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The Poetry of Severus Snape by Zetera

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A poem which contains revelations of a painful past and present. Short and sweet.
Reviewer: OtterMoone Signed
Date: 07/26/10 Title: Chapter 1: The Poetry of Severus Snape

Amazing :) . Even after 6 years and DH . I always felt a connection with evil ol' Snape, and I felt so bad for him when DH was published and the truth came out. He actually did feel love. And pain. Beautiful poem (: . Timeless.

The Unseemly Proposal by sparx

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: The reign of Voldermort comes to an end, and with it ends the prestige and power Lucius Malfoy once had in the Wizarding World. In order to regain the respect of his fellow wizards and to make them believe that he has turned over a new leaf (which he actually hasn't) and has graciously accepted muggles and Mudbloods, Lucius asks Hermione, a Mudblood, to marry his son, Draco, a pure-blood. Obviously, they both refuse, but Lucius isn't going to give up easily. After all, he wants his status back. He still has a few tricks up his sleeve and is determined to play match-maker. What happens next is a series of events that serve only to bring Hermione and Draco closer, both literally and figuratively speaking. Read to find out how this one unseemly proposal causes absolute chaos in their lives! THIS STORY IS NOT HBP and DH COMPATIBLE! Hey all! Check out my personal info for the expected date of the next update. =)
Reviewer: OtterMoone Signed
Date: 07/27/10 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

Why? Why won't you update? Did you forget about your story? Did you forget about Mugglenet? Did you just start hating your story?? Did you die? Did you forget your Username and/or password?? Please update! PLEASE! Or I will go insane!!! Ok, ok I'm being dramatic ;) I know... but still. PLEASE update. You're killing your readers and causing us to go insane with anticipation! Just add another chapter! Jeez! :)

Dementor's Kiss by Mex

Summary: A poem about how you feel after a dementor kisses you.
Reviewer: OtterMoone Signed
Date: 07/25/10 Title: Chapter 1: Dementor's Kiss

:'( Sad... Very good poem.

Tears of a Shadow by Eponine

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: After falling behind the veil, Sirius travels through a world of nightmares...

~ ~ ~

Sirius Sirius blinks. He cranes his neck to look behind him.


A shiver runs up his spine as if a cold, dead finger is stroking it

"Whos there?! he calls out to the voice, spinning clockwise to try and catch a glimpse of whatever it is.

Sirius Black

Reviewer: OtterMoone Signed
Date: 07/27/10 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

Was pretty good, but I don't get it... What exactly happened to Sirius? What exactly are those.... "Adgias"? Why do they want to destroy people? And what's going to happen to Sirius now? :(

Shattered by A_Pink_lady

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: The whole world shattered and broke.

Harrys world comes crashing down when the girl he loves is murdered. Witness how this affected him and how it means that his life would never be the same again

Reviewer: OtterMoone Signed
Date: 08/12/10 Title: Chapter 1: One shot

; A ;

Thats all I can say. It's a face, btw.

For Bitter or for Worse by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •

All is not well.

George uses work and Firewhisky to cope with Fred's death until a drink with a friend leads to something that dulls pain better than alcohol. Emotionally torn by grief, he struggles to allow Alicia into his life...and then comes baby....

*Winner of the 2008 Quicksilver Quill Award for Best Dark/Angsty Story*

Reviewer: OtterMoone Signed
Date: 07/19/10 Title: Chapter 40: Baby Love

Wow.... good story! *sigh*

Author's Response: Thank you! I think George deserves to be happy in as many stories as possible, :), and you made me happy by reading this one!

Reviewer: OtterMoone Signed
Date: 07/13/10 Title: Chapter 1: Pain and Comfort

Awww.... I've been reading this story, and I really love it, but I just realized It can't have happened, cause on J.K.Rowling's site, it says that George married Angelina and had 2 kids with her: Fred and Roxanne . :'(

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and loving the story! It could have happened when I started writing it after DH came out, sigh, but even after Jo came out with her family tree, I never wavered in my belief that George and Alicia are a great couple. They might not be canon, but thanks to Jo allowing fan fiction, they love and live happily ever after in this alternate dimension of the Potterverse. :)

Courting Death by A Cappella

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A short poem about courting death, from the comprehension of a nineteenth century romancer of the wizarding world.
Reviewer: OtterMoone Signed
Date: 07/25/10 Title: Chapter 1: Courting Death

Very good :) A different type of poem than your Azkaban one, definitely.

