An avid reader that can enjoy great literature when put in front of her, but is not so great at writing it!
‘Thou shalt not sin’ – Bible
Sirius knows what he wants and he’s not afraid to chase it. She makes him feel more than he’s ever felt before, but getting what he wants may cause him more heartache than he ever imagined. Thus begins a thrilling game, a game of vice and virtue, of betrayal and affection, of sin and atonement.
The forbidden fruit tastes the sweetest.
Oh my gosh!!! I absolutely love this story!!!! Everything that makes you feel anything just perfectly fit together in a brilliantly written story! Love love love it!
Sirius, Caris, James, Lily, Peter and Remus are finished with school forever, and are busy tackling problems like buying houses and getting jobs, and, all the while, news of this so-called ‘Dark Lord’ and his Death Eater followers becomes more and more prolific. And when tragedy strikes, it has the tendency to either bring people together or push them irrevocably apart. As everything they know changes, can they save one of their own?
Because ultimately, they’re still playing the same game. The game of love and betrayal, vice and virtue, sin and atonement.
And some things are just unforgivable.Sequel to Sin
I adore how you add to the depth of the characters. Great, again! :) Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter(s)!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I always try to think INCEPTION when I write - I've got to go deeper. :D
James Potter has changed: no longer an arrogant, irresponsible prankster, he has matured into a responsible Head Boy with tops marks in Transfiguration. Lily Evans has changed as well: normally studious and in control, she has lost focus as she struggles with Head Girl responsibilities and N.E.W.T level studies. An unexpected encounter in the corridors one weekend leads to several startling realizations, the least of which is that things have definitely changed between James Potter and Lily Evans.
This story was nominated for a 2010 QSQ and is now complete.
I loved it!!! Once I started I couldn't stop! Fantastic writing. I absolutely adored how you portrayed each one of the characters! Great story!!
I really love each chapter! You really do a good job of showing each characters personality traits very well and how their interactions with the other characters impress on them. Love it! Keep up the fantastic work!!
Author's Response: Thanks! :) I really try to imagine how the traits of the Marauders and Lily mentioned in canon would shape their character, so I'm glad you think I'm succeeding so far. Thank you for the detail in this review, especially—I like finding out what people notice about the story.
Really good! I like every chapter!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :D I'm glad you like it. Reviews always make my day infinitely better haha