Summary: Jillian Cole is in her fourth year at Hogwarts. As the youngest of eight children, Jillian is practically invisible. Her only friends include her books, the librarian, and a strange ghost in the girl's bathroom. Then, Jillian finds out a horrible secret about one of the teachers. Can she have enough courage to stop them? Can she change from being invisible to being a hero? Find out. actually got the next chapter out, I mean it! Enjoy
I really liek your story- it's the first AU fic I've read, and I really like it! I just started a post-HBP fic- feel free to check it out! It's called "Harry Potter and the Last Horcrux" (General Fics) Good job and good luck!
Your story is good- I read up to chapter 10! Please never abandon it!
Author's Response: I'm just going to say this - I sent my fanfic in about two or three weeks ago, and they still haven't even read it! I guess they're down or something, so don't worry. I'm not going to abandon it. It just might take forever!
Those Whose Hearts Hath Tried: the Chronicles of Lily and James Potter by norahpotter
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 41]
Summary: "Oh who can tell, save those whose hearts hath tried.” -Lord Byron. Inspired by a line of poetry by Lord Byron, this is the first in a series (hopefully) on Lily, James, and eventually Harry Potter. Lily and James' seventh and final year at Hogwarts. Post HBP with a bit of AU thrown in.
sanguis purus= always pure
ooh, and it's latin
THIS IS YOUR FIRST FANFIC? IT'S FANTASTIC!
Author's Response: Hey thanks a lot, Yeah its my first fanfic, i'm currently rewriting some parts of it at the moment, chapter two has been resubmitted, so with a bit of luck that will be up soon. Thanks again!
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This is pretty good! Is it your first fanfic? Even though it has practically the same title as my story, it already seems a lot different. That's good, I guess!
Author's Response: yeah, it is. i started writing it right after the 6th book came out, but i had to change accounts and that. just after mine came out, i saw yours, so i was like.. hmm.. great!
Summary: *A story of love, faith and hope when times seem dark.*
The beauty and curse of life is that it always moves onwards. Life waits for no-one, and soon Harry Potter discovers that he has no time to recover from Dumbledore's death. Together with Ron and Hermione, he sets out to destroy the Horcruxes and Voldemort's rise to power.
Yet as the one thing that withstands dark magic begins to crumble, what will Harry's destiny become?
a little too much romance too soon. you should have waited until later chapters! still, good...
Author's Response: Thanks for your comment - I do appreciate constructive criticism for my stories. The reason I introduced Harry and Ginny's romance so early on is because it is important to do so in regards to the plotline - I won't reveal any more! Please keep reading and reviewing.
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Wow, a cliffhanger? When will you update?
Author's Response: Chapter 4 has been submitted, and it will hopefully be up soon.
Summary: It's the beginning of Seventh Year, and our favorite gang is heading back to Hogwarts.
new chapter submitted to beta after being rejected TWICE . I've made some improvements, and hopefully, the third time's the charm.
I also changed the rating because of later chapters.
That's actually really good! I can't wait for an update.
Author's Response: thanks! chapters two and three are in queue!
Summary: July 31...Coming of age...So it begins.
The story is good, but seems a little rushed.
Author's Response: I never was very good at drawing out long plot lines, but there is still more to come.