My name is Christina. I'm a senior in high school. I love the harry potter series. I've recently started my own fan fiction since I like to write and I thought why not write a harry potter fan fiction.
I think this is a great idea for a story and I think that your getting the thoughts and emotional and the behaviors as well. Keep Going!
I don't think you need to tone it down at all. I think your doing a great job!
I'll leave you a review that will hopefully encourage you to continue! :)
I was cracking up during the whole chapter! I can't wait to see how Ron reacts to the news that she is talking to scorpio AND got put into slytherin..
That's like 2 strikes. :)
I think your right taking the romance between Rose and Scorpius through because if you force it then it'll be a bad flow and it won't be a good story.