My Name - Sophie
My age - 13
My birthday - 26th September 1992
Looks - long brown hair (now with blonde streaks!!), blue-green eyes
Fav books - Soooooo many!! Love soooo many lol some Im addicted to atm would be the secret diary series :P:P Romance AND mystery AND drama!! plus theyre teenagers!! yay!!
I am totally in lust with - Ooooh wouldn't you all like to know :P:P
Fav colour - purple
I Live - Australia
Fav HP Book - Half Blood Prince
Least Favorite HP Book- Order of the Pheonix... admit it, we were all thinking it...It sucked to the bone. Like Harry needed to take a chill pill, Ron didnt do anything to deserve the Head Boy badge, and he shouldn't have started playing Quidditch if he had stage fright... Cho and Harry win the worst couple of the year award, I mean could they have BEEN any frostier with each other? Luna scared me... Sirius died weirdly.
Favourite FF Ships -
Lily and James (but only when the info is right, I am not very tolerant of stories that include Voldemort hunting them down because of the profecy when they are only 17)
James Potter is my absolute favourite character, and I refuse to hear anything bad about him. So there, Snape.
I luv harry potter, thats all there is 2 it!! Please Read my first fan fic; Forever Yours, about Lily and James!! Also, when you get bored with that ( by the way.... PLEASE DONT!!!) I strongly advse youto look in my favourite stories section,and read A Very Harry Christmas : One of my All time favourite stories!!
By the way, MY STORY IS OPEN TO PUBLIC!!!!
I've never felt happier!!!
Summary: Lily Evans has told herself time and time again that she is NOT falling for that dratted Potter boy. But what happens when a dance changes all that? PG-13 for mild language and implied intimate situations. A/N: 1000 reads! Amazing! Still, reviews are always welcome
Very cute one shot, it actually brought about ome deja u lol!! I looved the ending especially, it was so cute! Lily was veeerrry cranky at the beginning hey? lol, great stor, i will repeat, very cute
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Yeah, Lily was really...um...evil in the beginning. I think she couldn't stand Potter anymore and just snapped. Poor James. Anyway thanks for reviewing!
sorry the stars went too low for the rating, I'll just fix that lol
Hi!! yay, first review!!! now, first reviews, I believe should be special and deep. As I have no idea how to achieve that, I'll just do what I can. :) I love how you started off with James's point of view. i know that may not seem like much, but there are actually not that many stories on here that start off with james. I like your writing style, It's very good and descriptive. What was it now? 79 times if i rem,ember correctly, that james has asked ily out. Whoah, that's enough to put anyone in a bad mood. Oh well, you know what I always say! 80th time lucky. Well, to tell the truth that's the first time I have ever said / written it, but so what? I'm getting off topic anyway. Great story, can't wait until you start describing Lily, just please, please puhleez dont make her as a lil b!@#$ who practically slaps james half-unconsious for saying she looks nice!! This story could go far if only you don't resort to that!! Update soon! :)
Author's Response: No, that was a great review! I have read enough of those cliches, beleive me, to stop from ever entering the dreaded territory. Well, to some extent, obviously I cannot ignore the Canon facts that make J/L fics so entising... I think I will make Lily fairly tame, but still charasmatic.
Summary: As the Marauders enter their seventh year, James has one goal: to get Lily Evans. Lily is just trying to stay away from him. Remus and Sirius are coming out with a plan. Will they all get what they want, or will they get back something completely unexpected?
Chapter seven is up!
hey! good chapter, I'd watch out for the whole I need so and so reviews, because if a mod finds that you will get a warning, then the chapter will be deleted or if you put it in the queue like that, not accepted, it happened to me as well :( it was good writing, though the books say that Voldemort had risen to power alot earlier than that, i would definately give you the page, but the books are at my mums house, so i cant im sorry!! over all, very good! update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the heads up! I already edited that part. I know that Voldemort rose to power a lot earlier, but I needed it later for my plot. I'm glad you liked this chapter, and thanks for your review!
THANKYOU!!! Finally, another story that Lily doesn't hate James in!! :D YOu don't know what a relief that is!! Fantastic story, can't wait for an update, really good start!! Keep going!! You're doing a great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! It helps a lot that someone likes my story!
Summary: Alright everyone, the end is here! *dramatic gasp* I really hope you all enjoy it, and don't forget to look out for my new story, Prologue: The Beginning. Thanks!
What's happening: It's their seventh year. James is desperate to get Lily, and, at the Hogwarts Express, promises to never ask her out again, and offers that the two become friends. When Lily accepts, James's spirits soar, but since she doesn't like him that way, and he can't ask her out, how will he ever have her for his own?
A special thanks to my sister Kitty and my best friend Emilea for listening to my ideas and reading the story in its entirety! Couldn't have done it without them!
And thanks to my new beta, Emily/LaneTechFreshie! You've been great!
