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I'll Hate You Forever (I Think) by kris250
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 1038]

Summary: Lily Evans and James Potter agreed on only one thing since they first met: they'll always hate each other. But after five years, James begins to see things, to see her, differently, and wants another chance. But Lily is one stubborn girl. Can he convince her that his feelings are real? Meanwhile, the pair is thrust into many different dangerous and humorous situations with their friends. Will it take a disaster to help Lily believe in true love? Or will a tragedy just push her farther away? How many times does James have to try before he stops messing up? Follows with the information provided by JKR, with some fun along the way.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 66757 Chapters: 56 Completed: Yes
11/09/04 Updated: 09/27/11

Reviewer: Chocolat Signed
Date: 10/19/10 Title: Chapter 52: Utter Melee

Keep writing!! please please!! I think some people may have lost interest because its been taking so long for anything to happen between them, but its starting to get better now. Also i think fewer but longer chapters are better than short with many chapters, then we don't have to click next so often:)
Please keep writing~


My Deliverance by TwinSuns
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 426]

Summary: Past Featured StoryVoldemort's rising reign of terror, NEWTs, death attempts, a Headship, a tangled affair with James Potter, hilarity, grief, love, secrecy, maddness... it's almost hard to believe that I've survived to graduate. I am Lily Evans, and this is my 7th year.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 93594 Chapters: 20 Completed: No
07/09/06 Updated: 10/29/09

Reviewer: Chocolat Signed
Date: 10/17/10 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Nine: Bonded

this is like one of the best stories ive read on here soo far, and you updated it a year ago!! To stop There of all places! You shouldn't start something you aren't going to finish. I dont know if you get notified when you get a review, but i hope so. Please read the comment before mine and knkkow that i second it!:)

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