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Once There Was A Darkness: Year One by C_A_Campbell

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Winner of the 2008 QSQ for Best Female Original Character. Twelve years ago, one man's life was changed forever by three simple words: “Severus, I'm pregnant.”

Now, twelve years later, a girl will embark on the journey of a lifetime. But life at Hogwarts for a first year is far from simple, especially not when she's in the same year as Harry Potter. She will face enemies, choices and danger, while struggling to deal with her past's dark secrets that, after all these years, still threatens to destroy her.

One girl's journey. One man's desperate search. One last chance for Severus Snape to find the daughter he lost.

Year One of Seven of the Once There Was A Darkness series. Year Two now posted.
Reviewer: Fifth Signed
Date: 10/18/10 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Fifteen: Nothing But the Truth (pt 2)

I couldn't stop reading this! I am excited to go onto Year Two. This is the first story I've read thus far that had so much to do with Snape and I'm loving it!

Once There Was A Darkness: Year Two by C_A_Campbell

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Winner of the 2008 QSQ for the Best Female Original Character. Shiloh Sander’s second year begins peacefully, but it is a peace that is easily shattered when words of blood appear on Hogwarts’ ancient walls. With rumours of the Heir of Slytherin floating through the halls, battlelines are drawn in the Slytherin common room, between those who will support the Heir and those who will not. Soon Shiloh must decide where she stands. But the choice is only the beginning. In the middle of it all, Severus Snape continues his diligent search to find the daughter he lost, never knowing that this is the year it will come to an end. One girl’s choice. One man’s deepest wish. One year that will change both their lives…forever.

Sequel to Once There Was A Darkness: Year One. Warnings of Abuse and Mental Disorders are for brief mentions of child abuse and insanity.

Reviewer: Fifth Signed
Date: 08/02/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: Surprise, Surprise

Hey! It's been a while since you posted anything are you still working on this? I love it so much!

Reviewer: Fifth Signed
Date: 08/15/11 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter Thirty-Two: Mudblood

This was good. I definitely didn't guess that Nicolette would be a Muggleborn! A note: Sometimes it seems like you typed a word with T9 and it guessed the wrong word. I can't find an example right now, but I've seen it a few times in this chapter and a few prior. Other than that, it's great! As soon as we discovered that Nic was a muggleborn, I knew she was going to be petrified. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Fifth Signed
Date: 04/11/11 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty-Seven: Valiancy

Very nice. My favorite line is "Promises, promises." That is so Persephone.

Reviewer: Fifth Signed
Date: 08/11/11 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter Thirty-One: Made to Be Broken

I totally squealed when Jacob and Shiloh made up. It made me so happy! I think I am officially emotionally attached to these characters!

A Different View On Love by helz_belz

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: James would do anything to get inside Lily’s head. Lily would do anything to get away from James. Lily was brewing a banned potion. James went to find her. Lily made a mistake and the potion exploded. James got his wish, but is it much more than he bargained for?

Now Complete!

After a year the Epilouge is now up! Come read for a bit of fun!!

Runner up QSQ - Best Chaptered Canon Romance

Reason for Nomination:
This is the most unique take on how James and Lily really got to know each other. The story is hilarious and keeps you laughing throughout, but it never lets you forget the serious stuff. Plus, she somehow manages to end each chapter with a nice cliffhanger.

Reviewer: Fifth Signed
Date: 08/11/11 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve: Objection!

That just made me cry. Oh my goodness.

Reviewer: Fifth Signed
Date: 08/11/11 Title: Chapter 15: Epilouge

This whole story made me laugh so hard! And it made me cry! And it made me love Lily and James all over again. Thank you.

"This Magic Moment" by type-n-shadow

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: [He] walked a little taller that day. We had to tip our hats to him. He was lucky she hadn't beat the crap out of him. We wouldn't have blamed her. What he'd done was sneaky, rotten and low... and cool. Not another one among us would've ever in a million years... even for a million dollars had the guts to put the move on the lifeguard. He did. He had kissed a woman, and he had kissed her long and good. - The Sandlot
Reviewer: Fifth Signed
Date: 08/28/10 Title: Chapter 1: "While Your Lips are Close to Mine..."

That was so great! I"m still laughing as I write this! And it's exactly something I could see Sirius doing! Hahahaha!

