So... Luna, or lethifold?
this is really cool, i love the last bit! I can't help laughing at the way they all speak, especially lily and cecily, they are all so formal. Keep going you're doing great.
Author's Response: haha, thank you! :] and yes, they are indeed very formal, but with Lily and Cecily I'm trying to convey the sense that they grew up in very proper, structured type households. I hope that's coming across without seeming silly or out of character [in Lily's case] or something.
So far this story really reminds me of the film "John Tucker Must Die". Has anyone else seen it? Anyway love it so far, great job.
Oh, this is just brilliant! Keep going, I really like it.
Are you a witch? Because I i don't know how you get these chapters finished and you are still in school.
Anyway, this is fantastic! You have some serious talent!
Author's Response: I'm thinking that I am a witch! Either that or I stay up really late because I feel really bad when I haven't posted in a while :) Plus, homework isn't that important, right? Just joking... stay in school kids. And thank you! I'm pleased that you like the story! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :]
Are you a witch? Because I i don't know how you get these chapters finished so quickly and you are still in school. Anyway, this is fantastic! You have some serious talent!
Author's Response: Double post! Win :D
Thankyou, thankyou for making me feel happier than i have felt in ages.
Your story has made me laugh, and has shown me that people can change who they are.
Author's Response: Wow, I'm so glad that I could help =) It's really wonderful hearing that Snowflakes has made a difference. Thank you so much for that lovely review <3 and I'm glad you're happy! xox
Harry Potter had seen death - a lot of death. Friends had passed in his lifetime, more so than any one person should ever experience, but how much is too much, even for the Chosen One?
Ron Weasley is dead, leaving behind his wife and his best mate. How can these two cope with their Trio being cut down to two? And when danger lurks in the shadows, can they find the strength to fight for one another?
Oooooh! Cliff-hanger! I hate cliff-hangers! Why are you doing this to me?
Great so far though! :D
I do sort of make a living off of cliffhangers, don't I?
I'm almost done with a new chapter, so there should be an update in less than a week. I'm glad I have you ensnared in mah ebil trap. Thanks for reading!
and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)
-E. E. Cummings
September 2012: HEY guess what I couldn't wait, and the third installment, "World Enough," is UP NOW under James/Lily. Or just under my name. Or at this link: http://fanfiction.mugglenet.com/viewstory.php?sid=92131. Yay! :D
aargh! i hate cliff hangers!
loving the story though, please write the next chapter quickly... (makes puppy dog eyes)
Author's Response: it's coming! i promise :) i have like a week and a half off from Real Life right now, so hopefully I'll actually be wrapping this story up by the end of the summer.
this is really great! im so glad that it ended on a happy note because i really hate worrying so much while i wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: haha thanks...yeah, the next chapter's mostly done, but i'm trying to restructure it a little so it doesn't end on a cliffhanger (agaaaaain) cuz i know that's really annoying :P hopefully it'll be up soon though!
i love the twist of events. its great!
when the death-eater tells Lily that she is "one of them", does he mean muggleborns? Wow, I can't wait!
Marty Pyttin's wand is broken. It does not work as well as it used to. It does not please him any more. He takes it down to Ollivander's-- who, unfortunately, is dead, decased, ceased to be, and has left his rather incapable assistant, Ollivander Jr. in charge of Britain's best wand shop.
A mash-up, mix-up and rip-up, er, off of the legendary Monty Python sketches Hungarian Phrasebook, Cheese Shop and Dead Parrot, set in the wizarding world. Irrevocably silly.
i hate to say, but this didnt make me laugh.