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Hesperides' Apple by Ogygiasylph
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 228]

Summary: Past Featured StoryWhen Ginny Weasley becomes Draco Malfoy's wife, he suspects neither her true identity nor her dangerous motives. But when all Hell breaks lose and their relationship takes unexpected turns, there is more at stake than preserving their marriage--namely, preserving their lives.

Categories: Draco/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Sexual Situations, Suicide, Violence

Word count: 159368 Chapters: 31 Completed: No
Published:
05/06/07 Updated: 02/01/13


Reviewer: Tonythawiz Signed
Date: 10/19/10 Title: Chapter 2: 2. A journey of discovery

the polite french you is "vous" which is pronounced "voo" and the impolite is "toi" which is pronounced "twa" :) (I'm part french ^_^)

Author's Response: Thanks, I know: I'm 100% French.

 

The Accidental Godmother by Ruby Emeralds
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 287]

Summary: What if Harry had a Godmother? And she was a Muggle? This story starts at the beginning of Order of the Phoenix and will be as canon-compliant as possible. This fan fiction will lead to a romance between Severus and the Godmother, an original character.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Book 7 Disregarded, Sexual Situations

Word count: 183639 Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/16/10 Updated: 06/14/11


Reviewer: Tonythawiz Signed
Date: 10/16/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Well I have to say I'm enjoying a muggle being on a magical train that's she's not supposed to even know exists and looking forward to finding out what happens when they get to the castle, after all doesn't Dumbledore have protection on it which makes muggles unable to see it?

Author's Response: I'm glad to see that you have recently found this story and are enjoying it so far. You will find out what happens when the Muggle visitor arrives at Hogwarts in the next chapter. Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

 
Reviewer: Tonythawiz Signed
Date: 10/16/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I loved how you introduced Snape as dark and sinister, making it quite clear who he was before the muggle woman was actually introduced to him :) and I loved the reference to when Harry flew the car to school ^_^ *keeps reading*

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind compliments. Snape has always struck me as a person who makes a definite first impression; hopefully, that was captured in the chapter. As to the flying car, I couldn't resist mentioning Harry and Ron's grand entrance in Chamber of Secrets; it is one of my favorite scenes in all of the books! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

 
Reviewer: Tonythawiz Signed
Date: 10/16/10 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

yay! Dumbledore's a demented Hippie wearing a dress and eating a spiked lemon drop :p

Author's Response: Well, what would YOU think if you just met Dumbledore for the first time? :) I, too, loved Celie's Muggle opinion of the Headmaster! I'm having a lot of fun describing the magical world through the eyes of a confused Muggle. Hopefully, you're enjoying her insights, as well. Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

 
Reviewer: Tonythawiz Signed
Date: 10/16/10 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

:o but if you took an unbreakable vow and then you go on holiday and forget you'll die :(

Author's Response: Don't worry; I have no intention of forgetting or abandoning this story! Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

 
Reviewer: Tonythawiz Signed
Date: 10/16/10 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I have to say, I read part fo a different fan-fic and was entranced at the start, but got bored, with this one, I just don't want to stop reading, it's interesting to see how Snape goes about pretending to work for Voldemort and then pretending to pretend to work for Dumbledore.

Author's Response: I'm thrilled that you don't want to stop reading my story! :) Hopefully, you will continue to enjoy future chapters. I've always thought that Snape was one of the most interesting characters in the entire series and I am enjoying being able to creatively "fill" in some of the blanks that J.K. left in the books, regarding his actions and thoughts. Happy Reading! Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

 
Reviewer: Tonythawiz Signed
Date: 10/16/10 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Severus and Celie sitting up a tree :p I loved how Luna was briefly introduced and us readers are left wondering "does Luna return at all?" as she is normally just a side-character

Author's Response: You'll have to keep reading to see if your prediction comes true! Glad you enjoyed Luna's contribution to the chapter. Thanks for reviewing! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

 

A Friendship Broken by mudbloodproud
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 8]

Summary: *”Not if he thought I was the spy, Peter,” said Lupin. “I assume that’s why you didn’t tell me, Sirius?” he said casually over Pettigrew’s head.

“Forgive me, Remus,” said Black.

“Not at all, Padfoot, old friend,” said Lupin, who was now rolling up his sleeves. “And will you, in turn, forgive me for thinking you were the spy?”

“Of course,” said Black, and the ghost of a grin flitted across his gaunt face…*



Those words, spoken between two old friends, lead one to wonder why two friends could have ever suspected each other of being a traitor. What could have happened once they left school to make them distrust each other?


**Quote is directly from Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban – Chapter 19 – The Servant of Lord Voldemort - page 273


Everything you recognize belongs to J. K. Rowling. I am just thankful to be able to play in her world for a little while.


This story is dedicated to Carole. She gave me the prompt to inspire my muse again and without her, I think my muse would still be in hiding. Carole, thank you for bring back the voices in my head. And your invaluable Brit-picking.

I must also thank Bine for doing a quick and valuable beta job for me on this. Muse wasn’t interested in making sure it was all correct, she just wanted to write.



Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Strong Profanity, Violence

Word count: 8560 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
09/26/10 Updated: 10/10/10


Reviewer: Tonythawiz Signed
Date: 10/18/10 Title: Chapter 1: Distrust and Trust Misplaced

oooh interesting, but could you tell me how to get the italics to stop after a certain word or phrase please? I tried but it just keeps going throughout the whole chapter.

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