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01/25/11




Hello all,

So, as you can see, I haven't written an awful lot of fanfiction. I started two separate stories, they both ended up being approximately 50 pages long, but upon closer inspection, I decided that they were total crap :) So, instead, I decided to try a few short stories:

The Seizing of the Toad (WIP)
The Greatest Act of Love (WIP)
Blue Wig (WIP)
The Return (COMLETED)

This is somewhat unrelated, but could somebody that reviews my story please tell me how to get sorted? I tried getting sorted, but when I entered my user name and password, the system rejected it.

My wand is Redwood with a Veela Hair core and it is 14 inches long. Though according to the Celtic birth charts, I have and Elder wand *Insert evil laugh here* :}


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Moon by Northumbrian

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 24 Reviews
Summary:
**WINNER in the BEST ORIGINAL CHARACTER (Mark Moon) – Quicksilver Quills Awards 2010.**
Meet Mark Moon, a bailiff in the Department of Magical Law Enforcement (Scottish Office). Mark has girl problems, or a problem girl, he isn't certain which. The girl is named Lavender.
Reviewer: AngelEJC Signed
Date: 02/11/11 Title: Chapter 6: Zenith

Thank you so much for writing this story! I'm listening to 'Hallelujah' while I read this, it suits it perfectly. I read Bare too, you have typed two more perfect stories! Keep 'em coming!

AngelEJC

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. The chapters: Waning Moon; Epiphany and Fall; Seamus Awake and Parents (all Tales of the Battle) also form part of Lavenderís story. She will appear in MIT: Muggle Interface Team and High Moon too, when I finish them. -N-



Spontaneity by Northumbrian

Rated: Professors • 69 Reviews
Summary: Hermione (and Ginny) chose to return to Hogwarts to study. Harry and Ron joined the Auror Office. It's the Easter holidays, two weeks home from school for the girls, but their boyfriends are both working. The all important NEWT exams are approaching, Hermione's revision schedule is already carefully planned. Will she find time for Ron? What about Harry and Ginny?
Reviewer: AngelEJC Signed
Date: 05/29/11 Title: Chapter 4: Harry

I'm sitting here, giggling, as I write this review. I finally understand where "The Mind of Arthur Weasley" comes from! I have enjoyed this little piece if fluff as it balances out some of the asngst-y stuff I've been reading most of time :) You always seem to write stories which make me feel all fuzzy in side!

Keep up the good work!

Rebekah

Author's Response: Rebekah
Thanks for the review.

I hope that ďArthurĒ stands alone as a story. I have a vague idea of what is happening in everyoneís love lives, and when. This helps me keep the background relationships in perspective and, I hope, allows me to mature the characters believably. Even Lavender matures eventually.

I wonít always be writing fuzzy stuff. The sequel to Aurors and Schoolgirls will be more angsty.

-N-



Reviewer: AngelEJC Signed
Date: 03/24/11 Title: Chapter 2: Ginny

Very good (as usuall)! You rally do have a knack for writing Harry/Ginny; as a faithful reader, I can't be more pleased with your work. There is just something about this couple that draws everyone to them (yeah, I know, gag).

I refuse to say "once again" keep up the good work, thank you for updating regularly, and responding so promptly!

Rebekah (AngelEJC)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. JKR said ďAnd I feel that Ginny and Harry, they are total equals. They are worthy of each other.Ē They're her characters, so she should know. Who is going to disagree with that? Not me. -N-



Reviewer: AngelEJC Signed
Date: 02/14/11 Title: Chapter 1: Hermione

As regarding your chapter end notes:

1) Your welcome,

2) It was awsome,

3) GOOD!

AngelEJC

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. This one-shot is in the process of becoming a four chapter story (from four points of view). This chapter will be retitled Hermione, and the other chapters will be Ginny, Ron, and Harry. -N-



Reviewer: AngelEJC Signed
Date: 04/30/11 Title: Chapter 3: Ron

Oh, Ron! He is really quite endearing when he's not being a complete ass! You write Hermione/Ron very well when you want to.