Happy reading! :)
Ohhhhh, "I'm in love with james Potter!" what a cute way to start a story and end a chapter!! :) update soon you should you should :)
Author's Response: yay! thanks a lot! didn't know how my first was gonna be! thanks bunches!
hehe I love this story soooo much, I just love it...Id like to see how this turns out! But how on earth would ducking help them escape a werewolf? lol update soon!
Author's Response: Well, you'll just have to find out! Thanks for the review, you rock!
Hey! I liked that chapter, it was really cute. I like the way that Lily decided to trust Sirius with that information, and he was "serious" about it, unlike his label, which is a crazy, loopy sugar high kid. I relly liked the whole thing so far, even if Lily's mind works straaanngggeee. lol
Author's Response: lol too! yeah, this chapter was definitely fun, and you'll see how it works in the next chapter, which is in queue and being approved! yay!
Summary: As Lily and James enter their last year at Hogwarts, many hidden feelings emerge. But when tragedy strikes, will Lily ever be able to tell James her true feelings? Or will it be too late?
Reviews are greatly appreciated. There's an e-cookie in it for you. ;D
that was a pretty good start. The only thing, you may want to qrite it that way, so dont take this to heart, only it siunded as James was a little OTT full of himself, if ya know what Im saying. I mean, is that healthy ? lol update soon :)
good start to a story, I think. If you really want some constructive critism, there is only a single thing that I can point out. Loyalty is one of the Hufflepuff virtues, and while many Gryffindors may be loyal as well as brave, they wouldnt be sorted into Gryffindor because of their loyalty. Apart from that, a great start and I can't wait to read more!
Summary: Remus Lupin and Lily Evans run into each other in Diagon Alley and have a pleasant talk over a pleasant meal. Two friends discuss cabbages and kings to wear out a long lunch hour, and end up discovering things about each otherís lives that neither had had a chance to glean before. (Oneshot. This is my first fic, so reviews are very much appreciated!)
Oh wow, that was such really great writing!! I loved the entire thing, you really made the characters come alive, as if they were real people sitting down having a convo!! I don't usually stray far from the Lily and james section in Romance, but I decided to come have a quick look over here, and i'm glad I did! I hope you write many, many more stories!! I'll definitely read them!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Sophie!! Now I'm always gonna remember you as my first reviewer!! :) I'm so glad you actually enjoyed it, it was a slapdash thing at first and I was certain nobody but me would get it. Thank you so much!
Summary: It's Lily Evans and James Potter's fifth year at Hogwarts and they're just friends. Nothing else. Or so Lily thinks...but thanks to Lily's best friend Jackie, as well as the the Marauders, it's not going to be that simple. So sit back, relax, and enjoy the comedy of errors that was Lily and James' relationship.
A/N: whoo-hoo! chapter four's up!! another long and slightly pointless chapter, but now you guys know why the effect of dumby's charm was so strong to lily. anyway, next chappie should be finished and submitted soon, so keep on reading and reviewing!
hey wow this is a really gr8 story! you should totally keep it up! I love the way Lily and James seemed to get along, and how you made Lily be sarcastic instead of seriously scary lol keep it up, as far as I couls see there was only one mistake, and it's a really common one! Just Lily said Mom, when British people call and pronounce it Mum just thought I'd mention it! totally great story!! :D
Author's Response: thank you so much! i am so happy you liked it, i am definitely keeping up with it! i guess i made lily a bit sarcastic cause i'm very sarcastic myself. thanks also for pointing out the "mom" vs. "mum" thing, i'm american, so it was helpful! in fact, i'm changing it to mum right now...
Summary: Ever wonder what went on the night Lily and James died? I am basically telling the story as I wanted it to be pieced together.
Thanks to the people who have reviewed so far. Please review. I do my best to review for everyone else's stories that I read.
i liked the story too, but to add onto the last review while you did most in continuous tense, you wrote things like said and whispered in past tense. if you stick with present tense you need to change them to says and whispers and things like that :P soz just helping out! continue
Author's Response: I didn't mean to write in the continuous tense but I did when I wrote it out on paper and I meant to change it too.
Author's Response: Yeah! I finally changed it! I fixed chapters one and two! Take that my horrible grammer!
That was a good first chapter, I like the way that it started somewhere in the term instead of at the very beginning. James didn't seem to be a bigheaded prick, more of a mischievous teenager, which was good. I liked Sirius and James's interraction with each other, though I just have to ask, Am I right in guessing that you like Sirius more than James? I just had to ask that! It will be interesting to see how you will bring the other Marauders into this, and how you will portray their personalities. I just have to point out one thing: I'm pretty sure that Filch wasn't around yet, because in the fourth book, when Harry is meeting the Weasleys before the 3rd task, Mrs Weasley mentions about how She and Mr Weasley had been out for a nighttime stroll, and Apollyn Pringle, the school caretaker, had caught Mr Weasley, and punished him so badly that he "still has the marks" that was what I remember off the top of my head, so if it isnt word for word sorry, but considering the weasleys and the potters sr seem to be firly close in age, I'd guess that AP was the caretaker. That's all! keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you! ANd yes, I do like Sirius a bit more:) I know that he wasn't the caretaker, but I couldn't find the page where it said who was, so I just kept it to filch.
