0.0 This is certainly......different from most of the J/L storys I've read. This one looks like its going to be VERy good. Also,I love your writing style.
I like were this is going!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
This is certainly going to be good! I just hope you finish it....
Good story so far. I'm liking it! Please finish it!
I already love this Mr.Adamson.
Lily makes everything so complicated. I hope we see more of Lindy.
Good story so far.
cool,good story,nice writing style too.
I don't understand. Why'd Lily freak? I can understand her slapping him(To some extent),but not going to her bed and crying.
I'd have to be along Siriuses line of thinking about James being a virgin. Good writing,grammar,spelling,all that stuff.
Good writing,Grammar and spelling. As always.
Same as before. Good writing,Spelling,and Grammar.
Good writing,Spelling,and Grammar. So far,the plots looking pretty awesome too.
Oh no! Shannon was one of my favorite people. Remus,Lily,and James. In that order are my favorites. As always,Grammar Spelling writing AND story aare all awesome!
0.0 Isabel+Sirius=?????? Stay tuned folks,we'll find out!
NOOOOOO ITS GETTING CLOSE TO THE END!!!!
James+Lonely hallway with him and Stephen+Me in a corner=James slowly murdering Stephen with me clapping silently.
Noooooooooooo!!! Please write more!!!