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I'm so sad it's over! It was so good! The ending was great and really sweet, too! This is one of my favorite stories. It has so many twists and it's intense at some parts, and light-hearted at others. Great Job!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. And while this is over, I still write many more stories. I hope to see your comments and reviews on some of them in the future.
I knew it was Neville! This story is so good! I never realized that. if James and Lily were alive, they would be so proud of Harry! Throughout the series, Harry's parents were dead, but this story made me think how proud Harry's parents would have been! Does that make any sense? Well, this story is really good and I cant wait to keep reading
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear you feel that way. It was one of the objective with this, to give James and Lily the chance to see their son, to see that he turned out alright.
This chapter was so great! It was sad and sweet! You wrote the emotions great and added an awesome plot twist. This story is so great because it is so creative! I love it! I feel really bad for Millie, but Harry is so sweet!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you think I do emotions well, they are by far the hardest to write :D
poor james... he has no clue... I hope he finds out soon! It is so sad that he thinks harry hates him. great chapter!
Author's Response: You'll see soon enough...:)
ok, the reason why I didnt review in the earlier chapters was because I couldnt stop reading. I was on the computer for an hour reading it. It was so good! I loved it! You wrote all the characters perfectly and it was a very creative and unique fic. Awesome job!
That was so funny! I loved it, cant wait to read more! Poor Ron and Harry, but they should have known better. You are a great writer and you wrote a great story about two sad, sad teens! lol.
Another great chapter! good job, harry is so stuid!
Great! Sorry i am not writting longer reviews, i just want to finish your story....
great story! it flowed so well and the spell was a good twist! Awesome!
really good so far! cant wait to finish reading!
Author's Response: Thanks!
This is a really good story!! I cant wait fot the next chapter!
Author's Response: thanks
Wow, that (like the rest of your fanfictions) was really funny! You should really write a book! You remind me a lot of one of my friends (dont worry, that is a good thing!) because of your humor. But if you seriously publish a book, let me know!
That was a good chapter! It was really sweet. How did u know, or guess, about Lupin and Tonks? That was really cool! Cant wait to keep reading!!
Author's Response: I don't think i really knew or guessed about Remus and Tonks. I just figured that they both loved Sirius and that his loss would bring them closer together. Not in a romantic sense just as friends but then i started thinking about the two of them together and i realized that it was a pretty good combination, i mean Tonks is lively, care free and fun but she's brave and loyal too, Remus is kind, caring, sweet, sensitive and all those Gryffindorish things as well and it just seemed to me that they would compliment each other really well. Remus is old before his time, he needs someone to make him laugh again and Tonks can do that.
This story rocks! I tottaly love it! Is it over or is it continued on the sequel? If so, I am going to go read it now! I am so glad that he proposed! Its so sweet!!
Author's Response: It's carried over to a sequel, Harry Potter and The Unspeakable Power, which has four chapters up at fanfiction.net. I'm glad that you are enjoying it!
I know i just posted, but I was wondering if you are going to write more to your first story, Harry Potter and the Girl who lived? I just wasnt sure, because it is so good, i want to know the end!!! Oh, and I just understood the title (i am kinda slow) and it is so cool! thanks
Author's Response: I am indeed going to write more, The Girl Who Lived has 39 chapters and there will be a sequel to it called Harry Potter and The Unspeakable Power. I've got 33 chapters of it at the minute and roughly another five to go. There's also at least two one shots spinning off from it. One of them is going to be titled 'I've Got Some News... ' and the other is 'Welcome To The World', i may do others but as it stands those are the two that i've got planned thus far. As long as you understand the title at some point it doesn't really matter how long it takes you to get it, i can be really slow too :-)
WOW! Excellent, one of my favorite chapters. I liked the whole tihng about Ellie being able to do the defense spell and everything, sounds like foreshadowing...well, anyway, cant wait to keep reading!
Author's Response: 'Sounds like foreshadowing...' You could be on to something my dear Watson! Hopefully the next chapter will be up at the beginning of next week.
Another awesome chapter! Cant wait till you post the next one!
Author's Response: I promise to post ASAP, i'm glad that you liked it!
These last two chapters were so intense! They really made me want to keep reading! The cliff-hangers were great because they left you hanging with tons of questions floating around like, Will Ellie survive? or How did Voldemort's curse work out? The many twists are great too. I hope the next chapters are as good as these last ones, but I know they will be!
Author's Response: See, it think that's why i write the cliffies, i forget that you guys don't know everything that i do because i have all the answers (in relation to the story at least). I think the last chapters are pretty good, but then i would, my beta was very impressed by the ending to the second to last chapter, she said it was very dramatic. You don't have long to wait to find out if that's true.
I'll be in it, except for I didnt really save Harry, just my neighbor by introducing him to Harry Potter. Does that count? anyway, awesome cliff-hanger! I also agree that I loved what Lupin said to Harry. He said some good quotes. omg! I cant wait to find out what happens!
Author's Response: That counts, welcome to the club! I'm a bit of a philosopher in my spare time, i like reading up on all those inspirational kind of quotes so i had to work them in. You won't wait long, i promise!
This story is just so good! I love it! It just keeps getting better and better! Cant wait for more!!!!!!
Author's Response: Your reviews are great too and i can't wait to see more of them in the very near future!