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Harry Potter and the Unspeakable Power by mrsgeorgeweasley

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: After the trauma of his sixth year Harry and his friends enter into their last year of magical education at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. The trio try to balance passing their exams with fighting Voldemort and planning their futures. Despite all that, romance will fill the air with wedding bells ringing out. This year Harry is in more danger than ever when his enemy finds new ways to try and get the Boy Who Lived. Voldemort’s presence will be felt more than ever as he steals more lives; can Harry find himself before its too late? And what adventures will he have along the way?

If you haven’t read Harry Potter and The Girl Who Lived then I would strongly urge you to do so because if you don’t then this story probably won’t make any sense to you. Be helpful to writers by Reading and Reviewing!

The very last chapter of this fic has been reworked. Please re-read there's more about the kids in there! Also my author's notes on the final chapter have also been added. Ten part fic related to this going up shortly!!
Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 02/19/06 Title: Chapter 8: Graves

Wow, Natalie! That was a really great chapter. I love how you had both sadness and laughter next to each other. It was a great contrast of moods. Ellie's heartwarming tears right next to Fred, George and Ron getting drunk was perfect. I was laughing during that last scene; my mom was asking me what I was laughing at! Thanks and I'm going on to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 01/15/06 Title: Chapter 4: The Second Return

Sorry I haven't reviewed the other chapters, but I can review this one and I really liked it. I loved how you are putting in all of your theories into this fic and explaining how and why you think they will happen. I also loved that you added Fred and George finding out about the Maurauders. I never really thought about the fact that they don't know yet. And the whole Ginny and Harry bathtub thing was really funny, too. You are doing a great job writing all the characters and not making them OOC. Awesome chapter, I cant wait to read the rest and I will try to review more often!


Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 01/03/06 Title: None

haha, that was really great! It's a creative idea. I can't wait for your next update.

Clair De Lune by Astrid Skywalker

Rated: 6th-7th Years •

It was full moon when the Dark Lord sealed a part of his soul within a magical amulet, and then broke it in half. One half was left to the faithful werewolves to guard. The other half was tossed into the impenetrable depths of time where no one but him could get it. When the first half has been found, the Order of the Phoenix selects Hermione Granger to go back into the past to search for the missing piece. What is waiting for her is a brutal task that will test her beyond her limits, and an undying love that extends beyond the boundaries of time.


No werewolves were harmed in the making of this story.

Winner of 2007 Quicksilver Quills Awards - Best Non-Canon Romance

Update (9 May): Chapter 17, Burning, is up! Enjoy!

Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 12/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Amulet

Lei, I love it so far!! I've been meaning to read this for a long time, and now I finally have the chance. It's extremely well-written and original, but I don't know why I would expect anything less from you.

Flying Without Wings by Astrid Skywalker

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The final war had lasted for several years, but has at last ended. The Dark Lord has been vanquished, and peace has once again been restored to the wizarding world. Harry Potter wakes in a closed ward at St. Mungo's, weak and gravely injured. His life is dangling off a thin line, but he finds strength in an old friend, and a rekindled love that has been put on hold during the age of chaos. One-shot, romangst.
Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 02/20/06 Title: Chapter 1: Flying Without Wings

That was so sweet, Lei! It was very well-written and you did a nice job of capturing the character's personalities. It was very moving and sad in a sweet way! Nice job!

For Light Shall Prevail by joanna

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: It is the last year of Lily and the Marauders at Hogwarts. The year when Lily and James get friends (first They are Head Boy and Head Girl, but they will have other duties than being responsible for Prefects and helping to keep the order at Hogwarts. The Order of the Phoenix is taking shape (ever wondered when that picture of Moody’s was taken?) and Voldemort is rising.
Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 01/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: -

I get to review first! *cheers* You did such a good job! Oh, and sorry about PMing you the same thing twice (dumb computer). Anyway, awesome job. Something that I noticed this time around while reading it is that near the end, Dumbledore called Sirius by his first name. This is just some advice, but I think changing that to 'Mr. Black' might be better. Sorry I didn't notice it before!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I think that signals the change of their relationship. That he considers them now as his confindente and soon-to-be fellow members of the Order, that's why I left it there. And thanks again so much for betaing.

Hogwarts: A Musical by QueenHal

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: A SPEWish Covert Cupid for TheVanishingAct. Happy Valentine's Day, Professor Pat!

It's Seventh Year, and the new Headmaster has decreed that students must take some sort of course to fulfill the new Art Requirement. Our favourite characters have decided to take Drama. What kind of hilarity will ensue when the night of the first dress rehearsal arrives? Expect Hagrid as a Tree, Ron as Godric Gryffindor and Malfoy as the Amazing "Dancing" Ferret.