Lost Souls by A Cappella

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Those sent to Azkaban are condemned to a place that is worse than death.
Reviewer: OtterMoone Signed
Date: 07/25/10 Title: Chapter 1: Lost Souls

Wow... Very nice :) ! I would say "epic", but I think that might ruin the mood...

Challah and Pumpkin Juice by Calico

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Tzipporah Stein, a Jew living in Vienna, Austria on the eve of WWII, is shocked when she gets a letter telling her she is a witch. The volatile state of Europe as it waits for both a muggle and a wizarding war to begin has prompted Hogwarts to take in students from many countries. How will Tzipporah handle magic, mischief, and even a little romance while trying to be true to her religion and culture at the same time?
Reviewer: OtterMoone Signed
Date: 07/29/10 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four: Aboard the Hogwarts Express

Yay! I really really like this story so far! Very good at staying true to the HP Universe :) and yes, I like your song.

Reviewer: OtterMoone Signed
Date: 07/29/10 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Nine: Chanukah Revelations

Hahaha, Jolene is my middle name ^u^ you're an amazing writer. I love this story. It's so believable, and you stuck to the HP Universe while at the same time making it your own... if that makes sense. I'm glad Zippy finally told someone. Now (hopefully) she won't feel so alone!

Reviewer: OtterMoone Signed
Date: 07/29/10 Title: Chapter 16: Epilogue

Amazing story :) . Very good. I loved it, and I'm adding this story to my favorites.

More Than A Game by Hypatia

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: “Lord Voldemort has never had a friend, nor do I believe that he has ever wanted one.” -Dumbledore, HBP, ch. 13

Dumbledore was rarely wrong, only once did Lord Voldemort desire a friend. It started out as only a game…

First place winner in the Color of Love Challenge.

Nominated for Best Romance Between Other Characters in the 2008 QSQs!
Reviewer: OtterMoone Signed
Date: 07/29/10 Title: Chapter 1: More Than A Game

Wow. Good story! Very sad. I liked how you used Snape's aunt and mom. Very believable as well :) . Voldy DID love, but he just couldn't change for the better when he had the chance (well, as better as he could become after killing his own father and grandparents..), and so he missed out on his one chance at love. I also thought it was so sweet when he said "Lydia, I wouldn't harm you..." I guess even Voldemort had one exception! Very well done.

Dumbledore's Delight by Vindictus Viridian

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Family problems derail a young wizard's trip to Greece in the late nineteenth century, and Godric's Hollow feels more than a little too small. However, a stranger in town keeps the world from feeling too far away.

Dumbledore/Grindelwald, with other ships passing in the night.
Reviewer: OtterMoone Signed
Date: 08/03/10 Title: Chapter 5: Hallows

Good story... so update? Please?

Albus Potter and the Year of the Badger by Sly One

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •

His fears? Flying...his own wand...fitting in...sticking out! His best friends? A passionate fire-breathing cousin, and a cool, aloof Death Eater's son. His destiny? Anything but ordinary!

Join Albus as he experiances his first year at Hogwarts and begins the journey out from under his father's collosal shadow, if he can survive it of course!

Meet the new Tenacious Trio, Albus Potter, Scorpius Malfoy, and Rose Weasley

Reviewer: OtterMoone Signed
Date: 08/13/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 A Sorted Problems

Hmm... Interesting... I'm adding it to my favorites so that I don't lose my place... I would have chosen Ravenclaw for the 3 of them over Hufflepuff, though :/ ...

The Lions of Gryffindor by Equinox Chick

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: It is June 1976 and The Marauders are at the top of their game. From the outside they look to have everything.But appearances, as the saying goes, can be deceptive.

James is discovering that not everything in life is his for the taking. Sirius knows he will have to defy his formidable family. Remus lives in constant fear of his life beyond Hogwarts. As for Peter... Well, Peter is struggling to live up to his friends.

The ties of friendship are strong, but war is raging and with a dark power rising those ties will inevitably fray.

Added to the mix is an adversary called Severus Snape, some lost House Points, a prank or two and a whole lot of Lily.

This is a Marauder tale.

