Great start. Very descriptive, I especially liked your take on the 16 year-old Sirius. He sounds quite dreamy. It makes sense that Remus would have felt some envy towards Sirius (and James for that matter) and I liked how you wrote that in. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Merci, tu est tres gentil! So sweet of you.
Brilliant. I haven't had that much fun reading fanfic in a long time. Loved Hermione in her robes and hat when Uncle Vernon came running out. Pure fun!