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Oh. My. Gosh. I loved this story! It was so funny that I was laughing out loud (making my teacher suspicious of why I wasn't writing an essay ;) ) !
Good chapter! But James' middle name is Sirius, not Ronald. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: I know! This story is AU, with some random canon details mixed in, lol.
Oh my gosh. I love it! Can't wait to read more! Hermione/Draco stories are my favorite and your is awesome! :D
Author's Response: I am very happy to hear that you are enjoying my story! Thank you, Jenny
That was cute! I liked how you captured the awkwardness of it all. I feel like you really made Hermione, Ron, Harry and Ginny very much like how they were in the books.
Author's Response: Thanks, awkward is what I was trying to achieve. The entire thing canít be anything other than awkward nd fumbling. I try to keep Hermione, Ron, Harry and Ginny in character, Iím glad you think Iíve succeeded. -N-
We are all influenced by the actions or inactions of our parents. The same is true of Scorpius Malfoy; he has been raised by an overly protective mother and a father who is still coming to grips with the mess that his own father made of his life. Scorpius knows that he will be judged at Hogwarts by what others know or think they know about his father and grandfather.
At Hogwarts Scorpius will meet:
Albus Potter the middle child of ‘The Great Harry Potter’ and Quidditch star Ginny Weasley Potter. A boy who not only has things to live up to but an older brother ready to remind him of who’s boss.
Rose Weasley, Albus’ surrogate sister/first cousin, struggling in her own way, not her mother’s way, to succeed.
Kaitlin Jones, daughter of Tornados player Owain Jones and favorite niece of Gwenog Jones, who is at home on a broom and lost almost everywhere else.
Jimber Dokes recent immigrant from the West Indies trying to fit his own magical heritage Vardoo with the Western style of magic taught at the school
Thad Vance, the Gryffindor Quidditch captain, his grandfather and all of his uncles and aunts were killed by Death Eaters, maybe Lucius Malfoy
Meanwhile in London, Draco and Astoria Malfoy try to build a new life and legacy by betting all they own on a Potions Shop in Diagon Alley.
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Ah! I loved the new chapter! Seriously cannot wait until the next one comes up! Hurry please!
I loved it! It was really well written and very creative! Please tell me you are writing another one. Scorpius and Rose are so cute, I really liked how you captured the innocence of their childhood crush.
I loved it! Great ending, I loved how I had to keep guessing who it was. This is my favorite of your stories.
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Good chapter! I like that the Malfoy's didn't get ALL of their fortune from stealing. But I felt that maybe Hermione should have had a little more trouble with the Malfoy Manor, I mean she was tortured there! But maybe I just want to see her have an emotional breakdown so Draco can comfort her in the best way possible :) update soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked my little invention about the Malfoy fortune. I wasn't sure how much to go into detail about Hermione's discomfort. It's been almost two years since she was tortured there and I didn't want to repeat what I already wrote in the first story. I guess I'm taking the time heals all wounds approach. Thank you for your feedback, Jenny
Was Flitwick really half goblin? Clever idea. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I got that from the Harry Potter Wiki, so I think it's a JKR original idea. I'll try to post the new chapter soon. The site has been shut down for a few days. Thanks, Jenny
I cannot thank you enough for writing another story!! I loved your first one and I know that this one will be just as good!
Author's Response: Thank you for the positive feedback. Your enouragement makes me happy to write another story! --Jenny
As always, the Harry Potter universe and everything in it is property of J.K. Rowling.
This story is on a temporary hiatus until I finish some of my other WIPs. Thank you for coming to check it out, and I promise I'm not going to just let it end here!
That was a very nice one-shot! I really like Scorpius' insecurity about being in Slytherin.
Author's Response: Thank you! It's been niggling at the back of my mind, begging for continuation, so we'll have to see. :)