Summary: A Lily and James story with a twist. The tables are turned when, after years of being chased by James, Lily sees that he has moved on. Who would ever have thought that Lily would be the one to go after James? Join them and their friends in their 7th year and unravel the lost stories of the Marauders.
Hey! excellent new approach to the Lily/James thing! I'm always up for something new and fresh to read, not to mention write lol Oh wait, that sounded as if I plan to copy yours lol no I would never do that, I just meant I am not a fan of cliches either! hehe I'm going to give this a ten because It was very well written, and it wasn't like most of the other fanfictions about them!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad that you like my approach, don't worry I never thought you meant you would copy it! Cliches are really annoying, aren't they? =)
Summary: James loves Lily. Lily hates James. Or so she tells everyone. But could the hate really be a mask? Read to find out.
OK...interesting, I love how you ended the chapter! But, Im trying to vhange all of my reviews to include constructive critism, so don't take any of thisto heart please!! Ok, number one, pretty obvious. First year arent allowed brooms, so James wouldnt have a shooting star or anything like that. second, you wrote Hymn, was a pureblood wizard, who was very close to her parents. Hymn is a girl, so she'd be a witch...like the name though! last, I'm not going to hold this against you, but it seems to me that on this site it's becoming a little too common for James and Lily to start out friends... I'm not blaming it on you, don't worry, it's just that it won't be special before long, and it makes stories like mine seem cliche... Update soon, liking it so far!
The Trials and Tribulations of James Potter's Love Life by morticia b
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 26]
Summary: James Potter and Lily Evans don't get along. Not from James' lack of trying thought. This story follows the two throughout their fifth year at Hogwarts and examines their love/hate relationship a little closer.
Ok, i'm torn in this case. The writing itself is fantastic, with alot of detail, and it really draws you in. The only thing is, it would do so much better with more original materiel, because while the writing is excellent, the plot itself is seeming like a clone Lily/james story. You know, as in James asks Lily out, she turns him down while comparing him to various creatures, it all starts out with James dreaming about kissing Lily and is woken up by his friends... Still very good writing though!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I will bear in mind your criticsim because, hopefully, I will be able to write a better story.
Summary: When Lily signs up for private flying lessons, she expects to be taught by her best friend. Instead, she gets assigned James Potter as her private instructor. Can they stop arguing for an hour so Lily can learn how to fly? Everyone deserves a chance to fly, but can Lily conquer her fear of heights and learn how to soar? Most importantly, can she learn how to love the man she least expected to? One-shot songfic to "Defying Gravity" from Wicked
Im being the first reviewer alot lately, I love it :) I know two names very well from reviewing, one was my first ever reviewer, and the other was the first ever person to put me on her favs list, and now we're penpals lol ok, I know, nothing to do with the story. Right, loved the story, it was excellent, it was really long, which was good, because i know how hard it can be to keep the story flowing! Go James for standing up for himself!! :) Lily was a little Lilyish, lol sorry but I hate that Lily when she gets like that, she's so dramatic. sexually assulting her, for goodness sake, he was about to kiss her, not well you know lol. Don't worry, you're not losing points for that, because Many people write Lily like that, and who am i to say if that's right or wrong, like how I don't like it when people make snide comments on how I don't write Lily as an overdramatic untrusting thing in my story, when there is no proof, quite the opposite, that she is like that. doing it again, arent I? sorry, 10/10!
Author's Response: Ooh, long reviews! I really like long reviews! I never thought of it as very good, so thanks for giving it a ten. It was interesting for me to write James, because I usually write Lily. The thing is, I sort of think of myself as like the Lily in OotP, and I'm kinda overdramatic, so I think she has to overdramatic for the sake of the character. She's a very strong character, but I would not want to be her best friend. Thanks for the review!
Summary: A sweet little one-shot about James and Lily =) Please review! =)
Ok, time for some constructive critism lol Sorry, but it just seemed a little rushed, like one second she loves Craig, the next hes drunk and kisses another girl, Lily gets "heartbroken" and nicks off to kiss James Potter. It just, sort of, sounded like she was doing that to make herself feel better as opposed to actually being in love with him. Good writing style though. :)
Author's Response: ok thank you, i'll keep that in mind for my next one
Summary: This story of love proves that even the coldest hearts can be changed in the face of love. Yay over 500 times read!! (It is a romeo-juliet-esque fic. It is set in a diferent time period so forgive the opening....)
HEEYY!!! hihihi omg im sorry it took me so long to review, but i have been so busy, what with school and stuff ya know? I'm so proud of you! I just reread it, and it hasd improved so much since the draft I helped you with, it's the little things that count you know? I'm glad that you took some of my advice to heart, it really turned out good, as I said! thanks for the thanks in you account :P hope that you write more, and omce again, congrats!
Author's Response: You know I had to give you props for all the help! I totally understand the school thing so no problem there... It did get better- didnt it... anyway thanks for the good review Im glad you liked it!