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Semi Charmed Life by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 333 Reviews
Summary:

Within the Marauder band of Merry Men, Sirius is the dashing Will Scarlet. Seventh year, his goal is not to rob the rich, but to help poor Robin woo Maid Lily, avoid sermons from Friar Moony, aid a rat in need, and win the love of a fair lady.

Nominated for a Quicksilver Quill for Best Romance- Non Canon.

*Chapter 30 is 'To Be Loved'*


Reviewer: Blinkdawg Signed
Date: 02/07/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Wild One

This is going to be good. Its blatantly obvious.

Author's Response: Thank you! I love your pen name. You're not an ex-rapper from the 80's, are you? :D



Reviewer: Blinkdawg Signed
Date: 02/07/11 Title: Chapter 2: Differences of Opinion

Good grammar and spelling. Your writing is good,if a bit difficult for me to read.

Author's Response: Thank you! Difficult to read as in small print on the site?



Reviewer: Blinkdawg Signed
Date: 02/07/11 Title: Chapter 3: We Meet Again

Good story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review! When a story's complete, it's easy to just read straight through, so I appreciate your comments . . . especially when you like the story, hehheh.



Reviewer: Blinkdawg Signed
Date: 02/07/11 Title: Chapter 4: Life's Little Jokes

I support James/Lily.....and Snape/Bottomless pit of loneliness.

Author's Response: Not a Snape fan? I won't push my Snape/OC fic, then. :D



Reviewer: Blinkdawg Signed
Date: 02/07/11 Title: Chapter 7: One Step Forward

*Shudders* She was a witch for a reason.

Author's Response: And if she hadn't been one Walburga would still have been "witchy". Spelled with a b. :P



Reviewer: Blinkdawg Signed
Date: 02/07/11 Title: Chapter 8: In the Moonlight

Good writing,Grammar,and spelling.

Author's Response: Thanks! My first fan fic (on another site with no mods, heh) has dialogue formatting errors I still facepalm over. One day I might even edit them. :D



Reviewer: Blinkdawg Signed
Date: 02/07/11 Title: Chapter 9: Down in Flames

Ugh,I hate alchohol.

Author's Response: I like brandy in fruitcake, wine in pasta sauce, etc, etc, but drowing sorrows with the stuff doesn't seem a good idea to me, either.



Reviewer: Blinkdawg Signed
Date: 02/08/11 Title: Chapter 23: Night Before Christmas

Good writing! I love how you add humor in moments that are a bit intense. Nothing wrong with your spelling ,grammar,etc.

Author's Response: Thank you! Life is like that, humor lightening the mood, whether it's heavy or intense. Sometimes it's out of place, like at funerals, church, or after you've been pulled over for speeding, but mostly it's a good thing. :)



Reviewer: Blinkdawg Signed
Date: 02/08/11 Title: Chapter 30: To Be Loved

Good story,God-awful ending.

Author's Response: Too romantic, ending on Valentine's Day? I'm glad you enjoyed the story, but you might want to skip the all-romance one shot A Charmed Life and go straight to the Romance/Angst one shot about Sirius' escape from Azkaban, Far Away for Far too Long . (Story links inserted into titles, just in case. ;)



Is it Pride or Prejudice? by Stormbringer

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 339 Reviews
Summary: Lily Evans is confident yet unsure of her future. Who needs a boyfriend anyway when you've got awesome friends? But when James Potter finds a way into her mind and heart, slowly but surely, Lily finds what she missed in life. Love, loathing, friendships, and hardships are all components of this epic tale.
Reviewer: Blinkdawg Signed
Date: 02/06/11 Title: Chapter 1: Total Bliss and Happiness-Right?

This looks like it might be good. Good writing,Spelling,and grammar!



Reviewer: Blinkdawg Signed
Date: 02/06/11 Title: Chapter 2: Dates, Drama, and Dresses

When Emily put her dress on,I beleive the colour you were thinking about is Navy Blue



Reviewer: Blinkdawg Signed
Date: 02/06/11 Title: Chapter 3: Yet Another Potter Problem

0.0



Reviewer: Blinkdawg Signed
Date: 02/06/11 Title: Chapter 4: Before-the-Ball Worries

Good story,writing,spelling,and grammar!



Reviewer: Blinkdawg Signed
Date: 02/06/11 Title: Chapter 5: A Ball, Some Beaus, And A Horrible Disaster

Good writing adn stuff. Honestly,I think you did a good job. By most other authors this would've been a boring chapter. You made it........bearable.



Reviewer: Blinkdawg Signed
Date: 02/07/11 Title: Chapter 6: 'Tis the Art of Being Confused

Good writing,spelling,and grammar.



Reviewer: Blinkdawg Signed
Date: 02/07/11 Title: Chapter 7: Remarkable, Revolting Surprises

Hehe,one akward car ride,eh?



Reviewer: Blinkdawg Signed
Date: 02/07/11 Title: Chapter 8: An Evans, an Anderson, a Black, and the Potters

Good chapter! But...er.....setting Lily up with her cousin? Seriously,can you say fucked up?



Reviewer: Blinkdawg Signed
Date: 02/07/11 Title: Chapter 9: Changes

Good writing,Story,spelling,and grammar.



Reviewer: Blinkdawg Signed
Date: 02/07/11 Title: Chapter 10: Fights and Flights and First-Ever Kisses

James is going to go batshit crazy and beat his ass in the next chapter. If he doesn't,I will be sorely dissapointed.



Reviewer: Blinkdawg Signed
Date: 02/07/11 Title: Chapter 11: Why?

Worst....Chapter....Ever. If 'Willard" Trust me i have to make my self say that without hitting something,Doesn't get his ass kicked imma be pissed.