I did not spot any errors in this chapter, you usually are very thorough.

So, yeah, the mods spat out my story. No rejection letter, so I must have missed submissions... figures. I'm just the blonde idiot from California.

On that note, I shall bid you adieu. Keep up the good work, please update often, you know the drill.

Rebekah (AngelEJC)

Author's Response: Rebekah (AngelEJC) Thanks for the review. I agree with your asessment of Ron. Iím not thorough, I simply know when to get help. You should see the versions my beta readers get! :-D -N-



Tales of the Battle by Northumbrian

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 299 Reviews
Summary:
Over fifty people died at the Battle of Hogwarts. There are dozens of stories of loss, betrayal, heroism and sacrifice. These are some of those stories.

Nominated for: Best General (Chaptered) story – Quicksilver Quills 2011

Reviewer: AngelEJC Signed
Date: 02/24/11 Title: Chapter 23: Ouroboros

You absolutely NAILED the Malfoys! These stories just keep getting better and better!

Once again, thank you for updating regularly!
AngelEJC

P.S.: Thank so much for responding to my reviews, it makes my day when I see I've received a response!

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.

Iíve decided that I like Cissie, sheís just so sneaky.

The readers of Aurors and Schoolgirls would disagree about regular updates, but with only two more tales left I will be able to concentrate on my other stories

I always reply to reviews. Itís only polite.
-N-



Reviewer: AngelEJC Signed
Date: 03/24/11 Title: Chapter 24: Paperwork

You have done a brilliant job with this chapter as usual!

Forgive me if I am taking liberties, but are you a dad? You seem to know alot about parenting and the feelings associated with such an occupation.

Keep up the good work, thank you for updating regularly, and responding promptly.

Rebekah (AngelEJC)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I think that the answer is obvious, especially if you read First Sight and Sleepless Night. -N-



Reviewer: AngelEJC Signed
Date: 02/18/11 Title: Chapter 22: Broken Flint

I never even thought about the Slytherins after the Battle of Hogwarts, much less Milicent, Goyle, and Flint!

Thank you for your advice, it really has helped me a lot! I have gone back and rewritten all 50 pages of my fic into something more satisfactory. I currently have three betas (my best mate, my sister, and a fellow HP fanatic from my horse stable) and I'm going to send it in to the beta board also.

Thank you for your advice and keep the stories coming!

Sicerely and gratefully,
AngelEJC

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Marcus, Millicent, Miles and Gregory make such a good team, don't they :-) Good luck with your writing. -N-



Reviewer: AngelEJC Signed
Date: 02/13/11 Title: Chapter 21: Snakeslayer

Once again, you have typed another favorite. Keep up the good work!

AngelEJC

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Perhaps this would have been a good place to stop, as the remaining chapters are rather depressing. -N-



Reviewer: AngelEJC Signed
Date: 03/31/11 Title: Chapter 25: Index

Wow. The final chapter. It's over, fin, ended! I can't believe it. Months and months of checking the Most Recent section religiously are over!

WOW.

You know, I never even thought of Madam Pince. This entire story has been an eye opener for me, most of the characters in these chapters never even crossed my mind. Thank you for not forgetting those characters in the sidelines, for, without these people, the magnificent world of Harry Potter that we love and cherish would be infinately less colorful.

I thought that you should be the first one to know (since you gave me that infinately useful advice a couple of months ago) that I have finshed my first fanfic. I just have to send it off to one more person, then I shall send it off to the mods and eagerly await its posting!

WOW.

Rebekah (AngelEJC)

Author's Response:
Rebekah

Thanks for all of your reviews. Some of these stories are very important for my future history. Certainly writing these has helped me define several minor characters for my other stories. Some canon characters (Terry, Lavender and Susan) and some original characters (Mark and Polly) will reappear frequently.

