Amazing :) . Even after 6 years and DH . I always felt a connection with evil ol' Snape, and I felt so bad for him when DH was published and the truth came out. He actually did feel love. And pain. Beautiful poem (: . Timeless.
Why? Why won't you update? Did you forget about your story? Did you forget about Mugglenet? Did you just start hating your story?? Did you die? Did you forget your Username and/or password?? Please update! PLEASE! Or I will go insane!!! Ok, ok I'm being dramatic ;) I know... but still. PLEASE update. You're killing your readers and causing us to go insane with anticipation! Just add another chapter! Jeez! :)
:'( Sad... Very good poem.
~ ~ ~”Sirius…” Sirius blinks. He cranes his neck to look behind him.
A shiver runs up his spine as if a cold, dead finger is stroking it
"Who’s there?!” he calls out to the voice, spinning clockwise to try and catch a glimpse of whatever it is.
Was pretty good, but I don't get it... What exactly happened to Sirius? What exactly are those.... "Adgias"? Why do they want to destroy people? And what's going to happen to Sirius now? :(
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Thats all I can say. It's a face, btw.
All is not well.
George uses work and Firewhisky to cope with Fred's death until a drink with a friend leads to something that dulls pain better than alcohol. Emotionally torn by grief, he struggles to allow Alicia into his life...and then comes baby....
*Winner of the 2008 Quicksilver Quill Award for Best Dark/Angsty Story*
Wow.... good story! *sigh*
Author's Response: Thank you! I think George deserves to be happy in as many stories as possible, :), and you made me happy by reading this one!
Awww.... I've been reading this story, and I really love it, but I just realized It can't have happened, cause on J.K.Rowling's site, it says that George married Angelina and had 2 kids with her: Fred and Roxanne . :'(
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and loving the story! It could have happened when I started writing it after DH came out, sigh, but even after Jo came out with her family tree, I never wavered in my belief that George and Alicia are a great couple. They might not be canon, but thanks to Jo allowing fan fiction, they love and live happily ever after in this alternate dimension of the Potterverse. :)
Very good :) A different type of poem than your Azkaban one, definitely.
Wow... Very nice :) ! I would say "epic", but I think that might ruin the mood...
Yay! I really really like this story so far! Very good at staying true to the HP Universe :) and yes, I like your song.
Hahaha, Jolene is my middle name ^u^ you're an amazing writer. I love this story. It's so believable, and you stuck to the HP Universe while at the same time making it your own... if that makes sense. I'm glad Zippy finally told someone. Now (hopefully) she won't feel so alone!
Amazing story :) . Very good. I loved it, and I'm adding this story to my favorites.
Wow. Good story! Very sad. I liked how you used Snape's aunt and mom. Very believable as well :) . Voldy DID love, but he just couldn't change for the better when he had the chance (well, as better as he could become after killing his own father and grandparents..), and so he missed out on his one chance at love. I also thought it was so sweet when he said "Lydia, I wouldn't harm you..." I guess even Voldemort had one exception! Very well done.
Good story... so update? Please?
His fears? Flying...his own wand...fitting in...sticking out! His best friends? A passionate fire-breathing cousin, and a cool, aloof Death Eater's son. His destiny? Anything but ordinary!
Join Albus as he experiances his first year at Hogwarts and begins the journey out from under his father's collosal shadow, if he can survive it of course!
Meet the new Tenacious Trio, Albus Potter, Scorpius Malfoy, and Rose Weasley
Hmm... Interesting... I'm adding it to my favorites so that I don't lose my place... I would have chosen Ravenclaw for the 3 of them over Hufflepuff, though :/ ...
Trick or Treat!
3. She clicks on her mouse and swipes her wand;
Some stories go up, and some stories are gone.
Stories of her own? Why, she has plenty!
Fewer than one-hundred, but far more than twenty.
Ah, I take it that silvery version of James was Harry in the pensieve? Interesting! Makes ya wonder how the pensieve actually works then, huh? (:
Author's Response: Yes, he sees Harry but thinks it's himself. This will get mentioned again at the end of the story. My theory on that point was that because of the genetic connection and the emotions both were feeling at the time caused Harry to become slightly visible. Thanks for the review ~Carole~
I'm going to make a conjecture from only reading the first chapter, and it's probably going to turn out wrong, but.... my guess is that the rose and message are from Bellatrix and she's talking about killing Sirius "for the best of the Black family". Wooh, probably a corny guess. Or maybe, I was already supposed to know who sent the rose, and I'm just a bit thick and didn't catch it. Now, I'll read the next few chapters! Oh, and by the way, Gryffindors are loyal, too :) .
Author's Response: I know Gryffindors are loyal - I just love my Hufflepuffs. (on the beta boards I'm a Hufflepuff and so I'm very very biased). Yes it was Bellatrix sending the rose and message. Wow, this was one of my first stories and I've not thought about it for ages. Thank you for reviewing. ~Carole~
D'awww.... I like how you made Sirius almost like a big brother figure to her :) But why are Tonks and Lupin already together? I take it that Lupin starts his nonsense in the next chapter.
Author's Response: My feeling with Tonks and Remus is that they were certainly together at the time of Sirius' death - or heading that way, and then it broke up when he was sent to the werewolf lair. In the books, (beginning of HBP) Tonks certainly doesn't want to spend time near Albus Dumbldore and I wonder if it's because he sent Remus away. Thank you ~Carole~
Nice little story. It definitely lets us feel Tonks' pain, even if only slightly. Oh, and that first review? I posted that before I finished with the first chapter :P Silly me!
Author's Response: Poor Tonks. If she'd survived the battle, I'm not sure she would have been happy without Remus, even with Teddy. Thank you for the review ~Carole~
I just KNEW that dress was going to end up having been important in the getting-together of her grandparents!!! Anyway, it was very good, and the sudden twist with Krum was funny :)
Author's Response: Ha ha ha - the dress is based on a dress I have. I wanted George and Angelina to have a lovely first kiss and start being happy together. Krum made me giggle too. ~Carole~