Hey, guys. I'm working on Sacrifice, and to get it up soon. Go [URL=http://www.fanfiction.mugglenet.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1490]here[/URL] and review my prophecy, so I can get Sacrifice up faster! :D
Summary: Hermione Granger normally cannot stand perfection, having been mocked for being perfect her whole life. Matters become worse when a simple plan to prove her "wild side" turns into the romance of a life time. The problem: He is absolutely perfect. According to her, at least.
Things get out of control, and after one thing leads to another, Hermione is forced to choose between losing what she has and losing what she wants.
Ignores books 6 and 7, but takes place in year 7
Hey, first time reviewer here. This is an awesome story, and I can't wait for you to update! But it's really sad that they killed Eliza...
Summary: Here's the plot, its Hogwarts rhymes. I'm sure you've heard it many times. But this has story, romance too. You have to check if it's for you!
This is adorable! I hope you keep going with it, though it's AU now HBP's come out. You have a wonderful, amazing talent! I could never do an entire paragraph in verse, let alone 3 chapters! 10 all the way!
A pretty good start, but you could use some work on your writing. I'm imagining a good story, but you need to connect some sentences and work on the vocab a little. I'm not putting down you're story, but just giving you constructive critism.
Hey, I like your story. it shows personality and creativity and all that other stuff. When it gets POSTED [hem, hem, MuggleNet okayer people], you can read and review and I will be very happy. Also, go to ewonline.net and go to fandom then fan fiction to read my old story, Hermione's Love. It's a HR/R//H//D fic.
Summary: He pretends not to care that she’s using him. Adult!HG/SS, Complete. Angsty
This was touching, ina word. I love how everything's in pronouns, so it seems a lot less personal to the reader.
I really, really love that he finally comes out and says what both of them are thinking, and she acknowledges it. And I love this: "...and he realizes with a start that, for all their past encounters, this can’t be called anything but the first time they’ve been together."
Summary: One-Shot written to "She's a Rebel" by Green Day
Hey, I personally love this whole plot. And basing it on 'She's A Rebel'? You obviously wrote it just for me, right?
Author's Response: Oh, of course I wrote it just for you. I sat at my computer, at a loss for ideas, and then I thought, "What would B_Bootyful want to read...?" And voila! ::wink:: Thanks a bunch for the review!
Summary: In the age of innocence, friends discover that not everyone is innocent. Especially not who they expected to be. Everyone makes mistakes, even Hermione Granger...
This is a good story, bu it's not spactacular. The plot line is well worn, but you add descriptiveness to it, which makes the sotry better. On the flip side, though, everything seems to be happening very, very fast. You might put some Harry POV in here, soon, if you don't have a plan worked out.
Okay, I'm dying for the next chapter! I can see this is going to be very funny, and I'm ecstatic to read more!
Summary: When Draco Malfoy finds himself falling for the Gryffindor know-it-all, he convinces himself that it’s merely witchcraft. But when they both finally come to terms with the truth, nothing can stop them from being together. This is a tale of forbidden love and dangerous passion weaved into the Half-Blood Prince, where circumstances beyond their control might tear Draco and Hermione apart forever… Check out the long awaited sequal Fatum Amoris...The Fate of Love about Medea Malfoy and Patrick Potter now appearing in the other pairings section.
This has got to be the most convincing D/Hr fic I've ever read! I love how you lace the plot into HP6, so that it makes sense. You even put the dialouge in it! I'm so happy it's not over!
I kind of agree with VioletHairPixie. Please don't make this into another aweful fanfic that goes like this: "One date." "That's all!"..."Wow, I never stopped loving you, Draco." "Me niether, Hermione." Blech. Ew. And you were doing so well!! Try to make it original, for me, okay?
Wow. That was awesome. Despite some spelling errors, that might have been one of the best stories I've ever read here on MMNF. You made everything make sense, and is just waaaay coool, maaan.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I really tried to make the fic look like something that could have happened in the story.
Summary: Harry, Ron, and Hermione make a trip to Godric's Hollow to visit the Potters' graves. There, Harry speaks to his parents for the first time, and in so doing, discovers that the dead are never truly lost. (One-shot. Bring your kleenex.)