The minor characters are great to play with, many of them are little more than names.

Thanks again, and good luck with your writing.

Neil



Rescue Mission by Cinderella Angelina

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 6 Reviews
Summary: Seamus Finnigan jumps at the chance to rescue some younger students from detention. Padma Patil is his trusty partner in crime. Will they be able to save the kids without getting caught?

I am Cinderella Angelina of Hufflepuff and this is my final for the Missing Moments class on the MNFF Beta Boards.
Reviewer: AngelEJC Signed
Date: 02/17/11 Title: Chapter 1: Tagging Along

Wonderful fic! Seamus is one of my favorite characters and I think that you did him justice!

AngelEJC



The Girl from DRaCo MC by Northumbrian

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 16 Reviews
Summary: Office work is, in the main, boring and monotonous. But sometimes something unexpected happens.
Reviewer: AngelEJC Signed
Date: 02/21/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Girl from DRaCo MC

Wonderful as ever!

AngelEJC

Author's Response: Thank you. -N-



The Two Left Behind by the opaleye

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 13 Reviews Past Featured Story
Summary: In the dead of winter, two friends continue their hunt for something they may never find.

Nominated for a 2011 Quicksilver Quill Award in Best General Story.

Reviewer: AngelEJC Signed
Date: 02/18/11 Title: Chapter 1: Is it any wonder I can't sleep?

Two words:


LOVED IT!!!!


Three words:


Keep 'em coming!


Thank you!
AngelEJC

Author's Response: Thank you :)



Strangers at Drakeshaugh by Northumbrian

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 335 Reviews
Summary:
The locals in a sleepy corner of the Cheviot Hills are surprised to discover that they have new neighbours.

Who are the strangers at Drakeshaugh?

Nominated for: Best Post-Hogwarts (Chaptered) story - Quicksilver Quills 2011
and
Nominated for: Best Post-Hogwarts (Chaptered) story - Quicksilver Quills 2012
Reviewer: AngelEJC Signed
Date: 03/29/11 Title: Chapter 4: Sunny Afternoon

Oooh, this is REALLY getting good! I've checking religiously to see if you have updated. Last chapter I thought the crap was really going to hit the fan, but you have managed to somewhat diffuse the situation somewhat thus far.

I finally managed to order Quidditch Through The Ages and Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them on Amazon. They are in the mail as I write this *happy dance*! I have many friends of mine who can't wait to get their nuts on those books that I might have to barricade myself in my room to read them!

Keep up the good work!

Rebekah (AngelEJC)

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Iíve called the next chapter ďTea and BiscuitsĒ and it should be ready soon. What will Jacqui notice inside Drakeshaugh?

Rereading ďFantastic BeastsĒ led to me writing ďThe Girl from DRaCoMCĒ and ďE.C.C.E.N.T.R.I.C.Ē (and a lot of maths about the possible age of Rolf Scamander).
-N-



Reviewer: AngelEJC Signed
Date: 04/12/11 Title: Chapter 5: Tea and Biscuits

Mary is not going to know what hit her ;-) I can't wait 'til you post the next chapter! I have been waiting on tender hooks for you to post something, anything, all week! Thank you! As soon as I'm done with this review, I'm going to go check out M.I.T.

I don't know if you really care, but I read a Harry/Ginny fic the other day and thought that you might enjoy it. It's called "This Means War!" by Jeconais, it's on phoenixsong.net. Honestly, I thought that I was going to break a rib laughing! It's got some fluff, action, and humor all mixed in it at the most opportune moments. I understand if you really don't care, but let me know if you decide to read it!

Rebekah (AngelEJC)

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.

Iím getting some interesting theories about what will happen next, though (unsurprisingly) no one expects Mary to do well. M.I.T. is nowhere near as fluffy as this. Iíve tried submitting to Phoenixsong but, unless itís changed, they donít accept new authors (and heven't for years), so I rarely visit.