This is a story of what made them special.

This is a story of why it started to go wrong for The Lions of Gryffindor.

OH MY GOOD GODRIC! Lions of Gryffindor won the 2009 QSQ for Best Marauders' Era Story. Amazed and incredibly grateful to those who nominated, judged and have beta'd this fic. THANK YOU.

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Trick or Treat!
3. She clicks on her mouse and swipes her wand;
Some stories go up, and some stories are gone.
Stories of her own? Why, she has plenty!
Fewer than one-hundred, but far more than twenty.

Reviewer: OtterMoone Signed
Date: 07/11/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Turning Point

Ah, I take it that silvery version of James was Harry in the pensieve? Interesting! Makes ya wonder how the pensieve actually works then, huh? (:

Author's Response: Yes, he sees Harry but thinks it's himself. This will get mentioned again at the end of the story. My theory on that point was that because of the genetic connection and the emotions both were feeling at the time caused Harry to become slightly visible. Thanks for the review ~Carole~

Five Weeks by Equinox Chick

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: When Nymphadora Tonks arrived at the Ministry to save Harry and his friends, she was a young, fearless Auror. Five weeks later she’s a mess. Her once vibrant hair is a drab brown and she can barely smile. Has she lost her nerve? Is it guilt over Sirius’ death? Or is something else happening in her life that has ridden roughshod over her unusual powers?

I am Equinox Chick from Hufflepuff and this is my entry for Round 7 of The Gauntlet.

Special thanks to Cassie (ms leading) for beta'ing this for me.
Reviewer: OtterMoone Signed
Date: 07/22/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Her Day to Die

I'm going to make a conjecture from only reading the first chapter, and it's probably going to turn out wrong, but.... my guess is that the rose and message are from Bellatrix and she's talking about killing Sirius "for the best of the Black family". Wooh, probably a corny guess. Or maybe, I was already supposed to know who sent the rose, and I'm just a bit thick and didn't catch it. Now, I'll read the next few chapters! Oh, and by the way, Gryffindors are loyal, too :) .

Author's Response: I know Gryffindors are loyal - I just love my Hufflepuffs. (on the beta boards I'm a Hufflepuff and so I'm very very biased). Yes it was Bellatrix sending the rose and message. Wow, this was one of my first stories and I've not thought about it for ages. Thank you for reviewing. ~Carole~

Reviewer: OtterMoone Signed
Date: 07/22/11 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- The Life of Sirius Black

D'awww.... I like how you made Sirius almost like a big brother figure to her :) But why are Tonks and Lupin already together? I take it that Lupin starts his nonsense in the next chapter.

Author's Response: My feeling with Tonks and Remus is that they were certainly together at the time of Sirius' death - or heading that way, and then it broke up when he was sent to the werewolf lair. In the books, (beginning of HBP) Tonks certainly doesn't want to spend time near Albus Dumbldore and I wonder if it's because he sent Remus away. Thank you ~Carole~

Reviewer: OtterMoone Signed
Date: 07/22/11 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Shattered Dreams

Nice little story. It definitely lets us feel Tonks' pain, even if only slightly. Oh, and that first review? I posted that before I finished with the first chapter :P Silly me!

Author's Response: Poor Tonks. If she'd survived the battle, I'm not sure she would have been happy without Remus, even with Teddy. Thank you for the review ~Carole~

You dance divinely, Mr Weasley by Equinox Chick

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: It has been two and a half years since Fred died and George Weasley still feels the pain of loss. So when Ginny and Hermione turn up at the shop to ask him to fill in for a sick Ron at the Quidditch Winter Ball his initial response is a definite no! But Hermione’s plight, for some reason, moves him and he reluctantly agrees to partner his soon to be sister-in-law to the ball. With new robes and some dazzling dance steps, he little realises that this could be the night his life changes for the better.
Reviewer: OtterMoone Signed
Date: 07/22/11 Title: Chapter 1: You dance divinely, Mr Weasley.

I just KNEW that dress was going to end up having been important in the getting-together of her grandparents!!! Anyway, it was very good, and the sudden twist with Krum was funny :)

Author's Response: Ha ha ha - the dress is based on a dress I have. I wanted George and Angelina to have a lovely first kiss and start being happy together. Krum made me giggle too. ~Carole~