and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)
-E. E. Cummings
September 2012: HEY guess what I couldn't wait, and the third installment, "World Enough," is UP NOW under James/Lily. Or just under my name. Or at this link: http://fanfiction.mugglenet.com/viewstory.php?sid=92131. Yay! :D
I loved this chapter! The character development was great. It was so nice to get insight into what Sirius and Remus are thinking while everything's going on. And at the same time a lot happened with James and Lily. Perfect justification of why James would be with Leda at that point in the chapter. And it was perfect the way Lily realizes her feelings for James.
Also the reference to Professor Lupin was brilliant.
Author's Response: oh, thanks so much! i know, i felt really bad putting them--and all of you!--through this, but you know. you gotta go there to come back :P
Ch. 15 was definitely worth the wait :)
I loved it, my favorite chapter so far in this story.
Amazing! I loved this story. It was really good. There were some very funny lines I laughed at, especially in the beginning. Cute Lily and James interaction, you may get this a lot, but you really should write this paring again. And it was good to see Professor Dumbledore sum up what was going on at the end. The last line was perfect :)
Author's Response: I write James Lily quite a lot, actually. It's just that generally it's under the Marauder category. You might like 'Sixth Time's the Charm' or 'First Date Disaster' and 'Veils'- they're James/Lily. Thank you for the review ~Carole~