Ron/Luna, Prof. Pat/Hermione, Blaise/Himself

Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 03/28/06 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Wow, Haley! You really are someone with many talents! Not only are you an amazing banner maker, but you are also an amazing writer. This was such a hilarious one-shot and I loved it! The more I read the more I laughed, especially Hagrid being a tree. Too funny. My brother was just asking me what I was laughing at and I had to tell him that he wouldn't understand (he isn't a HP fan) and now he is looking at me like I am a freak, but it is all worth it! Great job!


Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 02/20/06 Title: None

This poem was so beautiful, Elysa! I'm not a huge H/Hr shipper, but this was very well-written and it flowed so well. Amazing job!

A Wizard in OUR family? by Blossomlily

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Kenneth Anderson’s just received his Hogwarts letter and his family’s gone over the top about it. Can he make it to Hogwarts in one piece? A light, funny tale of a simple and slightly delusional Muggle family one of whose younger ones is about to enter the world of magic. One-shot.
Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 06/22/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Wizard in OUR family?

Wow, that was great BL! It seemed like such a realistic story about what it's like when a muggleborn is accepted to Hogwarts. It was sweet and lightly funny, and I just loved it! One thing is that the actual viewing of the story is a bit spaced out. I think what happened was that you tried to edit something, and for some reason whenever you do that it adds a bunch of breaks in the paragraphs. At least, that's what happens to me. Anyway, awesome job!

Author's Response: Jules, thank you! Yes, I\'m aware of the spacing problem; others are experiencing it, and the problem has been reported. I\'m sure the wonderful mods will find a solution. :)

A Potter and a Riddle by Sophie_McKinsley

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Katherine had lived with Ms. Evans as long as she could remember. She'd went to a Muggle school as a child and Ms. Evans had began teaching her magic when she was twelve. Katherine didn't know why Ms. Evans wouldn't let her go to a proper wizarding school or have wizarding friends; Katherine just thought she was batty. It had been a happy, peaceful life. But now at age seventeen, the Dark Lord has finally caught up with them.

Please review!
Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 04/23/06 Title: Chapter 1: Never the Same

Oh, very nice, Sophie! The plot was so creative. I couldn't imagine living my whole life and then finding out that there were secrets about myself that I didn't know about. I loved the ending sentences. I also love the banner you made for it. Great job!

Passive Murder by Catrin

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A moment's bad decision can cause a world of destruction...

What happens when Susan Bones goes aginst her badger instincts and chooses fun over others?

Submitted by Catrin of Hufflepuff for the Poetry challenge number 2 - "Apathy is Lethal"
Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 04/23/06 Title: Chapter 1: Passive Murder

Oh, Catrin! I loved it! The way you wrote it was so wonderfully unique and creative. I really like the title you chose, too. It was just so powerful... Great job!

Breathing by mugglegurl

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: On the night of Bill and Fleur's wedding, Harry and Ginny have a serious talk about their relationship. Song-fic to Yellowcard's "Breathing." One-shot.
Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 06/20/06 Title: Chapter 1: Breathing

Aw, that was really sweet! It was beautifully written. I liked how Ginny asked Harry to dance instead of the other way around, because it holds true to her character and personality. The ending was great, too. Nice job!

Author's Response: Thank you!! I\'m glad my review from the Badger Review Circle was so nice!

The Thoughts of Lily Evans by SnowyHedwig112

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Lily Evans has just started attending Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, and she has a lot to deal with. Homework, teachers, friends, fights. But above all...she must deal with James Potter. The insufferable git who follows her around and insists he is in love with her. Follow Lily through her first year as she deals with these things. What will happen?????

Update: Chapter 3 is in progress!
Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 12/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: Who am I? Lily Evans.

Very cute first chapter! I love reading about Lily's first years at Hogwarts since we mostly just get her later years in the series. My advice would be to work hard and try not to get into the typical cliches of the Marauders and Lily. I think it'll be a fresh look on the Maruader's Era if you put in original thoughts. Good luck with your next chapter, and if you need an extra boost from a beta just let me know! Now that I'm on break I have some free time...

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I made an advertisement for a beta for this fic, but if you are willing, I could send you chapter 2 for you to look over. PM me if you are interested (my forum username is also SnowyHedwig112).

Cross My Heart by Jules_411

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
What if you always knew the answers – the results of your decisions before making them? Then you could answer this:

Does everything happen for a reason?

Can love replace what is lost?

Can a promise be kept forever?

Would you cross your heart?


Thousands of thanks to my AMAZING beta and friend, Maddy (Hatusu)!! Her fic, Take My Heart Away, is simply the best piece of fanfiction I've ever been lucky enough to read. You're honestly missing out if you haven't read it yet.

Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 01/06/11 Title: Chapter 1: Cross My Heart

aw you made my day. thanks so much.. it has been forever since I've written fanfiction, but you made me remember how much I used to love it