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Aurors and Schoolgirls by Northumbrian
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 175]

Summary:
The Wizarding War is over.

Auror training has begun and Harry and Ron find that their lives are centred round London and the Ministry of Magic.

For Ginny and Hermione there is the inevitable return to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Their lives are centred round schooling in Scotland.

Do these divided duos have different destinations and divergent destinies? When, where and how can these parted pairings meet? Opportunities are limited to holidays, Hogsmeade visits and school Quidditch matches.

Nominated for: Best Post-Hogwarts (Chaptered) story - Quicksilver Quills 2012


Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Violence

Word count: 63239 Chapters: 16 Completed: No
Published:
05/15/10 Updated: 09/17/11


Reviewer: Tomasz Signed
Date: 02/17/11 Title: Chapter 1: Quidditch: Rejection, Selection

I’ve just recently started reading fan fiction because of my sister and I have to say that I’m really picky about what I read because I do not like reading stuff that’s not canon or seems too out of character. That being said I think you do a wonderful job at capturing the characterization of Harry, Ginny, Hermione, Ron, and so on. This is a great story that I have loved reading; I think it gives a believable insight as to what could have happened to them all after the battle and I am anxiously awaiting more. Of the stories that I have read on here yours are definitely my favorite. Thanks for the great stories (especially this one it’s my favorite) and I look forward to reading more of this as well as your other work(:

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.

Capturing the characters of Harry, Ginny, Hermione, Ron, and everyone else is the most important thing in writing. Although the plot, thatís the most important thing too. :-D JKR has dropped us enough hints, and weíve watched the characters grow up. Sometimes, I think that my Hermione is a little more uptight than she should be.

the bottom line, however, is that they are JKRís characters, and Iím a fan of the books, so Iím canon all the way. (Except for Chapter 20 of Tales of the Battle )-: I missed something when I reread the Battle timeline)

-N-

 

Strangers at Drakeshaugh by Northumbrian
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 279]

Summary:
The locals in a sleepy corner of the Cheviot Hills are surprised to discover that they have new neighbours.

Who are the strangers at Drakeshaugh?

Nominated for: Best Post-Hogwarts (Chaptered) story - Quicksilver Quills 2011
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Nominated for: Best Post-Hogwarts (Chaptered) story - Quicksilver Quills 2012

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 89668 Chapters: 21 Completed: No
Published:
02/17/11 Updated: 03/22/14


Reviewer: Tomasz Signed
Date: 04/11/11 Title: Chapter 4: Sunny Afternoon

Great story! It’s really interesting to read a story from a muggles POV. I loved the part where Henry is telling Jacqui about James poking another kid and saying “Stupidfly” I thought that was cute and made me laugh. This has been a really entertaining and enjoyable story so far and I can’t wait to see what happens next!(:

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.

Jacqui is an observant narrator and the Muggle POV is great to write. Itís very hard for a four-year-old to keep secrets, but (fortunately) itís also very hard for Jacqui to pick up on what James was really saying, especially when itís filtered through a second four-year-old.

-N-

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