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Behind the Curtain by Virgil
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 25]

Summary:

“…he fell through the ancient doorway and disappeared behind the veil, which fluttered for a moment as though in a high wind and then fell back into place… Sirius must be just behind the curtain…”

Sirius Black didn’t die when he fell through the veil in the Department of Mysteries. He was transported to another world: our world, where Hogwarts doesn’t exist and magic lives only in the fantasy books. As Sirius tries to understand this strange new world and find his way home, he runs into some unlikely old friends. Nothing is the same behind the curtain.



Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Profanity, Suicide

Word count: 5172 Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/11/10 Updated: 07/17/10


Reviewer: paintswithflute Signed
Date: 06/04/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

A very, very interesting concept, that I hope you explore more. Right now it seems like you could go in more depth, but you haven't written much so I'm not able to judge. But a very awesome and interesting concept that you've written very well.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review! (Do you play the flute? That makes you awesome =] ) Peace, Virgil

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