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A Moment, A Love by jenny b

Rated: Professors • 179 Reviews Past Featured Story
A dream, aloud, a kiss, a cry …

Pregnant at seventeen. I was not that kind of girl. My final year at Hogwarts was supposed to be the best yet – filled with Quidditch matches, parties with my best friends and Outstandings in all my NEWTs. But now I was facing morning sickness, young mothers’ group and irate teachers, all whilst trying to hold my relationship with Lysander together.

What on earth was I going to do?
Reviewer: cddn Signed
Date: 06/29/10 Title: Chapter 3: In Which Lily gets Horrendously Drunk, and then has a Horrendous Thought

Okay, I buy Lily as a wild child - all of her mother's mischief and rebellious spirit with none of the fear of imminent death and horror that weighed down her parents' generation. What strikes me as off is her naivete. It took her three months to figure this out? Maybe if she hadn't had morning sickness - but that's such a dead giveaway. I'd have at least expected one of her friends to go, "Merlin, Lils, what are you, preggo?" before now. Having had babies myself, I can't help but think that a girl who goes three months without even thinking, "wait a sec..." is one who's completely unaware of her body, and I don't see Ginny's daughter (much less Hermione's niece and a girl with so many older female cousins) growing up that clueless.

That aside, good story so far. I really enjoyed WWC and I am looking forward to the appearance of more family members in this one and getting to know more about Lysander.

The Secret Diary of Hermione Granger by Northumbrian

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 21 Reviews
Summary: Four years after the Battle, a strange desire draws Hermione Granger. What could possibly make her visit Malfoy Manor?
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Date: 06/29/10 Title: Chapter 1: The Secret Diary of Hermione Granger

LOL! Excellent! Anti-Dramione indeed. Way to go. Looking forward to more "Aurors and Schoogirls" - not too much longer, I hope?

Author's Response: Anti-Dramione nice phrase. If that's what this is then there should be more anti-Dramione stories in my opinion. I will be resubmitting the next chapter of A&S within a couple of days. N