This is very good. I like your Percy and I love the scene at the end with him and George. Very well-written :)
Author's Response: Thank you! It's my first time writing Percy so I was a bit worried about how it turned out. I'm so glad you liked it. <3Mere
Summary: Cecilia Peverell, pureblood in a dying family line, is conflicted with the presence of a young man in her heart. Tom Riddle the second, whose parents' land adjoins that of her family. But she can never love a Muggle, being a Peverell. While avoiding the affections of Gerald Potter, she descends into a mad romance with Tom, until he vanishes for a year, with the tramp Merope.
Years later, who is Voldemort REALLY?
Idea taken from the chapter of HBP titled "The House of Gaunt" in which Tom Riddle Sr. is seen with a supposedly Muggle girl named Cecilia.
This is very good. I am enjoying the story and the idea is an awesome one! I'm looking forward to updates :D
Author's Response: First review on this one yay!! Updates will be as rapid as I can make them, now I know someone will be following it! And yah, I like the idea, too . . . Jo really left us an open door with the one-scene presence of the girl Cecilia. :) -Joy