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Summary: It's the end of an era, a hero is dead.
But what to write on a grave?

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 1131 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/23/11 Updated: 03/26/11


Reviewer: charlottetrips Signed
Date: 05/01/11 Title: Chapter 1: An Epitaph - Harry James Potter

This was amazing. Though the occasion is definitely a sad and somber one (who wants to think of Harry dying?), writing it from Ron's point of view was brilliant! The bits about Hermione having his neck and wailing at him ("Is that how you want him to be remembered forever? As a Quidditch Seeker? Was that all he was to you?") helped set off such a serious issue in just the way Ron would. Great charaterisation.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you've enjoyed reading this. I'm happy you enjoyed the 'Hermione Parts' as I think of them. She kind of acts as a conscience for Ron in my head. Thanks for the characterisation compliment, and for the review :)

 

Light by MissMeg
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: A poem about the deaths of the Potters.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 106 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/29/11 Updated: 03/30/11


Reviewer: charlottetrips Signed
Date: 03/30/11 Title: Chapter 1: Light

LOL. *Gasp* But not on your poem! I think the poem is poignant and sad. Your note was LOL :)

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you appreciated it.

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