Fred and George's Busy Day by Northumbrian

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
WINNER of the BEST GENERAL story – Quicksilver Quills Awards 2010.
In the weeks and months after their eldest brother’s wedding Fred and George Weasley continued to run their business. Two decent honest and respectable businessmen, they had no involvement at all in any illicit conduct. They certainly didn’t get involved in any anti-Voldemort activities. Definitely not. No. Not them. Never. They wouldn’t. Honestly.
Reviewer: Fifth Signed
Date: 11/14/10 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: A Call to Arms

The clue with Katie Bell's name is really great. I didn't even notice it until Hannah said something. You have a good writing style.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Codewords are supposed to be unnoticable. -N-

Stars Apart by Willow Rosenberg

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The sequel to “Trickster”: The Marauders return to Hogwarts for their seventh and final year. Lily and James juggle more responsibility than ever, and James learns that convincing Lily to go on an actual date with him is harder than he would have imagined. Remus frets about post-Hogwarts life while Peter drifts even further from his friends. But when Sirius discovers a group of fourth-years who are bound and determined to steal the Marauders’ title of Greatest Hogwarts Troublemakers he wages war, rallying his friends so they can maintain their legacy. Meanwhile, outside the castle grounds, Voldemort is gathering supporters in unending preparation for a much darker battle…

and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)

-E. E. Cummings

September 2012: HEY guess what I couldn't wait, and the third installment, "World Enough," is UP NOW under James/Lily. Or just under my name. Or at this link: http://fanfiction.mugglenet.com/viewstory.php?sid=92131. Yay! :D

Reviewer: Fifth Signed
Date: 08/16/11 Title: Chapter 20: Viva la Vida

AHHHHHH!!!!! Why have you not written the next chapter! Oh my gosh! I'm on a James/Lily hype right now and this is definitely one of the best I've read thus far! Keep writing!

Author's Response: i have, it's in queue! sit tight :) thanks so much, I'm glad you like it!!

We'll Be Young Forever by Proserpina

Rated: 6th-7th Years •

“You and I, we'll be young forever!” *

After a long, interesting, sweltering summer the Marauders are back for their sixth year, and they feel as though their teenage lives have only just begun.

James has been pursuing Lily for years, and he sure as hell isn't going to give up now. Sirius might actually be falling in love (though of course that can't be possible, can it?), and Remus is struggling with problems in his own family. Meanwhile, Peter has to decide how much worth he can put on friends who he will never live up to. And then there's Lily Evans, a girl who's starting to fall for the very man she swore not to. Diana McKinnon, her best friend, keeps finding herself staring at a certain grey-eyed Gryffindor, even though every piece of logic she has tells her that he's trouble.

But even though there's the looming danger of NEWTs, pranks, oily Slytherins, and physical education, a much bigger problem has presented itself. The Marauders' sixteen-year-old world isn't the safe place it used to be. There are rumors of danger and dark magic throughout the school, and of a powerful dark wizard named Voldemort. The Gryffindor sixth years have to decide where their true allegiances lie and how much they are willing to sacrifice for a war that seems impossible to win.

*Title and quote taken from the lyrics of Katy Perry's summer hit Teenage Dream.

Note 3/26: Ok guys so I know that I haven't updated in forever, but I promise I'll finish the story! I'm struggling with some stuff, but hang in there, I haven't forgotten.

Lots and lots and lots of love, Olivia

Reviewer: Fifth Signed
Date: 08/02/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: Runaway

Very nice! I like the intensity of the fight between Walburga and Sirius :)

That Fateful Year by ginny6142

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: We always knew that James Potter and Lily Evans would end up together, otherwise the Boy-Who-Lived would never have been born, but no one else did until the day they got married. Many people still believed the marriage would end in failure, but the two were deeply in love from a connection they developed during their seventh year. This is a story of that connection.
Reviewer: Fifth Signed
Date: 08/02/12 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I really like your style! I noticed it's been about a year since anyone commented or anything. Is this story still going to be continued?

Out of the Fire and Into the Cupboard by HalfASlug

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: There's a reason that adults don't usually play hide and seek - especially when they are nothing more than overgrown children.
Reviewer: Fifth Signed
Date: 04/21/15 Title: Chapter 1: oneshot

Oh my gosh. I wish I could have laughed out loud while reading this, but, alas, I'm at the library. Great writing!