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Wow, Natalie! That was a really great chapter. I love how you had both sadness and laughter next to each other. It was a great contrast of moods. Ellie's heartwarming tears right next to Fred, George and Ron getting drunk was perfect. I was laughing during that last scene; my mom was asking me what I was laughing at! Thanks and I'm going on to read the next chapter.
Sorry I haven't reviewed the other chapters, but I can review this one and I really liked it. I loved how you are putting in all of your theories into this fic and explaining how and why you think they will happen. I also loved that you added Fred and George finding out about the Maurauders. I never really thought about the fact that they don't know yet. And the whole Ginny and Harry bathtub thing was really funny, too. You are doing a great job writing all the characters and not making them OOC. Awesome chapter, I cant wait to read the rest and I will try to review more often!
haha, that was really great! It's a creative idea. I can't wait for your next update.
It was full moon when the Dark Lord sealed a part of his soul within a magical amulet, and then broke it in half. One half was left to the faithful werewolves to guard. The other half was tossed into the impenetrable depths of time where no one but him could get it. When the first half has been found, the Order of the Phoenix selects Hermione Granger to go back into the past to search for the missing piece. What is waiting for her is a brutal task that will test her beyond her limits, and an undying love that extends beyond the boundaries of time.
No werewolves were harmed in the making of this story.
Update (9 May): Chapter 17, Burning, is up! Enjoy!
Lei, I love it so far!! I've been meaning to read this for a long time, and now I finally have the chance. It's extremely well-written and original, but I don't know why I would expect anything less from you.
That was so sweet, Lei! It was very well-written and you did a nice job of capturing the character's personalities. It was very moving and sad in a sweet way! Nice job!
I get to review first! *cheers* You did such a good job! Oh, and sorry about PMing you the same thing twice (dumb computer). Anyway, awesome job. Something that I noticed this time around while reading it is that near the end, Dumbledore called Sirius by his first name. This is just some advice, but I think changing that to 'Mr. Black' might be better. Sorry I didn't notice it before!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I think that signals the change of their relationship. That he considers them now as his confindente and soon-to-be fellow members of the Order, that's why I left it there. And thanks again so much for betaing.
It's Seventh Year, and the new Headmaster has decreed that students must take some sort of course to fulfill the new Art Requirement. Our favourite characters have decided to take Drama. What kind of hilarity will ensue when the night of the first dress rehearsal arrives? Expect Hagrid as a Tree, Ron as Godric Gryffindor and Malfoy as the Amazing "Dancing" Ferret.
Ron/Luna, Prof. Pat/Hermione, Blaise/Himself
Wow, Haley! You really are someone with many talents! Not only are you an amazing banner maker, but you are also an amazing writer. This was such a hilarious one-shot and I loved it! The more I read the more I laughed, especially Hagrid being a tree. Too funny. My brother was just asking me what I was laughing at and I had to tell him that he wouldn't understand (he isn't a HP fan) and now he is looking at me like I am a freak, but it is all worth it! Great job!
This poem was so beautiful, Elysa! I'm not a huge H/Hr shipper, but this was very well-written and it flowed so well. Amazing job!
Wow, that was great BL! It seemed like such a realistic story about what it's like when a muggleborn is accepted to Hogwarts. It was sweet and lightly funny, and I just loved it! One thing is that the actual viewing of the story is a bit spaced out. I think what happened was that you tried to edit something, and for some reason whenever you do that it adds a bunch of breaks in the paragraphs. At least, that's what happens to me. Anyway, awesome job!
Author's Response: Jules, thank you! Yes, I\'m aware of the spacing problem; others are experiencing it, and the problem has been reported. I\'m sure the wonderful mods will find a solution. :)
Oh, very nice, Sophie! The plot was so creative. I couldn't imagine living my whole life and then finding out that there were secrets about myself that I didn't know about. I loved the ending sentences. I also love the banner you made for it. Great job!
Oh, Catrin! I loved it! The way you wrote it was so wonderfully unique and creative. I really like the title you chose, too. It was just so powerful... Great job!
Aw, that was really sweet! It was beautifully written. I liked how Ginny asked Harry to dance instead of the other way around, because it holds true to her character and personality. The ending was great, too. Nice job!
Author's Response: Thank you!! I\'m glad my review from the Badger Review Circle was so nice!
Very cute first chapter! I love reading about Lily's first years at Hogwarts since we mostly just get her later years in the series. My advice would be to work hard and try not to get into the typical cliches of the Marauders and Lily. I think it'll be a fresh look on the Maruader's Era if you put in original thoughts. Good luck with your next chapter, and if you need an extra boost from a beta just let me know! Now that I'm on break I have some free time...
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I made an advertisement for a beta for this fic, but if you are willing, I could send you chapter 2 for you to look over. PM me if you are interested (my forum username is also SnowyHedwig112).
aw you made my day. thanks so much.. it has been forever since I've written fanfiction, but you made me remember how much I used to love it