Daaaaaaaannnngggggg.....................is this even loosely based on the events in Pride And Prejudice? If so,I am SO reading that book!
Hmm,I don't like how this ended. No input from lily,although it'll probably be in the next chapter. Good spelling,and grammar.
This chapter was hilarious! I loved it! 3 people threatened to castrate*Shivers* James.
This is good. Some are just repetive,the same thing breaking them up and then they get back together the same way. This isn't that way at ll. Its quite awesome actually.
I was very confused at the beginning of this...lol. But it got better!
Personally,i enjoy the fluff about as much as the story.
I thought her talk with Dumbledore was good. Even if that run with Peter was boring, I realize it was a pretty important part of the story....kinda.
When she said Ted,I thought: Oh ****. Good chapter....kinda.
The memories are a bit depressing.
Damn,THAT was what i call one helluva cliffhanger.
Yet again. 0.0 is all i can say.
Romancey! Woohoo! Go James! Sirius,Mess them Death Eaters up!!!