Hello all, I am Kaitlin the Magnificent (or Kitty or aopt, depending) come to infiltrate this website and force all to endure my fanfiction! Which isn't all that bad...
For you who may recognize the penname, I am also angelofplottwists on deviantART, fanfiction.net, and Veritaserum. I am angel of plot twists on Gaia and the Kingdom of Loathing, and aopt on Livejournal.
Interests? I write, and my book is soon to be finished, and hopefully published. A preview can be found on deviantART, along with complaints as to why I only put that part up. I draw (badly), write and read fanfics (Remus/Sirius is my favourite pairing for Harry Potter), eat, sleep, go to Tae Kwon Do, and enjoy drama.
Um...that's about it. In case you still haven't guessed (name could be a clue) I am female. I live in California and (try) to speak the Queen's English, although it's hard when no one else does.
A note: I will eventually be submitting a story which is a collaboration with a friend. I'll say it's not solely mine, but bear in mind that it may not be the only collaboration on here. That is all.
First story up!
Summary: Slash- One Shot-Remus/Sirius. When Remus and Sirius are forced into yet another detention together a heartfelt conversation takes place between the two of the them.
That was awesome. I loved it, even if it didn't have the normal load of angst I normally read. Good job.
Summary: Remus Lupin has lost all hope ever since the death of Sirius. He decides to take a walk to one of the places so important to his past and discovers a familiar face. With the help of this person, Remus will find that Sirius hasn't truly left him.
(A/N: All of the characters and settings in this story belong to JK Rowling. No profit or copyright infringement is intended)
I've read the whole thing - this is amazing. I'd never considered what form Remus' Patronus would take; this was a beautiful exploration of that concept.
Summary: Sirius has been causing trouble in school, and McGonagall asks Andromeda to come in for a meeting with her. A very young Nymphadora Tonks comes along, eager to see her favorite cousin. RL/SB.
That was beautiful. I love how it came from Tonks' perspective and combined childish innocence with Sirius/Remus love. I can't think of anything to work on.
One error I found: Romulus and Remus was a Roman legend (the foundation of the city of Rome). Other than that, the story was excellent.
Summary: Remus Lupin hides behind his books. He fears his curse will hurt more than just him, and wishes he could be loved. A friend is sometimes more than a friend, and almost the cure to his curse...(Remus/Sirius, one-shot)
Hoe sweet! I didn't quite understand Sirius' last comment before he kissed Remus...oh well. Beautifully written, and excellent job capturing the characters. 10/10.
Author's Response: lol thanks! I'm glad you liked it!!!
This was interesting...I can't wait to see what Remus will think; there's two of him!
Ooh, this sounds like a great story! I am incredibly intrigued...by the way, who exactly will said slash involve? I must admit, I am partial to several MWPP era slash relationships...
Author's Response: Thanks! I will include Sirus/Remus slash later, hope you like that!
Summary: Hermione's confused about things, so decides to draw up someone's Arithmancy chart. She's rather pleased with the results.
This was very nice. I noticed there were a few lines that while the syllables were in rhythm, if said aloud, they sounded odd. For example: "There could not be a better sight to my work-wearied eyes." Not to rewrite your poem or anything, but one variation to make it flow better might be "No better sight could be before my worked and weary eyes." Besides a few lines like this, your poem was excellent, and the imagery was excellent.
Author's Response: Hey, that might work! I've been too lazy to try and figure something out to fix those lines.
Summary: Curious as to why Sirius always seemed to harbor a special hate for Snape? The answer is here. Set in the time of the Marauders, sixth year, this is a startling revelation into their animosity. Rated R for offensive language, GA, MOL and (eventual mentioning of a) SSP. SSP means SAME SEX PAIRING. Do not read if you are offended by such things.
Edited by mod
Hmm. I didn't understand it at all until I realized I was reading the fifth chapter...but very interesting!
Author's Response: Ah, but did you read the rest of it? And did you like it? Those are the important questions, aopt. I suppose I should put the link for the first chapter, right? I'll have to figure it out first, though. Oh well. Thanks for reviewing!
Summary: Through the eyes of several characters (and several fanfiction writers), the lives of our puppies are documented, from first year at Hogwarts to the death of the last.
hey, this story seems familiar...XD
Author's Response: Really? I wonder why....*grin*
Summary: This will be a collection of poems about Remus Lupin, the last marauder.
In the first poem he is remembering Sirius, and though he fears he will forget some things about him, he knows there is one thing that will stay with him forever.
The SSP warning is there only as a precaution, names are not mentioned so the poem can be interpreted differently if you wish.
The second chapter, I Weep for the Living is up. The SSP warning doesn't apply, it is not connected to the first chapter. Dumbledore is watching Lupin at the funeral of Lily, James and Peter. And he weeps... for the living.
Brilliant! As far as I can tell, the emotion is right...I liked how he's afraid of forgetting everything, and then all the memories, and...yeah, well, I pretty much liked all of it. It's nice that you write in a free verse-esque style, because the ones written too fixedly often come out sounding forced. Another good element was how you let the reader know who it was about with mentioning names.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! I wasn't sure if I should mention the names in the summary, but I'm glad you thought it was a good idea. Thanks for your review, the next installment will be up after Christmas probably.
Summary: “True Love” Two little words. One big concept. A belief that someone, somewhere is holding the key to your heart. The only thing you have to do is find them. So where is this person? And how do you find them?
Some people do, some people think they do, and some people never do. Sirius didn’t know if Remus was his true love, but he didn’t care. He would follow the werewolf to the end of the world if he had to.
Winner of challenge #1 In defence of love; of the February Valentine's Day challenge
QSQ Nomination for best Same-Sex Pairing Fic
Pretty good...you had me worried for a minute! The story was a nice touch, too. It was a little predictable, but otherwise good.
Author's Response: Well, I'm a little predictable myself too. When you say the story you're refering to Eldreda's story, am I correct? If that's the case I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review!