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Too Far Gone by Gemmika
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 1174]

Summary: *How far would you go for love?* "If you touch her again, I'll kill you." "Go ahead for I'll come to her again and again." *Is it worth it?* "James leave her alone, she's no good for you." "Don't say a word against Lily!" *Will it last?* "It's forever, I've known it sice the day I met you." "Forever is a long time." "Not if you love someone..." I am finally re-editing this story, please take a look and see all the new stuff!

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Non-Consensual Sex, Sexual Situations

Word count: 58398 Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/13/04 Updated: 01/27/05


Reviewer: ShadowNeo Signed
Date: 12/19/10 Title: Chapter 24: Changes

This was a beautiful story. I Enjoyed it thoroughly. I cannot wait for the sequel.

 

Summary: Harry and Hermione are dating and he wants to pop the question that could change their life. Hermione is sure that she wants the same thing until a certain Slytherin Seeker assures her otherwise. Guys, I'm really sorry I haven't updated this in a year or so...I just can't find the time. Just don't give up on it, and know that I really am trying to get it out there.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 6793 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
11/20/04 Updated: 11/30/04


Reviewer: ShadowNeo Signed
Date: 12/18/10 Title: Chapter 2: Proposal Plans

I think this is a very well developed idea so far. It just needs to be smoothed out. Like how did Draco cope with changing, or how did Ron and Luna get together.Also a little bit about Ginny and Draco would be nice
Please update!

 

Lover of the Light by pink_x_143
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 194]

Summary: As of today, April 17, 2011, I am coming back!! I am working on the next chapter and thank all of my old fans! Hopefully some of you are still out there and new ones will be interested in reading!!

This story was previously known as "A Time of Confusion"

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 35272 Chapters: 16 Completed: No
Published:
10/04/05 Updated: 05/08/11


Reviewer: ShadowNeo Signed
Date: 12/15/10 Title: Chapter 15: Much Too Much

This is such a great story. It is very well written, especially the love scenes... you could go a little farther if you could please ;)
But really, this sounds like JKR could have easily written this you have great talent.
I hope you update soon!

 

Wake Up by coolh5000
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 32]

Summary: Every morning Ron arrives at the shop and wakes up George with a cup of tea. One morning, however, George doesn't wake up.

This started as a 500 word drabble for my DADA class and turned into a 2000 word one-shot instead, before becoming two chapters. The prompt for my drabble was to use an overdose so be warned that this fic is not a happy one. It is actually I lot darker than I really imagine the Weasley family being after the war, but this is what came out when I started writing and I think it is possible.

please note that the warning is for attempted suicide only

An epilogue has arrived and I promise that I have now finished, though I have found this interesting to write so I may carry on with this version of the Weasley family at some point

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Self Injury, Suicide

Word count: 5747 Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/03/08 Updated: 06/19/08


Reviewer: ShadowNeo Signed
Date: 12/11/10 Title: Chapter 3: Epilogue

This seems to be a very real representation of what could have happened. I am glad it all worked out though. This shows the darker, and seemingly truer side of the aftermath of the war.
I enjoyed reading this and you should be proud to have written something this great.

 

Summary: The war is over, the battles have been won. Hermione, Ron and Harry are settling down into a world without Voldemort, and for once in their lives, everything is going smoothly.

Until they travel to Australia to find Hermione's parents. As experienced as they are, nothing could prepare them for this - kangaroos, the scorching sun, a Wizarding community completely different from theirs, and one little problem no one was expecting ...

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 9094 Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Published:
10/25/08 Updated: 05/08/09


Reviewer: ShadowNeo Signed
Date: 11/29/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three: So Close, Still We’ve Got So Far

UPDATE PLEASE!!!
this is a great story!!
I dont think J.K. Rowling could do any better :)
please do us all a favor and update!!!

 

Summary: Nineteen years had passed since the battle at Hogwarts, and all had been well. Harry’s children had started attending Hogwarts. It is Albus Potter’s first year, and with it starts a new adventure: the Triwizard Tournament is about to start, and Albus finds himself more involved in it than he would have liked.

Join Albus and his gang, which includes his cousin Rose Weasley, a Death Eater's son by the name of Scorpius Malfoy, and Muggle-born Andrew Strathmore, as they find themselves in the midst of danger as soon as their first year starts at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. EDIT: This story is abandoned, and is in the process of being rewritten with an older Albus. I realized that having a first year in the TWT wasn't the best idea :/

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Violence

Word count: 37899 Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Published:
12/08/08 Updated: 12/25/11


Reviewer: ShadowNeo Signed
Date: 12/04/10 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Following In My Footsteps

I love how the way you incorporate things like they would actually turn out, like personalities.
It gives the story the feeling that it could easily have been written by JKR.
You are great, please update quickly!!!

Author's Response: Aww, that was such a nice compliment! Thanks so much!! ^_^. And I'll try to update ASAP!

 

Porcelain Doll by MorganRay
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: She was their plaything for so long. Now that she’s free again, Cho tries to find pleasure in love, but innocence left her long ago with loneliness as her only lover.



Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Dubious Consent, Mild Profanity, Non-Consensual Sex, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 2929 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/29/09 Updated: 02/01/09


Reviewer: ShadowNeo Signed
Date: 12/13/10 Title: Chapter 1: Porcelain Doll

This is such a powerful story.
I wish you could put almost an intro or an epilogue on how this started or how it ended.
It is one of the better stories I have read though.
Congrats!

 

Just Another Girl by jenny b
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 18]

Summary:

Scorpius: the boy who has dated almost every girl in the school.

Rose: the girl who despises him for it.

Scorpius: the boy who never could resist a challenge.

Rose: the girl who wasn’t quite as immune to him as she thought.


Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 2486 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/11/09 Updated: 04/18/09


Reviewer: ShadowNeo Signed
Date: 11/29/10 Title: Chapter 1: Just Another Girl

this was good!!
you could have stretched this out a lot more of course though...

 

Finding Her Voice by Belledeg
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 205]

Summary: Harper Riley is one of the most gifted young witches of her generation. However, since the traumatic events of the Battle of Hogwarts, she has not spoken a single word. Her Muggle parents were killed, along with her two wizarding brothers, and she is on the run from her squib guardian, a sinful and harsh man with a strong hatred of magic.

Harry Potter is recently married and settled, however, his life seems to take on another dramatic turn when he and Ginny find Harper. Her refusal to speak makes things a lot harder for them to discover how to help her. Luckily, Harry knows someone who owes him a favour. Someone who he and Ginny may not like, but they trust. Someone whose profession is to help those who suffer from the Battle of Hogwarts, no matter their story…

If anyone can get her talking again, it’s Blaise.

"I don't want to forget that night...but I don't want to remember it either."

A Blaise Zabini/Original Character romance

This story has the characters: Blaise Zabini, Harper Riley, Jimmy Peakes, Harry Potter, Ginny Potter, Ron Weasley, Hermione Weasley, Isabella Zabini, Draco Malfoy, Dennis Creevey, Leonard Wilkes, Theodore Nott and Minerva McGonagall plus many more.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity, Violence

Word count: 87463 Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/21/09 Updated: 01/16/10


Reviewer: ShadowNeo Signed
Date: 11/27/10 Title: Chapter 21: When You Say Nothing At All

This was a great series,
always saying the perfect things,
descriptions so vivid,
overall, one of the best fanfics i have ever read!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm so glad you enjoyed the series :D

 

Follow Your Heart by valmarysegan
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 23]

Summary: Ginny has vowed to move on when Harry left her in his search for the missing horcruxes the year before. Now he's back, and he want's her back, but Ginny stubbornly refuses him. And now, Professor McGonagall has asked him to be the new Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher. And Ginny still has one more year at Hogwarts to go... What can happen?

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 1076 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
07/29/09 Updated: 08/05/09


Reviewer: ShadowNeo Signed
Date: 12/13/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It is great very touching
I hope you finish and develop this more soon!

 

Summary: Set during the time Ron is dating Lavender, Hermione attempts to cope with the feelings of rejection and having no one to discuss it with. She feels utterly alone and seeks comfort in any means possible. Will she be able to stop herself before she goes too far?

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Dubious Consent, Mild Profanity, Self Injury, Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 11644 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
08/12/09 Updated: 07/17/13


Reviewer: ShadowNeo Signed
Date: 12/13/10 Title: Chapter 3: Under the Mistletoe

This is very well thought out.
This definetly would fill in the lines between what happened and the book
I would say this is a very real representation of what could happen
I cannot wait for you to update!

 

The Gryffindor Gang by U-No-Poo
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 48]

Summary: Five students - Albus Potter, Rose Weasley, Scorpius Malfoy, Claudia Kelaney and Adam Finnigan. Five different stories. One house - Gryffindor.

Join The Gryffindor Gang, five unlikely best friends, as they enter Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry as first year students. Throughout the year, they must overcome their own personal battles. Albus just doesn't seem to get out of his father's spotlight - will people treat him like himself, or as Harry Potter's son? Scorpius is dealing with his family too - being a Malfoy in Gryffindor isn't exactly peachy for him. Claudia's started slowly adjusting to the wizarding world, but will her sneaky, horrible roommate cause Rose and Claudia big trouble? And Adam's just not having the perfect start to Hogwarts that he'd have liked.

These are all trying problems when you're eleven years old. But their real test happens when danger is thrown into all five of their lives, threatening them all. Will they be able to face their biggest battle yet, and live to tell the tale?

This is Part One in The Gryffindor Gang Trilogy.

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 36797 Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Published:
02/05/10 Updated: 02/28/11


Reviewer: ShadowNeo Signed
Date: 11/29/10 Title: Chapter 9: The Secrets of Hogwarts

PLEASE UPDATE!!! THIS IS A GREAT STORY!!!

Author's Response: I sure will, thanks for reviewing!

 

Our Little Secret: Lost by Kerichi
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 166]

Summary:

 

Scorpius had never looked forward to anything the way he looked forward to leaving Hogwarts with Rose. He planned a holiday with no friends, no family, and nothing to do but be together—until a tampered Portkey changed their destination.

