Okay, first of all, you're probably stunned that people are still reading this so long after you wrote it. But somebody told me that you have extremely good humor fics, so I figured I should check out your author page. This was SO funny! I wish I could think up such humor. NEVER stop writing! :D
Oh, I love this! This was such an interesting take on an idea that I have wondered about for a long time. However, it did get a bit repetitive at times. But I loved it! Great job!
Author's Response: Oh! I wonder where it was repetitive? I may have to look again and see. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)
Oh my goodness! This is wonderful! What a cliffhanger! Great first chapter! I am definitely going to read the rest of this, it seems like it's going to be an excellent story. My throat actually constricted at the end part about Teddy's parents - though that could have been because of the mood It Ends Tonight was setting for me. ;) This was extremely well written, and I look forward to reading more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review, I'm glad you liked it. I'm glad you liked the bit about Teddy's parents - it's sort of Lily's realisation that there are a lot of people in the world with less than her and so even though her problems seem big, they're not really. I'm glad you're looking forward to reading more :). I'm currently editing the next bit so hopefully it will be up soon. Thanks.