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Summary: Past Featured Story

Seventh grader Alexandra Quick returns to Charmbridge Academy. This year she faces bullies from another wizarding school, a secret Dark Arts club, and the machinations of her father, but her greatest trial yet awaits her in the dangerous Lands Below.

This is the second book in the Alexandra Quick series.



Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Mild Profanity, Violence

Word count: 235074 Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/26/08 Updated: 06/03/09


Reviewer: Lucien Moody Signed
Date: 01/09/11 Title: Chapter 37: Enemy of the Confederation

I would like to say thank you. I read Hogwarts houses divided and thought it was the best out of what I had read in mugglenet, it was just so well written. I had already seen the Alexandrea Quick series about and never thought it was to my taste, but since you were such a good writer I thought I would give it a shot. It was good; but this was phenominal. Alexandrea really developed into a character you could empathize with, Max was a joy to read about and the whole story was phenominal. It twisted and turned and I can't think of praise high enough. I think drawing comparisons to someone elses work with the Harry Potter books its stupid; it does'nt acknowladge the writer as a stand alone talent, but I truly felt more sorrowful at the death of Max than Sirius. There are hundreds of moments that were trully brilliant.

I cannot give thanks that is good enough. You've made reading this a joy. Thank you.

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Alexandra Quick returns to Charmbridge Academy for eighth grade, angry and in denial. Unwilling to accept the events of the previous year, she is determined to fix what went wrong, no matter what the cost. When her obsession leads her to a fateful choice, it is not only her own life that hangs in the balance, for she will uncover the secret of the Deathly Regiment!

 This is the third book in the Alexandra Quick series.



Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Mild Profanity, Violence

Word count: 204741 Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/28/10 Updated: 06/14/10


Reviewer: Lucien Moody Signed
Date: 01/31/11 Title: Chapter 31: Seven Years to Live

That was amazing, thank you so much. For some reason Alexandra seems so much less like a little girl and more grown, but I suppose thats intentional. The story now seems to have a clear ark and is really interesting.

So thanks again :) x

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