Hermione knew this thing she had with Malfoy was purely physical. She knew she shouldn't have fallen in love with him. And she knew that when he said he loved her too, a dozen misfortunes would befall them. Yet they both did admit it and just when she thought this temporary relationship might just last, she was left all alone and he?...Well he became one of Them.
RUNNER-UP in the Dangerous Liaisons Awards for "The Where Did That Come From Award" (Best Twists and Turns) and WINNER in the He Had it Coming Awards.
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Okay, you have a decent plot here, but your tone is completely unPotteresque. Hermione sounds more like a catty American valley girl than an intelligent, practical witch. You also have a hard time maintaining past and present tense. This would be a very good fic, but it would have to be different characters than the ones you have now.
It's Voldemort's world now: a world of corruption, betrayal, greed, and violence. A world of evil thoughts and evil deeds, where no one can be trusted, especially those closest to you.
But through it all, there must be strength. There must exist those who will stand up to totalitarian rule, who will say no when others submit, who must survive despite their condition. There must exist the resilient.
Eventual Draco/Hermione with plenty of plot. Very dark, so read at your own risk!
Ho. Ly. Fuck. I just. Ohmygod. Favorite fanfic ever. Just . . . your descriptions! Your depth! Your subtleties! I fucking love it! You are killing me with amazingness!
Author's Response: Should I bring you back to life with more Dramione?? Lol. I'm so glad you enjoyed my work. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!
So, owing to the fact that you have completely spoiled me with your far too amazing fanficition writing abilities, I request more Dramione. A lot more. Soon? Please? :) Seriously, I'm dying here. I can't read any other fanfic without automatically comparing it to yours and, of course, finding yours far superior. Save me from my misery!
Author's Response: Ah, thank you!! Though there are so many fantastic authors out there - I am no where near the best one. I suggest looking at my favorites page for other fics and authors, and at the website Hawthorn and Vine for a really great collection of Dramione work. But I am working diligently on my next story! Thank you so much for your support!!!