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Much More Than A Game by Hypatia
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 87]

Summary:
“Lord Voldemort has never had a friend, nor do I believe that he has ever wanted one.”
-Dumbledore, HBP, ch 13

Dumbledore was rarely wrong, only once did Lord Voldemort desire a friend. It started out as only a game, but became so much more…

This is the story of how the teenaged Tom Riddle met a unique individual and slipped from cold indifference, to affection, to friendship, to romance. Discover how even Voldemort’s cold and callow heart was once broken beyond repair. This is for anyone curious about how an imperfect love warped and twisted a corrupt young man into the Dark Lord.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Character Death, Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Suicide, Violence

Word count: 106968 Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/16/11 Updated: 09/29/12


Reviewer: juniper Signed
Date: 02/17/12 Title: Chapter 15: Shadows and Souls

Thank you for responding to my review. Looking forward!

Author's Response: No problem! (In case it wasn't incredibly obvious, I LOVE reviews, though I suspect all the authors on the site do.) I'm aiming to have the next chapter up later this week (although I'm considering re-editing so, that might be overly-ambitious on my part).

 
Reviewer: juniper Signed
Date: 04/29/12 Title: Chapter 22: Balance of Power

Great job. I'm amazed at your excellent and fully believable portrayal of Voldemort (and Lydia) - she's the perfect girl for him! Please make them end up together? Or at least part in a non-terrible way?

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you like Lydia. Unfortunately, I think you already know how this has to end. :S

 
Reviewer: juniper Signed
Date: 03/08/12 Title: Chapter 18: Vows

How horrible. I don't think Lydia would like this at all.

but wonderful writing on your part, Hypatia!

Author's Response: I think this is the darkest chapter I have ever written and alternately worried that it was either too fluffy or too dark, so I'm glad that it sounds like it came out dark enough. While Lydia certainly wasn't a fan of Charlotte, she most definitely would not approve of what happened to her. However, Voldemort tends to think that what Lydia doesn't know won't hurt him. ...which is what got everyone into this mess in the first place.

Thank you very much for your review,
Hypatia

 

Summary: As Albus' parents wave him off from Platform nine and three-quarters they are happy in the knowledge that their son's time at Hogwarts will be a far less trying one than their own. However, in due course, Albus will discover that there are those who would wish differently. As Albus and his friends Rose, Frank, Effie, Theron, Xander and the mysterious Tristan make their way through the year they slowly discover who is friend and who is foe and most importantly, that not everyone is as they seem...

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 67859 Chapters: 14 Completed: No
Published:
08/06/11 Updated: 08/13/12


Reviewer: juniper Signed
Date: 04/27/12 Title: Chapter 10: It's My Party

This story is so good that I wanted to wait until it was completed to read it. But I saw you didn't get reviews on this chapter, so I decided to review - please continue! I'm really enjoying your character development.

 
Reviewer: juniper Signed
Date: 04/27/12 Title: Chapter 11: Secrets

Finally, something is happening! You kept on foreshadowing something going on, but I couldn't figure out what. Maybe add some more action? Otherwise great writing, keep it up!

 

The Drakeshaugh Dragon by Northumbrian
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 25]

Summary:
Al Potter is a brave and world famous Auror, but sometimes, he still needs help from his dad. Especially when faced with his brother, and a dragon.

Nominated for: Best Next Generation (Chaptered) story - Quicksilver Quills 2012


Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 10342 Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/07/11 Updated: 11/02/11


Reviewer: juniper Signed
Date: 11/06/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Visitors

I love all your stories, but looking forward to your finishing the other one!
You must be a father to write so well :)
I hope you read this to your kids!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
More “Strangers” soon, and more Moons and A&S too.
I plead guilty to fatherhood, and to reading to my kids. But I've never read them my own fanfics.
-N-

 

While You Tell Me Stories by Dawnie
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 108]

Summary: In a world ruled by blood and money, James Potter has never once been denied anything he wanted, except Lily Evans. With neither blood status nor money, Lily can only rely on her vibrant personality to force others to see her worth. As their final year at Hogwarts ends and they are forced out of school, both find that the real world presents challenges that hadn't been expecting and problems they don't know how to overcome.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 149402 Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/24/11 Updated: 01/12/13


Reviewer: juniper Signed
Date: 01/03/12 Title: Chapter 7: What Bothers Me

LOL'd at Vanessa, winced at Peter. Good job! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! Vanessa's going to stick around for a few chapters, so there will be more of her. And more of Peter's dilemma as well.

