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The Start Of A Life Of Lies by ZephyrDragon

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 5 Reviews
Summary: What if Draco had seen his father for who he really was right from the beginning?
Harry's visit to Madam Malkin's from Draco's point of view.
Reviewer: nodeath4curious_cats Signed
Date: 12/01/10 Title: Chapter 1: The Start Of A Life Of Lies

A very fresh premise, and the hint of anxiety in Narcissa as she leaves him to go to Knockturn Alley felt very real. I understand your overall message, but the last sentence was a bit abrupt. The meeting did not really build to a climax such that he would be "preparing to live a lie" with such finality.

Never Forgiven, Never Forgotten by savvy33

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 9 Reviews
Summary: Ginny is forced to choose between her husband and lover. Will she choose the Lion or the Snake?

*H/G, D/G* *One-Shot*
Reviewer: nodeath4curious_cats Signed
Date: 10/23/11 Title: Chapter 1: Never Forgiven, Never Forgotten

the story reads nicely (the changes from one situation to another aren't abrupt, which can happen sometimes). i'm not sure that i believe the characterization of harry and draco though. i can't picture harry leveling an ultimatum like that at the end, and draco has too many demons to be unconditionally warm.