-N-

ps Itís tenterhooks, not tender hooks. Donít worry, itís a mistake Iíve seen a lot of people make (I still get confused about discrete/discreet).



Reviewer: AngelEJC Signed
Date: 05/02/11 Title: Chapter 6: School Gates

I'm sitting here still sniggering at "Mrs. Saville's" public verbal thrashing, for want of a better term. I still get a kick out of all the things that we pick up that Jaqui completely disregards. It still completely makes my day when I see that you have updated, I am DANGEROUSLY low on reading material.

I only noticed one error in this chapter:

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.

My Ginny has more than a little Molly in her; public verbal thrashings are no problem. Jacqui is observant, but (fortunately) not too inquisitive. Harry and Ginny will be constantly trying to come up with explanations for something James has said. What about the werewolf murders?
-N-



Reviewer: AngelEJC Signed
Date: 05/02/11 Title: Chapter 6: School Gates

I'm sorry! It keeps cutting me off before I can finish!

The error:

Author's Response: Still not getting it. Why not check out the e-mail address you used when you registered with the site? -N-



Reviewer: AngelEJC Signed
Date: 03/21/11 Title: Chapter 3: Misty Morning

I'm writing this with a big grin plastered on my face because of Annie's antics! I only noticed one typo in this story: you forgot to capitalize Ginny's name in one spot. I'm typing this up on my Dad's cell phone, so I can't cntrl-C and cntrl-V for you, sorry :(

I am still trying to decipher the anagram (?) on Harry's helmet. You hinted that it had something to do with Ginny sand that has helped enormously! Thank you!

I finally got my mom to break down and listen to the Harry Porter audiobooks. She is HOOKED! In the span of a week and a half she has listened to SS, CoS, PoA, and GoF. She has just reached Harry's trial in OotP, she is about to meet Um-bitch *AHEM* excuse me Umbridge ;-)

I am eagerly awaiting your next update!

Sincerely,
Rebekah (AngelEJC)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I made one minor change after the final beta-read, and I added a typo! Typical!
Harryís t-shirt Ė it isnít an anagram. If I say ?ARPIE? is that a big enough clue?
-N-



Reviewer: AngelEJC Signed
Date: 02/21/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Drop Off

As a faithful reader, I am quite pleased with your work. Thank you for updating regularly and keeping your stories as "real" and in character as possible.

Keep 'em coming!
AngelEJC

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.

The Potters as they appear from a Muggle perspective = fun!

-N-



Reviewer: AngelEJC Signed
Date: 03/05/11 Title: Chapter 2: The Pick Up

Hello again!

All I have to say is awwwww :) Well, other than that, I do think you're right, Harry and the rest of the Potter clan are VERY interesting and fun from a muggle point of view. I'll have to remember that...

I actually have something that I wanted to ask you: have you ever read a story on this site and then go back and it's gone? I was really enjoying this story "The Greatest Power" by MuggleMomma, I wrote reviews, added it to my favorites section, etc. I went back yesterday to see if chapter four had been posted, and the story had vanished. I used the site searcher and couldn't find it, it was GONE from my favorites section as were my reviews, and evey trace of it is gone! POOF! I e-mailed the site administrator, but haven't heard back yet. I really liked the story...

As always, keep up the good work, thank you for answering my reviews, and HAVE FUN writing!

~Rebekah (AngelEJC)

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. This is a lot of fun to write (though also hard work). I love throwing in stuff which (I hope) readers will spot, but Jacqui doesnít. Harryís bike, is of course, Siriusí and the t-shirt heís wearing (--RPI--) is, of course...

Iíll be honest, I read very little fanfic. Iím sure that the mods will help. I know (from experience) that when youíre banned from HPFF all your stories are deleted and you become an unperson. Iím certain that this site is much more mature. But any author could pull their stories. I could delete all of mine.

Neil