I LOOOOVE Harry Potter! I'm a normal band geek (uh, wait, can band geeks even be called normal?) And I love to write. If you see a drastic change from my first fanfics to ones I write later on, you can probably assume I MIGHT have gotten the hang of this :P
You spelled "heels" wrong twice. :/ This is, overall, poorly thought out...
Great, and I like that it's scandalous love that shouldn't be happening since Fred is married, but if you plan to split Fred and Alicia, what happens to poor Georgie? D:
Cute, but it could be longer.