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Summary:

"Love is unexplainable. There are no words for it. You can’t express why you feel so. It just happens," James said. "“Don’t you think that if I had the choice I would have chosen to love someone who didn’t hate me in return?”

“No,” Sirius said simply.

“You’re right.” James said, sighing. “I’m so screwed up, Padfoot.”

The drama-filled romantic tale of Lily and James's mysterious but unfortunate tale. It started with love and ended with death. It makes you wonder about the things they tried to live for. Pre-HBP



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 94269 Chapters: 60 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/06/04 Updated: 12/15/06


Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/17/11 Title: Chapter 8: Lakeside Drama

this is really sweet :) this is the second time i've read this "book" and i love it!!
great! grammatical errors here and there but :D its good it really is!

 
Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/17/11 Title: Chapter 9: In Your Arms

totally sweet!!! did voldemort rlly kill lily's mom? lf so, time would be needed, and for lily to tell james, it needs to be slower, she has to have that nagging feeling that she hated him and she has to spend some time with james before they actually end up in eachothers arms
and it would be more believable if lilly was thinking more "WTH??? why am i feeling what im feeling right now about james???" and stuff :)
overall it is very good :D

 
Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/17/11 Title: Chapter 10: Truce With The Enemy

the end part was very fast
a bit too fast
halle should have been shocked when sirius said that he loved her becuz she didn't believe it
and sirius should have been speechless
and they shouldn't have just separated after they said all that!!! D:
(my personal opinion! don't listen to it if you don't want to)
it would have been better for them to have chatted a bit more b4 going off :)
great chapter!!! loving every minute of it!

 
Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/17/11 Title: Chapter 11: Memories Not Forgotten

james should have been more surprised when she kissed him, more speechless and all and there should have been a moment where they didn't speak. cuz its like james dream and stuff to have lily and now she kissed him and is willing to go out with him :)
overall i loved it :D
cant wait to finish this "book" :)

 
Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/17/11 Title: Chapter 12: Flower and Prongs

sooo offing sweet XD james is perfect and so is lily!!!
no changes :D

 
Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/17/11 Title: Chapter 13: Frozen Tears

this is awesome :D love love love it
halle needs to be more apologetic but besides that its AWESOME!!! :D keep writing!!

 
Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/17/11 Title: Chapter 15: Wisdom of Dumbledore

well this fluff was well needed!!
very good :D

 
Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/17/11 Title: Chapter 17: Dreams

at the end... there should have been a "moment" with james and lily are just silent because of whats happened (processing and all)
its very good :D love how james and lily are coming together... AHHH!!!! XD sooo sweet!!!

 
Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/17/11 Title: Chapter 18: A Friend's Betrayal

poor peter :( i feel sorry for him
( i am not writing becuz of ur a/n)
he just got sucked into a situation that he cant get out of
poor poor guy

 
Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/17/11 Title: Chapter 23: No Mercy

:'( sad.. but needed
good chapter good chapter

 
Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/17/11 Title: Chapter 32: Homecoming

:D yay!! she's back!!! great chapter(s)
more more more!!!

 

Daddy by blondebouncingferret
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 1739]

Summary: Past Featured StoryPost Hogwarts: Ron and Harry are sent to America for Auror training. Ron spends his last night in England with Hermione, and after returning two years later, he finds Hermione with a fifteen-month-old baby ...

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 40801 Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/02/05 Updated: 03/21/06


Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/15/11 Title: Chapter 8: Hexed

ron is such an idiot.

 

Just Married....Kinda by ColorOfAngels
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 973]

Summary: The dust has settled and the final battle is over now that Harry has defeated Voldemort for the last time......Harry is eager to get on with the rest of his life and is feeling kind of spontaneous, so why not get married?.... Tomorrow....... Mainly Harry/Ginny with some Ron/Hermione Rated for sexual references

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 33767 Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Published:
05/18/05 Updated: 08/02/06


Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/15/11 Title: Chapter 1: I Do

interesting... :) me likes it!

 
Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/15/11 Title: Chapter 2: Honeymoon

it was a bit quick in the middle... but okay
try to maybe.. i dunno... make harry and ginny "think" not make them do quick decisions. They are a very young couple who just got married without telling anyone... it would be normal for them to have some doubts and stuff.... not just "okay we'll do this" kinda attiude.. you get me?

 

A Weasley Wedding by willow_wand
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 48]

Summary: Bill and Fleur are getting married and love is in the air. But will an old flame drive a wedge between Ron and Hermione? Will Harry change his mind about Ginny?

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 6042 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/15/05 Updated: 10/15/05


Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/15/11 Title: Chapter 1: A Weasley Wedding

short and sweet! its just what i like! And it shows just how sensitive and innocent Ron can be at times! Love love love it!

 

Summary: This story starts out right were HBP left off. Ron and Hermione obviously have feelings for each other. All they need is a little help, confidence, and a push in the right direction. Will Harry and Ginny get back together in their quest to push together their best friends? Will Harry and his friends be able to destroy Voldemort? It will take love, friendship, strength, and trust to be able to free the wizarding world from the clutches of the Dark Lord.

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 11226 Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/30/06 Updated: 05/01/07


Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/15/11 Title: Chapter 1: Ch 1: Untold Secrets

endings a bit fast but ron and hermione are sooo cute!!! :D

 
Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/15/11 Title: Chapter 2: Ch 2: Unexpected Arrival and Tears

so sweet!! ron and hermione! great surprise from harry :D ending was a bit fast though.. detail it out more... :D awesome chapter!!!

 
Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/15/11 Title: Chapter 5: Ch 5: Big Suprises

this is sooo sweet!!! love is in the air for both couples!!!! :D me love love love it!!

 

Snowflakes by The_Dream_Team
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 251]

Summary: And there he was. The one boy she could not stand. His messy, jet black hair was ruffled and untidy and his glasses were sitting crooked on his nose. James Potter was here. With Lily. And all her Muggle friends. At a Muggle ski resort. Could things possibly be worse? Oh yeah, Sirius Black is there, too.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 47505 Chapters: 21 Completed: No
Published:
07/08/09 Updated: 04/12/12


Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/15/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1:The Christophe Brazier Lodge

language: eg: parked(landed would have been better)
:)
its good!

Author's Response: Aw, the early chapters are sooo bad :\ But thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: BornToRead333 Signed
Date: 02/15/11 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The Buffet

ending was a bit too fast for my likings but so far so good!

Author's Response: Sorry, but thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
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