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Summary: She sat alone in front of the fire at the Burrow. The final battle had occurred many months before and yet she was still reliving the memory. This is a one shot, Ginny remembering Harry.

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1531 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/06/04 Updated: 11/06/04


Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 03/17/06 Title: Chapter 1: The One and Only

I think you did a nice job. You captured some of the intensity of the battle and you were very descriptive. Here are just a few things that stuck out to me: [i] Voldemort bowed, shocked, recognizing for the first time ever that Harry was now his equal, or possibly even his superior. [/i] I think it is a bit unlikely that Voldemort would think of Harry as his equal. Maybe he could have bowed with an amused look on his face, like he was just mocking Harry. [i]Cho Chang lay next to a fallen Death Eater; as did Michael Corner, Seamus Finnegan, Dean Thomas, and even Luna Lovegood, the girl everyone made fun of was lying behind Neville, she had obviously died protecting Neville. Brave Neville, thankfully stood amongst them all, wand pointed at the now limp body of Bellatrix Lestrange. [/i] This sentence was a bit of a run-on and maybe instead of using the name 'Neville' you could add a pronoun. Here is what I mean. [i]and even Luna Lovegood, the girl everyone made fun of[b],[/B] was lying behind Neville[b].[/b] she had obviously died protecting [b]him[/b][/i] Okay, I am hoping these codes will work and I don't look like a really stupid person who puts random codes in the middle of the sentence. So, what I did was I added a comma after the phrase 'made fun of', I placed a period after 'lying behind Neville', and I added a 'him' and took out 'Neville' during the last part. [i] Ginny stared into the fire, unable to breathe, wondered if she would ever breathe again. Her chest was constricted with pain, her breathing harsh, when she felt it. She felt like she was being wrapped in the tightest hug of her life. [/i] I really liked this description. It captured Ginny's emotions very well. I hope this sort of helped, and all in all, I really liked your fic! Nice job and I look forward to reading some of your other works.

 

Quirrell by The Savant
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 24]

Summary: What did Quirell do that infamous day in Book 1? My first story, please read and review.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3230 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/11/04 Updated: 11/11/04


Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 03/17/06 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

That was a really funny fic. What really got me laughing the first time was the (insert name here) part about Quirrell. I liked it a lot and thanks for making me laugh!

 

Always Stick Together by hattiepotter
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 346]

Summary: 6th year. Harry and Ginny's friendship quickly turns into something more and they have to struggle through the Second War together. Trials and tribulations, drama, cuteness, excitement and a chunk of mystery.
Now completed with over 6000 reads! Thank you!

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny, Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 31860 Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/21/04 Updated: 05/10/05


Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 07/30/05 Title: Chapter 13: The Last Night of the World

That was awesome! i added it to my favorites. There was so many ideas in it and it was just great! I loved it! I liked how it sort of left you hangging at the end. 10 stars!

Author's Response: Hanging on to the sequel! Thanks for there review. Glad you liked it. The prologue to "I'll always be with you" is up now, and I'm currently typing up chapter 1!

 

The Dungeon Scene by Head_Fwooper
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 20]

Summary: Harry, Hermione, Luna and Snape have all been accidentally locked up in a dungeon at Hogwarts with know way of making communication with the outside world. Who will go mad first? When will Luna stop fingering her damned Butter beer necklace? How many fights will Harry and Snape endure before one discovers the use of a silencing charm? And, most importantly, what was that mysterious ball of light? Iím crazy. This was a challenge submitted by Seren and can be viewed on MNFF forums at http://fanfiction.mugglenet.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=14. Attempt it and you can be crazy too!

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3938 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/12/04 Updated: 12/12/04


Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 03/17/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot challenge

You did a really nice job. You did a good job of staying in character and it was also funny. Great job!

 

Summary: This a story about Harry and his friends in their 6th year. It take's place after JK's OOTP. THe charaters and concept belong to JK Rowling and I am just using her great works as an output for waiting for her next book.







I do think you will enjoy this story. I have gotten many positive reviews. Alot of reviewer says it reads like if JKR wrote it herself. I am not that good, but I do appreciate the kind review.



This is an action adventure, with a touch of romance. I have tried to stay true to JK' orginal works, but there could be inconsistancies. Forgive me, for I am merely a muggle.

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 57602 Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/14/04 Updated: 03/27/06


Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 08/09/05 Title: Harry Potter and the Balancers of Death: Book 6

I loved this story! It is one of my favorites! If you and JKRowling worked together for another book, it would be the best one yet!! Oh, and did you ever say what curse Sirius put on Harry and what blessing Minerva put as the countercurse?

 
Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 08/07/05 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19- A New Day.

that was one of the best fan fictions ever! You are a great writer!! Truely amazing! You should definately send it to JK Rowling to read! 20/10 stars!!!

 
Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 08/06/05 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Gracious Hosts

Amazing! So many ideas! Did you write this after book 6 came out, because some of the details sound the same as HBP. Awesome story though! I am going to go finish reading it!!!

