I'm Joy, 22 yrs old, likes to sing and dance. Loves to read finctional stories made by other people. I like listening to different genre's. I'm an easy going person.
Chapter Three has been validated!
I like the fact that Harry has a sister in this story. This is a good way to see the other side of the story where the sister Alex is telling her side of the story. How she saw things before her parents died. This is a nice way to read about the other side of not having both parents around. Based on Alex's story.
So Good Job!
Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so much! I haven't logged in in a while, so seeing your review made my night. Unfortunately, I'm not please with how I began the story, so I'm going to rewrite the first few chapters, rename it to something else, and start off at a different point in the third year, most likely the summer before. Keep a look out in the future for a new story by me though. I have a feeling my boyfriend (who actually encouraged me to continue the story a few minutes ago considering he only just found out I was writing it like ten minutes ago) won't be seeing me too often this upcoming Christmas hols.