I am a girl and a high school senior.
and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)
-E. E. Cummings
September 2012: HEY guess what I couldn't wait, and the third installment, "World Enough," is UP NOW under James/Lily. Or just under my name. Or at this link: http://fanfiction.mugglenet.com/viewstory.php?sid=92131. Yay! :D
i loved the chapter! it was an absolutely adorable date!!!! but it can't always be happy i guess =( Keep up the good work!!and i can't wait for the next chapter!
i have a feeling that the nest chapter or two are going to be very entertaining. i love the way you characterize the marauders. the way that they react to each event or idea really follows my idea of what the characters are really like. i cant wait for the next one!!!
i LOVED the new chapter! and the way that you had them get together. anxiously awaiting the next chapter!!!
i know i haven't reviewed in a while but i have been keeping up to date with the chapters and checking back for updates. I love the story! your characterization never ceases to amaze me. i am looking forward to the next chapter!!!
so I saw this was up at about midnight last night and really should have been sleeping because I was supposed to have a midterm this morning (thank goodness for the snow day!!!) but of course I had to read it. I loved it! I really like the characterization of Lily and the friendship between Lily and Sirius. I really hope that Lily and James get back on the right track now. I also liked Remus' realization at the end about Peter. When I am reading your story I feel like I am reading a real book not an amateur work of fiction. I am anxiously anticipating the next chapter but i am hoping it will go uphill from here.
i really love the ending and i can't wait to see if james realizes that it wasn't a dream or if leda finds out and if this will make them finally get together. though he didn't mean it is very cruel to lily to kiss her with the feeling she has for him, that she can't act on because now she knows he feels the same way.
Author's Response: ...heh heh. well, i can't really say anything. but you'll find out soon! :)
This wait is absolutely unbearable!!! it is even worse knowing it is in queue because i know it could pop up at any time!
You made my day with the comments that the next chapter will be up soon! i'm sooo excited!
Author's Response: it's in queue now! thanks for waiting :)
i was never a member of this website,i just read the stories without ever writing or commenting but this is the first story that i am reading as it is published. I dislike waiting for the next chapter to come out which is why i generally only read completed stories,however i loved your last story trickster. and i can never pass up reading a sequel. i love the last few chapters especially though i of course, cannot wait for Lily and James to get together. i like how the marauders are depicted and it is not just about James and Lily.
i enjoyed the chapter as always and i really liked how you made them feel awkward with each other because it is an odd situation. Keep on writing and congrats on completing your year of school.
i love how you made them get together in a moment of uncertainty guided by emotions rather than the reason that seems to be holding Lily back. i love this story and you are a superb writer and i am anxiously awaiting the new chapter! keep up the good work!