 
Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 08/06/05 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- Family

Awesome chapter. the christening story sounds a little like Sleeping Beauty, but it is still awesome. I loved the whole christening conversation! how did you think of all that? great!!!

 

Mistletoe and Ginny by hattiepotter
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 135]

Summary: Harry is looking forward to spending Christmas at The Burrow, but there's an unexpected present under the mistletoe which comes as a bit of a surprise... A lot of fluff, a little anger and copious amounts of happiness! Set in the trio's 6th year, Ginny's 5th.

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 11653 Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/20/04 Updated: 06/17/05


Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 08/03/05 Title: Chapter 6: A New Leaf

that was so good!

Author's Response: Thanks!

 

O Holy Night by innocence_wasted
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 136]

Summary: A shock comes at the end of Hermione's fifth year and it will forever change her life. As she and her friends enter their sixth year, amid the second war, a frightening prophecy is made. A prophecy which will alter the Wizarding World and bring about a Christmas no one will forget.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 29310 Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/27/04 Updated: 06/17/05


Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 08/17/05 Title: Chapter 5: Lone Lay the World

May I use your story O Holy Night to make a soundtrack for, for an assignment on the Forums. If you dont know what I;m talkin about, then go to the forums, go to the Great Hall, than click on Sticky: Quarterly Assignment- Fanfiction Soundtracks. Thanks!

 
Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 08/17/05 Title: Chapter 5: Lone Lay the World

May I use your story O Holy Night to make a soundtrack for, for an assignment on the Forums. If you dont know what I;m talkin about, then go to the forums, go to the Great Hall, than click on Sticky: Quarterly Assignment- Fanfiction Soundtracks. Thanks!

 
Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 08/09/05 Title: Chapter 5: Lone Lay the World

That was really good! It was so sad and sweet! I loved it!

 

Ginny's Love by The Marauder
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 412]

Summary: After Sirius' death Harry is in his own private world of misery, but with Ginny's love and a plan to bring together his best friends, he is brought back to reality with much more than he expected...

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 21905 Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/01/05 Updated: 08/14/05


Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 08/15/05 Title: Chapter 3: The Morning After

this chapter was really funny, well, at least i thought it was funny, i liked the split POVs. i think u should keep doing them... ok, back to reading!

 
Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 08/15/05 Title: Chapter 12: Written in the Stars

i loved the story! it was really sweet.

 

Summary: I'm sorry guys but this story will no longer be updated. See my profiel for reasons etc.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 9119 Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Published:
01/15/05 Updated: 10/06/05


Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 08/09/05 Title: Chapter 6: Kisses

really good! It seamed a little unrealistic at the beginning, but the last two chapters were really sweet!!!

 

Summary: Mere weeks after OOTP's end, we find Harry in his room. He is unwilling to do anything but lie in bed, demoralized by the loss of Sirius. That is until he receives a letter. This is an AU fiction with some anghst and pairings of Hermione/Ron and Ginny/Harry. Humor is my primary focus however. Story complete. There is a sequel: "The Deepest, Most-Desired Wish." You can find it in the Dark/ Angsty section.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Violence

Word count: 55076 Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/17/05 Updated: 03/14/06


Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 08/12/05 Title: Chapter 1: The Letter

Good start. I'm kind of curious, so i'll continue reading!

 

Spirits in the Future by JessicaH
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 587]

Summary: Voldemort attacks the Potters, James and Lily try to protect their beloved baby boy. Then suddenly they're in a house they do not know. Harry isn't with them and they don't know what happened. Where are they? And who are the redhead children running down the stairs? Why have they been sent? The story is placed in the future, years after Voldemort's death, but danger is still lurking. Features Harry/Ginny and Ron/Hermione.

Joint winner in the genfic category of the Multifaceted Fanfiction Awards

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 108188 Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/27/05 Updated: 11/17/05


Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 10/13/05 Title: Chapter 1: Our Grandchildren?

Wow, this fic is great so far! This story was suggested to me by many people so I decided to check it out and I am very glad I did! I can't wait to keep reading

Author's Response: I'm so glad you think so. I'm looking forward to see what you think about the rest of it as well.

 
Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 10/14/05 Title: Chapter 7: Hogwarts

wow, that was so good! This story is awesome! Ok, who was Harry's friend who saved his life from Voldemort? Did I completely forget what happened in the books or are you going to get to that later? Just wondering because I thought I might have missed something. anyway, great story! i would read more now, but it is midnight, so i'll be back!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad you think so. And no, you didn't miss something from the books. You'll find out more later...

 
Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 11/05/05 Title: Chapter 24: Face to Face

Wow! That was such a good chapter! It was so intense! Great Job!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

 
Reviewer: Jules_411 Signed
Date: 11/05/05 Title: Chapter 25: Battlefield

Great Job again! But, I might have missed something or I might just be kind of slow, but why is the potion so important?

Author's Response: Can you think what the ministry might do with a potion like that in there hands? I doubt very much that Harry as a child to an illegal animagus want them to have that kind of power.

 
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