Oh, my gosh. That was so sad. I'm in tears, kind of, but man, that was an excellent story. Your words actually made me believe that you were there, watching them, just like Lily and James. Congratulations.
That was powerful. I always wondered if one twin would overcome the other, and you have just confirmed I am not alone.
Author's Response: I think it would be very interesting if one twin turned on the other, but I guess the question is, which one would it be. I really couldn't decide myself, so for this story I left it opened to the reader.
Hermione sighed in relaxation. She was sitting in her favourite café, the cafe latte steaming cheerily on the small, round table as she immersed herself in the news of The Times. As she flipped a page, the newspaper folded annoyingly backwards and revealed the scenery beyond.
Hermione let out a piercing scream.
4th story in a series of Hermione/Draco one-shot (Check out my author page for more information)
Important announcement in my profile
This is one of the best one-shots I've ever read, by far. No cliches, all original stuff.
And the cafe plan? Pure brilliance.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, B_Bootyful!
Summary: Professor Granger deals with a pair of students who have inherited a knack for trouble...
Dear Mrs Evans:
A marvelous story told in letters. The Potter children are quite a handful for poor Mrs Potter. I rather think she needs a vacation.
Great story! I love how you took the two sides of the story (friendship and formal) and stuck them together. You've captured the characters perfectly, as well.
PS: Have you read a story about a naked quiddtch match instated by Fred and George? That's similar to this.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind review! I\'m really glad you liked it. (As for the kids being a handful, I don\'t imagine there\'s much Ginny can\'t handle!!! She probably could use a vacation though.) I haven\'t read the other story-I\'ll have to look it up. Thanks- Daisy
Summary: In which Lily tells James she's pregnant.
Oh, if only you had seen my face when I realised she wasn't pregnant with Harry, but with a second child! I've never thought about that before: Could Lily have been pregnant when she was murdered? Oh, it just brings tears to my eyes.
Again, you're amazingly talented. And creative, too! You obviously thought outside the box on this one.
The thing that brought it all home? The fact that James and Lily had absolutely no idea their baby would never be born. Usually in stories with them in their later years, they have a "feeling" that "something"'s going to happen. I love how they're just innocent, unsuspecting parents in your story.
Summary: A moment's bad decision can cause a world of destruction...
What happens when Susan Bones goes aginst her badger instincts and chooses fun over others?
Submitted by Catrin of Hufflepuff for the Poetry challenge number 2 - "Apathy is Lethal"
Sad, very sad. So Susan Bones killed a pregnant Ginny?
I think you meant this to bring tears to peoples' eyes, but it got kind of confusing because of all the commas. If you took them out (no commas in poetry are needed) it would make more sense, I think.
Author's Response: Thanks, I\'ll have a look at those pesky commas!
Summary: The Quidditch field after nightfall is the perfect place to share a talk... among other things.
After I read Caducus, I went to your author's page, and this looked cute. And see what I find!
I can't remember what movie that is, but I know I love it. :D That makes sense, doesn't it?
I also love how you can capture raw emtions with your words. That's what separates a good writer from a great one. Guess what category you fall in?
Summary: "Never used an Unforgivable Curse before, have you boy? You need to mean them, Potter! You need to really want to cause pain - to enjoy it."
I just want to tell you that I did not blink teh entire time it took me to that. I couldn't. If I did, I might have opened my eyes and found that there was Harry, standing in front of me, and there was Voldemort, cowering in fear before his most hated enemy. It felt as though I were there. I could feel the hate, smell the air, sense the slowing of time.
You have a gift. This is the best hate-related story I've ever read. Good job. I hope to read more from you.
Summary: Ginny's thoughts now that Harry is gone. One shot.
That was wonderful. You've taken the grief of losing a loved one and not only put it into words emmaculately, but created a sense that your readers are in the room with Ginny, watching tearfully as she attempts to escape her past.
You certainly have a gift for emotions.
Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m quite speechless. This review was very thoughtful, and made my day! I\'m glad you liked it, and thanks for the review!