This story was awesome; it kept me interested right to the end. I loved the look inside Tom's head. I thought it was great how it came full circle with Tom thinking about his B-day at the beginning and the end of the story. The descriptions were great. I felt like someone could make a good movie by expanding this plot a little. Keep up the good work:)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)
Very, very funny. I loved it. You handled the topic very well.
Author's Response: Thank you!