chapters 1 and 2 have been edited*
I think this is a great idea for a story and I think that your getting the thoughts and emotional and the behaviors as well. Keep Going!
I don't think you need to tone it down at all. I think your doing a great job!
I'll leave you a review that will hopefully encourage you to continue! :)
Summary: Rose Weasley didn't mean to be different. She didn't intend to stand out in her family. She didn't expect to be Sorted... into Slytherin.
I was cracking up during the whole chapter! I can't wait to see how Ron reacts to the news that she is talking to scorpio AND got put into slytherin..
That's like 2 strikes. :)
I think your right taking the romance between Rose and Scorpius through because if you force it then it'll be a bad flow and it won't be a good story.