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Daddy by blondebouncingferret

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 1739 Reviews Past Featured Story
Summary: Post Hogwarts: Ron and Harry are sent to America for Auror training. Ron spends his last night in England with Hermione, and after returning two years later, he finds Hermione with a fifteen-month-old baby ...
Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/15/11 Title: Chapter 8: Hexed

ron is such an idiot.



Just Married....Kinda by ColorOfAngels

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 974 Reviews
Summary: The dust has settled and the final battle is over now that Harry has defeated Voldemort for the last time......Harry is eager to get on with the rest of his life and is feeling kind of spontaneous, so why not get married?.... Tomorrow....... Mainly Harry/Ginny with some Ron/Hermione Rated for sexual references
Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/15/11 Title: Chapter 1: I Do

interesting... :) me likes it!



Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/15/11 Title: Chapter 2: Honeymoon

it was a bit quick in the middle... but okay
try to maybe.. i dunno... make harry and ginny "think" not make them do quick decisions. They are a very young couple who just got married without telling anyone... it would be normal for them to have some doubts and stuff.... not just "okay we'll do this" kinda attiude.. you get me?



A Weasley Wedding by willow_wand

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 48 Reviews
Summary: Bill and Fleur are getting married and love is in the air. But will an old flame drive a wedge between Ron and Hermione? Will Harry change his mind about Ginny?
Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/15/11 Title: Chapter 1: A Weasley Wedding

short and sweet! its just what i like! And it shows just how sensitive and innocent Ron can be at times! Love love love it!



Those Deep Blue Need You Eyes by Weasleyboyfreak

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 205 Reviews
Summary: This story starts out right were HBP left off. Ron and Hermione obviously have feelings for each other. All they need is a little help, confidence, and a push in the right direction. Will Harry and Ginny get back together in their quest to push together their best friends? Will Harry and his friends be able to destroy Voldemort? It will take love, friendship, strength, and trust to be able to free the wizarding world from the clutches of the Dark Lord.
Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/15/11 Title: Chapter 1: Ch 1: Untold Secrets

endings a bit fast but ron and hermione are sooo cute!!! :D



Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/15/11 Title: Chapter 2: Ch 2: Unexpected Arrival and Tears

so sweet!! ron and hermione! great surprise from harry :D ending was a bit fast though.. detail it out more... :D awesome chapter!!!



Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/15/11 Title: Chapter 5: Ch 5: Big Suprises

this is sooo sweet!!! love is in the air for both couples!!!! :D me love love love it!!



Snowflakes by The_Dream_Team

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 256 Reviews
Summary: And there he was. The one boy she could not stand. His messy, jet black hair was ruffled and untidy and his glasses were sitting crooked on his nose. James Potter was here. With Lily. And all her Muggle friends. At a Muggle ski resort. Could things possibly be worse? Oh yeah, Sirius Black is there, too.
Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/15/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1:The Christophe Brazier Lodge

language: eg: parked(landed would have been better)
:)
its good!

Author's Response: Aw, the early chapters are sooo bad :\ But thanks for reading and reviewing!



Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/15/11 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The Buffet

ending was a bit too fast for my likings but so far so good!

Author's Response: Sorry, but thanks for reading and reviewing!



Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/15/11 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4:The Ski Lift

when lily was talking about sev, could be a litte bit more hesitent on telling james, he is of course her "enemy" and telling him stuff like that is going to take some time

Author's Response: Yeah, at that point of the story, I was more concerned about moving the plot along... But I totally understand what you're saying. Thanks for the constructive criticism!



Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/15/11 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: The Hot Chocolate Social

interesting ending :D james is a bit too arogant though :P

Author's Response: Well, remember that, at this point, they are all sixteen. Guys are pretty arrogant at that age, if you ask me :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/15/11 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Warming Hut

when lily asks about remus, it would be more convincing that both james and sirius were both shocked, i mean she just randomly guess and stuff :P
interesting but there needs to be sense of secrey when lily guesses that remus is a werwolf :)

Author's Response: Yeah, I really just wanted to make sure that the readers knew that Lily knew and, unfortunately, I didn't spend much time on reactions... Thanks for reading and for reviewing!



Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/15/11 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: The Chat

this is a very sweet chat with sirius and lily :) great!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it!! :)



Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/15/11 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: The Letter

the part with sirius telling lily that it was his fault and not james fault was really sweet :)
but lily should have been more shocked. She found out that the guy she hates the most saved her "best friend" she would be speechless

Author's Response: Well, I have to say, at this point she doesn't really hate James all that much :) I'm happy you liked the part with Sirius! Thanks for all the reviews you left!



Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/15/11 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: The Ahurewa Forest

when they changed into their animal forms it would be more practical that they had to be "naked" because their clothes dont just merge with their skin. If they do you need to make some sort of reference :) nice meeting remus thou!

Author's Response: Yay for Remus! Honestly, I didn't really want them to be in their birthday suits... It's a bit easier if the clothes just appear. Like when Peter Pettigrew becomes a human after being scabbers, he has clothes on. Thanks for Reviewing!



Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/15/11 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: The Truth About Magic

perfect :D

Author's Response: Yipee! Glad you liked it :]