Nice one-shot. Being the Malfoy lover I am I couldn't help but smile (and be a bit jealous that I'm not the only Malfoy lover) that you put him twice. (Also loving that you added in the twins; but who's deepest desire is Colin?) :) Keep writing!
you captured draco brilliantly. harry seems slightly different, though. this was an amazing story all together. keep writing!
this was so sweet. i love it! :) well written and funny. keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I am still writing. -N-
TOM RIDDLE â€“ THE SELF-STYLED LORD VOLDEMORT
Editors Note: At the request of the Ministry for Magic this Official Statement issued by the Office of the Minister is produced full and unedited.
OFFICIAL MINISTRY STATEMENT
This official statement has been compiled with the assistance and co-operation of Mr Harry Potter.
â€śLord Voldemortâ€ť was, in fact a man named Tom M. Riddle, son of a witch, Merope Gaunt and a Muggle, Tom Riddle Senior. The Ministry has decided that in all future official publications Riddle will be referred to by his given name.
There has already been much speculation and wild rumour regarding the events at Hogwarts School. The Ministry can confirm that Tom M. Riddle was killed at dawn on the morning of Saturday, 2 May. Riddle was disarmed by Harry Potter while in the act of firing a killing curse at Mr Potter. The curse killed Riddle rather than its intended target.
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WHERE IS HARRY POTTER?
Despite the Official Ministry Statement (published above) we are no closer to receiving an answer to the question on the lips of every witch and wizard in the country. Where is Harry Potter?
It appears that Mr Potter left Hogwarts School early yesterday morning, apparently in the company of his close associates Hermione Granger and Ronald Weasley. An attractive young Ministry clerk, who did not wish to be named, told The Prophet â€śHeâ€™s at the Ministry, having an important meeting with the Minister. My friends and I saw him. He asked us out to the pub, but we had to turn him down.â€ť This statement is at odds with a report from the Portkey Office that Mr Potter has fled the country, travelling to Australia with his companions.
Continued on page 2The days after the battle were days of grief and mourning. Grave Days.
this was very sweet but also very sad. during fred's funeral i couldn't stop crying, you described it beautifully. i do have one question. what happens with seamus and lavender? i always thought that they were meant to be.
possible story idea :)
Thanks for the review. Fred's funeral was difficult to write until, I finally decide where the cemetery was.
I have written about Seamus/Lavender (though mostly Lavender) in other stories. All of my stories are linked. You need to read Tales of the Battle (Chapter 12 - Epiphany and Fall, and 13 - Seamus Awake.) followed by the one shot Bare and finally (for the moment)Moon. -N-
It's Voldemort's world now: a world of corruption, betrayal, greed, and violence. A world of evil thoughts and evil deeds, where no one can be trusted, especially those closest to you.
But through it all, there must be strength. There must exist those who will stand up to totalitarian rule, who will say no when others submit, who must survive despite their condition. There must exist the resilient.
Eventual Draco/Hermione with plenty of plot. Very dark, so read at your own risk!
Wow... This is so good. Just please kill off Orman; that death is one I wouldn't be mad at. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Orman will get his, just wait. ;)
HOW COULD YOU KILL OFF NEVILE?! :? I was fine with Harry and Ginny, but Nevile?
Sorry about that, he's one of my favorite characters. Aside from Nevile, this is really good can't wait to finish it. :)
Author's Response: I know, I'm evil. Neville was one of my favorites, too. But I'm glad you like it anyway! Thanks for sticking with it!
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! this was soooooooooooo sweet. i'm still going to read the sequel though. both of the endings were amazing! keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
All while reading this I was thinking 'Nevile, that could have been you!' He's one of my favorite characters and I think you did a great job on him. Since OOTP I had been thinking about Nevile and his parents and what it was like to grow up like he did. You captured him brilliantly. Keep writing! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for such a glowing review! I really appreciate you saying that I got his character right, as I didn't want to mess that up... especially seeing that this fic is essentially a character study. Yeah I'm the same as you, I've been thinking about what it would be like to have parents who were alive but couldn't recognise you ever since OotP. So thanks for taking the time to review!!
This really reflects how I felt when I didn't get my letter. :) Very well written and very sweet. Nice new character. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked the fic, and the character. I thought it would be interesting, as Colin and Dennis are so excitable and not exactly known for their sensitivity. This is also actually one of my less favourite stories... so I'm glad you still liked it :). Thanks so much!
this is so sweet. i've never been a big lupin fan but i thought that i should give it a shot. it's really good :)
Author's Response: Wow!! A third review! You're really making my day today :). Thanks for checking this story out even though you're not a Lupin fan. I'm glad you still enjoyed it too. I find Remus very interesting, because in so many ways he's such a "good" character, but his main flaw is that he never believes in himself, which is really sad. Thanks so much for the review :)!!
this is the first fan-fic I've ever read... and i love it! everything about it. you're such an amazing writer. keep up the good work! :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm pleased you enjoyed it and hope you like reading more fanfiction. ~Carole~
oh jeez. i was nearly in tears by the end. i love the twins soooooooooo much. this moment was perfect for a one-shot. i'm glad you did it justice/
Author's Response: Thank you, thats so nice!