Really important chapter,abd a really good one.
Bravo,Brava,Um....I'm not sure if theres another word for that. Heres my personal form of that:Fucking epic. Straight up. You are definitely my favorite author on this website,I'll Pick You Up and this(Someone To Watch Over Me) are my favorite stories on this website.(SO far,I've only read about 9 stories..lol Even if,can you email me copies of those 2? Blinkdawg15@yahoo.com) Thank you for being such an awesome writer!
Woohoo! James,you lucky bastard! I'm putting you on my favorite authors list,(Take pride in knowing you'll be the first!) And this story on my fav stories list. Along with I'll Pick You Up
I thought she wasn't dead. This can't exactly be considered a J/L romance if the L is dead.
Wow......This is really good as far as romance goes. I also really like your writing style. But for the romance.....I'm speechless. Which I've read some good romance stuff. And really and truly this might be the best romance I've seen in any writer. From Kids writers to those cheesy romance novels(That i hate with a passion,No pun intended)
This is a really good story. of course theres a typo here and there,but even the best mess up a tiny bit sometimes.
This is lookin' AWESOME!!
I didn't like the flashbacks too awful much. They were....depressing.
Haha,Awwww yeah! Bros before hoes! Sirius'es romance is something I'm looking forward to. Sirius,James,and Lily are my favorite characters.
Woohoo! GIve me more of this amazing story,by an even more amazing writer!
Good chapter. Lilys going a bit....Loony?
You realize alot of people are going to utterly...totally....entirely...hate your guts,you realize this? Personally,I think it was a nice twist,even if i do hope they're going to get back together.
Some serious shit just went down. This story is getting better and better.
One helluva cliffhanger.
Either,that delicate natured thing is....a present for James(I doubt it.) If ya get my meaning. Or,They're going to make a certainly Jackass named Andy pay. (This is more likely) I prefer the latter.
I don't like the memorys. I realize that they're a big part of the story,but they are a bit depressing. I kinda figured James and Lily would get back together.
hehehehe,Funniest chapter yet. Reading about Sirius Black scared out of his wits really made my day.
Aye aye aye aye aye....Lily is in one hell of a mess.
Yeah,I would've been Sirius in that same position at the end....except I would been calling them......"Obsentities"? I would've called them Homo's on lamens terms.