I liked the scene with the kiss in the drawning room in the dark with no one around..I found it sexy.. ;))
and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)
-E. E. Cummings
September 2012: HEY guess what I couldn't wait, and the third installment, "World Enough," is UP NOW under James/Lily. Or just under my name. Or at this link: http://fanfiction.mugglenet.com/viewstory.php?sid=92131. Yay! :D
I started reading Trickster and Stars Apart ten days ago and I can't find something as fantastic as your stories!!!!
You are very talented and you keep us in high interest!!!!! keep going!!!
I liked the moment between the two sisters and I hated one more time Petunia for being so bad and jealous to her sister...!!!
I'm so mad at Leda...she poped up at the wrong moment!!!
Author's Response: Haha i think she has a knack for that
Eventually James matured..:) I loved the dance scene in the end :D
oh my Goood!!!
I felt like crying in the end!!!
Will there be more things in the next chapter about the whole situation?? I mean,you know, will the stars stop being apart any more??
you're fabulus!! keep going!!!
Author's Response: of course they'll be more! i mean, no spoilers here or anything, but this is definitely not just a random occurrence ;)
will things go better for Lily and James or is it going to be more awkward?
I love that they are together now :D
Willow?? Is everything ok???
We,your fans-or admirers,choose whatever you like ;)-can't wait for the next chapter to come!! I'm sure it will be wonderful as always :)))
Take care :)
Author's Response: hey, yeah, the next chapter is about 3/4 of the way done...sorry it's taking so long, but real life has to come first sometimes :/ should be soon!
It was the best ending in all chapters you've written!! It was so romantic...A kiss caused by Lily's fear of losing James once and for all !!! This fear was a factor that sped up Lily to make her move!! I'm so glad she made that step !!!
Oh and you shouldn't feel guilty of keeping us waiting for the next chapter!!Real life goes first and you don't have to apologise for that!!
Once more you did a great job!! Keep going!! :)))
I think this is the kind of date all girls would like to experience!
Author's Response: :D ....just saying
Ohh..I'm so glad everything goes to the right direction!!!
Bye bye Leda!!! :PP
I like that you prepare the situation for Peter's betrayal-you know,the one from J.K.Rowlings story,the reason Voldemort found Potter's house and killed them!
I hope you'll update soon!!
Don't be sorry for being late!! True life goes first and I hope your friend will be ok ;)
FINALLY!! Finally they are together! Lily took the situation into her hands for the first time and that was really interesting...!!! I liked that they slept together and that they chose to go together in class in order to show to everybody that they are dating!!
I can't believe that Lily just denied it!!!!!!!
oh my god!!!!!
and James could be even more mature....he can;t just do that to Peter first of all!!!!!
ohh...please hurry if can...I can;t wait for the next chapter!!!!!!
You are an incredible writer!!!!keep going!!! :)))
Author's Response: thank you! finals are finally over, so i'm working on the next chapter now...and yeah. they both have some issues at the moment ;)
Quite a strong chapter..well done!
How inventive the whole werewolf-potion thing was!! Another great chapter!
Author's Response: aww thanks! and the next one is already in queue :)
I think that things are going to be okay in the next chapters..at least this is what I got from this one..!I liked Mary's come back..it made sense and it looked natural!!
Looking forward for the next one :))
Author's Response: it may head in that direction :) should be soon! i've got a transatlantic flight wednesday, so hopefully i can bust out a good chunk of the rest of this story, so updates can be regular again!
I know I have reviewd recently but everyday I take a look to your reviews and I couldn't resist to write once again..
You are indeed an exceptional writer and I am so touched by this story,Trickster and Stars Apart..Your ideas, your way of presenting the facts and characters...are just great..!!!
I love Lilly's character and I like the way James and Sirius have grown up..
I know that a good word will make you stronger and more inspired maybe so I will tell you the same thing you told in chapter 12 for us,the reviewers, "You rock,too" so keep going!! We are with you!!! :DDD
Sorry for mistakes in grammar or spelling but you know I'm not British or American and it's not always easy.. :P
It was so funny!!
I enjoyed it :))
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it was so funny! Thanks for reading it :D ~Midnight Storm
It was a very appealing scene-the last one...so touching...
I liked it very much!!I can;t wait to read your next-longer I hope-story about Lily and James..They are my favorite couple :)))
Author's Response: I love them too! I wish I had a James.....*sigh* haha. Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'll definitely try to write a longer one!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)