 

 



Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 38146 Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/01/10 Updated: 07/24/11


Reviewer: ShadowNeo Signed
Date: 11/29/10 Title: Chapter 9: Family

This story is so good!!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE

Author's Response: Thank you! Real life has been a pain, but I'm hoping to have an update by Friday, December 10th. I wouldn't want lack of updates to put me on the Naughty list, heh.

 

Summary:

Growing up as Albus Potter was not an easy task, and being the son of the Chosen One wasn't a piece of cake, either. Expectations of greatness have the startling ability to crush someone, especially an eleven-year-old boy.

Join Albus Potter in his rocky journey to adulthood and what it's like to live, to learn, to love, to lose, and to be the middle child.

 

This story is going to be epically long, and yes, I will update. It may not come as fast as the updates to The Vindication of James Potter did, as I'm posting this as I write it, but I do promise that this story will not fall victim to apathy. Hopefully, you enjoy this story if you decide to read it. :)



Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 18937 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
05/21/10 Updated: 07/31/10


Reviewer: ShadowNeo Signed
Date: 12/06/10 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

The descriptions are amazing, you put an interesting twist compared to how others wrote about albus and rose
I cannot wait until you update!!

Author's Response: I'm really glad you don't find the story cliche, which is what I try to avoid. I probably won't update soon, as I do have two other WIPs that I plan on finishing first, but rest assured that this story will not go unfinished. I can't stand the idea of not finishing a story. It makes me feel sick inside, to be honest. Thanks for reading and reviewing! ~Jess

 

Summary:

I didn't mean for this to happen. Really. My plan was to get through sixth-year without doing any more damage to myself. I've already wrecked so many good things in my life. I thought I was done with my self-destruction.

Apparently, I'm not. Because falling in love with Albus was not part of my plan.



Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity, Substance Abuse

Word count: 21972 Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Published:
05/26/10 Updated: 01/15/12


Reviewer: ShadowNeo Signed
Date: 12/07/10 Title: Chapter 3: Maddy Can't Make Up Her Mind

I love how you are so descriptive, and always using the right word at the perfect time.
Update soon please!!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review!

 

By the Duck Pond by jenny b
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 16]

Summary: Once upon a time, there was a girl called Anna Samuels. She was a red-haired Muggle-born with a penchant for dancing and ducks, and according to Albus Potter, she was the most beautiful girl in the world.

This is the story that Albus wouldn't tell Rose; the story of what happened at Teddy and Victoire's wedding reception.

The Potters had always had a thing for redheads, after all.

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 3550 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/16/10 Updated: 06/16/10


Reviewer: ShadowNeo Signed
Date: 11/29/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was such a happy telling of the story!! you should do more and maybe even a few chapters about their relationship!
I would definetely read it!

 

Serpentine by SaladOrCellarDoor
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 12]

Summary: Lily Potter shocked the Sorting Hat when she asked to be placed into Slytherin. The Sorting Hat shocked all of Hogwarts when it did just that.

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 659 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
06/25/10 Updated: 06/28/10


Reviewer: ShadowNeo Signed
Date: 12/04/10 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Not Gryffindor

This is so well written. I dare say JK Rowling would have a tough time wording this better!

 

Summary:

The tale of Harry Potter ended with the defeat of Lord Voldemort and the start of a new age of peace in the Ministry of Magic and the wizarding world.

 The tale of his second son, Albus Potter, however, starts with this, and with his journey to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. But in his first two years at the school for magic, Albus finds that his story will not unfurl as smoothly as one might expect in such a peaceful era. He finds himself confronted with a Hogwarts in turmoil, with a new Headmaster that seeks to chip away at the school's foundation as well as a student body that shuns their own kind. He finds himself opposing his family - such as his very talented, popular older brother James and his best friend and cousin Rose Weasley - and defending those who should be his enemies - such as Scorpius Malfoy, son of the ex-Death Eater Draco Malfoy, Emily Black, a self-centered and bratty girl with a big secret, and Katsurou Sen, the mysterious youngest son of a wealthy wizard family who is almost never seen. Albus even finds that his identity and desire to honor his father, once seeming so simple and sincere, could lead him onto a path he never imagined. Hogwarts has become a twisted Wonderland, where everything that had seemed good outside of the school shows itself to wicked, and everything that had seemed wicked...could possibly be good.

In the midst of all this, danger lurks in Albus Potter's future -- a danger that he will have no choice but to face differently than his famous father would have.



Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 19693 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
10/30/10 Updated: 12/05/10


Reviewer: ShadowNeo Signed
Date: 12/04/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: A Reason

I love how you always seem to find the perfect way to say what you want, like the argument between Albus and the Sorting hat. It flowed extremely well. I doubt that kind of a plot twist could be topped easily!
I cannot wait for you to continue this!

Author's Response: Why, thank you, I'm really flattered you think so! The Sorting Hat section in particular was a lot of fun to write, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. <3 The newest chapter has just been approved, in case you want to check it out, and hopefully I'll finish up the next chapter and update again soon. :)

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