 

The Accidental Parents by Ruby Emeralds
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 75]

Summary: Snape and Celie are awaiting the birth of their children in the third sequel to The Accidental Godmother, but all is not what it seems in the tiny village of Honeysuckle, England.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Book 7 Disregarded, Sexual Situations

Word count: 63709 Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/29/11 Updated: 12/25/11


Reviewer: juniper Signed
Date: 12/26/11 Title: Chapter 8: Epilogue

Great job! really enjoyed.
try to go easy on the romance though!

Author's Response: I'm really glad to hear that you enjoyed the story! :) Thank you for the review! Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

 

Hunters and Prey by Northumbrian
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 191]

Summary:
February 2000 Newly Qualified (in record time) Auror Harry Potter remains obsessed with “The List.” The ten people still wanted for their part in the Battle of Hogwarts. Their capture is essential. It will bring closure to the events of the past few years. Harry has set himself a target. He wants to see “The Last Death Eater” and the other nine captured before the second Anniversary of the battle. His attempts to meet his target will bring heartbreak, danger, pain, and a lifechanging injury for one former DA member.

Nominated for: Best Post-Hogwarts (Chaptered) story - Quicksilver Quills 2012


Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 124760 Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/25/11 Updated: 01/04/14


Reviewer: juniper Signed
Date: 11/24/11 Title: Chapter 3: The Hunt: Wolf Hunt

Wow! I always enjoy your stories - well thought out AND well-written!

Author's Response: Thank you. -N-

 

For the Greater Good by phoenix-inferno
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: "Did I know, in my heart of hearts, what Gellert Grindelwald was? I think I did, but I closed my eyes." When Albus Dumbledore met Gellert Grindelwald that fateful summer in Godric's Hollow, their lives were forever changed...

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2823 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/18/11 Updated: 11/26/11


Reviewer: juniper Signed
Date: 11/27/11 Title: Chapter 1: For the Greater Good

well written. I enjoyed.
I think your characterization was perfect.

 

Real Nightmare by KimTomPW
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: An AU story about Harry's worst nightmare.

Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 4500 Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/04/11 Updated: 03/04/12


Reviewer: juniper Signed
Date: 01/02/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Worst Memory

A bit choppy, but keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks

 

For Hogwarts: A Regency Gamble by Subversa
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 71]

Summary: After the war, Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry is in a financial bind. Special Ministry worker Hermione Granger is on site with a team of helpers, full of fundraising ideas, and it seems that Headmaster Snape objects to her very presence there. What prizes will be carried away by all those who embark on Miss Granger's madbrained Regency gamble?

Categories: Hermione/Snape Genre: Warnings: Epilogue? What Epilogue?, Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity

Word count: 120691 Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/08/11 Updated: 01/15/12


Reviewer: juniper Signed
Date: 01/08/12 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Excitedly awaiting the result of this chess match! you did a good job building up suspense.

 
Reviewer: juniper Signed
Date: 01/08/12 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Yes, I had meant to write that this is the first fanfic I have seen with a believable suitor for prof. trelawney!

 
Reviewer: juniper Signed
Date: 01/10/12 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Hmmm. very interesting ending! Thanks for putting up 2 chapters! I will now go back and review the first, but was too interested to stop between!

 
Reviewer: juniper Signed
Date: 01/10/12 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great job!

 
Reviewer: juniper Signed
Date: 01/10/12 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I dislike the slash, but otherwise nice to see his relationship developing. Thanks for updating!

 
Reviewer: juniper Signed
Date: 01/01/12 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

very well written.

 
Reviewer: juniper Signed
Date: 01/01/12 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

well done!

 

The Real Magic by goldensnidget92
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 31]

Summary: Past Featured StoryThis is a story about a love of books. It is a story about a boy and a girl united by this love.


Perhaps there's a reason why Hermione Granger values frienship so strongly. Perhaps there's a reason why Hogwarts: A History means so much to her. And perhaps there's more to her life before Hogwarts than we have been told.


This is her story.

This story was nominated for a Quicksilver Quill Award 2012: Best General Story!


Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 16760 Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/21/11 Updated: 05/24/12


Reviewer: juniper Signed
Date: 03/08/12 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Books and Betrayal

Great job! I'm really enjoying this.

 
Reviewer: juniper Signed
Date: 03/08/12 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Loving and Loathing

Great job!

 
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