ron is such an idiot.
interesting... :) me likes it!
it was a bit quick in the middle... but okay
try to maybe.. i dunno... make harry and ginny "think" not make them do quick decisions. They are a very young couple who just got married without telling anyone... it would be normal for them to have some doubts and stuff.... not just "okay we'll do this" kinda attiude.. you get me?
short and sweet! its just what i like! And it shows just how sensitive and innocent Ron can be at times! Love love love it!
endings a bit fast but ron and hermione are sooo cute!!! :D
so sweet!! ron and hermione! great surprise from harry :D ending was a bit fast though.. detail it out more... :D awesome chapter!!!
this is sooo sweet!!! love is in the air for both couples!!!! :D me love love love it!!
language: eg: parked(landed would have been better)
Author's Response: Aw, the early chapters are sooo bad :\ But thanks for reading and reviewing!
ending was a bit too fast for my likings but so far so good!
Author's Response: Sorry, but thanks for reading and reviewing!
when lily was talking about sev, could be a litte bit more hesitent on telling james, he is of course her "enemy" and telling him stuff like that is going to take some time
Author's Response: Yeah, at that point of the story, I was more concerned about moving the plot along... But I totally understand what you're saying. Thanks for the constructive criticism!
interesting ending :D james is a bit too arogant though :P
Author's Response: Well, remember that, at this point, they are all sixteen. Guys are pretty arrogant at that age, if you ask me :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
when lily asks about remus, it would be more convincing that both james and sirius were both shocked, i mean she just randomly guess and stuff :P
interesting but there needs to be sense of secrey when lily guesses that remus is a werwolf :)
Author's Response: Yeah, I really just wanted to make sure that the readers knew that Lily knew and, unfortunately, I didn't spend much time on reactions... Thanks for reading and for reviewing!
this is a very sweet chat with sirius and lily :) great!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it!! :)
the part with sirius telling lily that it was his fault and not james fault was really sweet :)
but lily should have been more shocked. She found out that the guy she hates the most saved her "best friend" she would be speechless
Author's Response: Well, I have to say, at this point she doesn't really hate James all that much :) I'm happy you liked the part with Sirius! Thanks for all the reviews you left!
when they changed into their animal forms it would be more practical that they had to be "naked" because their clothes dont just merge with their skin. If they do you need to make some sort of reference :) nice meeting remus thou!
Author's Response: Yay for Remus! Honestly, I didn't really want them to be in their birthday suits... It's a bit easier if the clothes just appear. Like when Peter Pettigrew becomes a human after being scabbers, he has clothes on. Thanks for Reviewing!
Author's Response: Yipee! Glad you liked it :]