Summary: The first war with Lord Voldemort is constantly getting worse; people are dying left and right, dementors are attacking people on the Death Eaters' orders, and nobody knows who is trustworthy anymore. Lily Evans, in her seventh year at Howarts, does not want to be a part of the war -- but some things are unavoidable.
Pretty good so far! SAdly,how you ever memorized your betas name is beyond me. I can't pronounce it,much less spell it...lol
I have to admit,I like your writing style. So far the storys....a bit bland. But thats to be expected as i haven't really got into it yet.
Best....Chapter.....Yet...... This is pickin' up a bit. Things still seem a bit too calm,do i sense i twist? Yup,somewhere in here its gonna happen.
Honestly,I agree. It started pretty good,but got boring. Fast. L/J romance. Sounds good. I would make this longer but....i like the romancy parts the best!
I kind of liked this one. Although i saw very little of that L/J romance you spoke of.
AS far as writing and such,it was good. This is just my opinion,but i didn't like the story in this.(Although when Moody said "Longbotton" My jaw dropped....I'll admit it.) I prefer when an author sticks to one or two characters.(Sorry if this was the only part you were going to write like this!)
Awesome,Awesome,awesome awesome chapter!!! James is straight up pissed. This is a pretty good story so far,even if that last chapter was my favorite.(Kinda sad i know) Seems a bit more....actiony than the rest of these J/L romances. Thats something....different.
Damn.....nice..... Is all I have to say.
Deathly Hallow was awesome. I assume these are 2 of those deaths you were talking about.
Depressing as hell. Thats my only comment as far as the story in that. Hmmm.....I just hope James and Lily go ahead and get together instead of this bs.
Good story! I saw one bad thing. James,on towards the end. He kinda of got....um...."Loopy"? Like he belonged in the Asylum instead of Hogwarts.
Summary: They are all talented, some more than others. Some play Quidditch. Others are known for their brilliance in academics. They are the Marauders and a group that has lain in the shadows up to now, called the Lady Firebrands, known for their hot tempers and rather subdued practical jokes.
Romance will bloom.
Rivalries will blossom.
The author will try to stop using so many bad plant puns.
The story of Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot, and Prongs' NEWT years will be told.
These are the Amphibious Lizards.
Aye aye aye aye aye....Lily is in one hell of a mess.
Yeah,I would've been Sirius in that same position at the end....except I would been calling them......"Obsentities"? I would've called them Homo's on lamens terms.
0.0 This is certainly......different from most of the J/L storys I've read. This one looks like its going to be VERy good. Also,I love your writing style.
I like were this is going!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
This is certainly going to be good! I just hope you finish it....
Good story so far. I'm liking it! Please finish it!
I already love this Mr.Adamson.
Lily makes everything so complicated. I hope we see more of Lindy.