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The Start Of A Life Of Lies by ZephyrDragon
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: What if Draco had seen his father for who he really was right from the beginning?
Harry's visit to Madam Malkin's from Draco's point of view.

Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 1075 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/07/10 Updated: 11/23/10


Reviewer: nodeath4curious_cats Signed
Date: 12/01/10 Title: Chapter 1: The Start Of A Life Of Lies

A very fresh premise, and the hint of anxiety in Narcissa as she leaves him to go to Knockturn Alley felt very real. I understand your overall message, but the last sentence was a bit abrupt. The meeting did not really build to a climax such that he would be "preparing to live a lie" with such finality.

 

Never Forgiven, Never Forgotten by savvy33
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 9]

Summary: Ginny is forced to choose between her husband and lover. Will she choose the Lion or the Snake?

*H/G, D/G* *One-Shot*

Categories: Draco/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Epilogue? What Epilogue?, Sexual Situations

Word count: 1892 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/26/11 Updated: 06/28/11


Reviewer: nodeath4curious_cats Signed
Date: 10/23/11 Title: Chapter 1: Never Forgiven, Never Forgotten

the story reads nicely (the changes from one situation to another aren't abrupt, which can happen sometimes). i'm not sure that i believe the characterization of harry and draco though. i can't picture harry leveling an ultimatum like that at the end, and draco has too many demons to be unconditionally warm.

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