I'm a girl, my favorite color is purple, and I would DIE without Harry Potter. I don't write much, but I love to read and review. :)
Really sweet! Ron and Hermione are so perfect! :)
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Loved it! You should totally write about their July trip. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks :-D the holiday story is called "Four Owls" and it's lying half-written on my hard-drive somewhere. -N-
We are all influenced by the actions or inactions of our parents. The same is true of Scorpius Malfoy; he has been raised by an overly protective mother and a father who is still coming to grips with the mess that his own father made of his life. Scorpius knows that he will be judged at Hogwarts by what others know or think they know about his father and grandfather.
At Hogwarts Scorpius will meet:
Albus Potter the middle child of ‘The Great Harry Potter’ and Quidditch star Ginny Weasley Potter. A boy who not only has things to live up to but an older brother ready to remind him of who’s boss.
Rose Weasley, Albus’ surrogate sister/first cousin, struggling in her own way, not her mother’s way, to succeed.
Kaitlin Jones, daughter of Tornados player Owain Jones and favorite niece of Gwenog Jones, who is at home on a broom and lost almost everywhere else.
Jimber Dokes recent immigrant from the West Indies trying to fit his own magical heritage Vardoo with the Western style of magic taught at the school
Thad Vance, the Gryffindor Quidditch captain, his grandfather and all of his uncles and aunts were killed by Death Eaters, maybe Lucius Malfoy
Meanwhile in London, Draco and Astoria Malfoy try to build a new life and legacy by betting all they own on a Potions Shop in Diagon Alley.
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More please !!!
Wow, this is really good! Update soon! :)
Author's Response: alas, the site did not accept my third chapter and i'm too busy to work on it some more... :( if you want to continue reading the fanfic though, you can find it either on fanfiction.net or schnoogle.com ... on both of those sights it was accepted
Lovely, it's really sweet and short, plus it's Ron and Hermione, my favorite couple. Nice work. :)
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it,and you have a lovely day!
The tale of Harry Potter ended with the defeat of Lord Voldemort and the start of a new age of peace in the Ministry of Magic and the wizarding world.
The tale of his second son, Albus Potter, however, starts with this, and with his journey to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. But in his first two years at the school for magic, Albus finds that his story will not unfurl as smoothly as one might expect in such a peaceful era. He finds himself confronted with a Hogwarts in turmoil, with a new Headmaster that seeks to chip away at the school's foundation as well as a student body that shuns their own kind. He finds himself opposing his family - such as his very talented, popular older brother James and his best friend and cousin Rose Weasley - and defending those who should be his enemies - such as Scorpius Malfoy, son of the ex-Death Eater Draco Malfoy, Emily Black, a self-centered and bratty girl with a big secret, and Katsurou Sen, the mysterious youngest son of a wealthy wizard family who is almost never seen. Albus even finds that his identity and desire to honor his father, once seeming so simple and sincere, could lead him onto a path he never imagined. Hogwarts has become a twisted Wonderland, where everything that had seemed good outside of the school shows itself to wicked, and everything that had seemed wicked...could possibly be good.
In the midst of all this, danger lurks in Albus Potter's future -- a danger that he will have no choice but to face differently than his famous father would have.
Ahhhh! It ended to fast. So good. Update soon! :)
Author's Response: XD Haha, yeah, I had to unfortunately split what would have been the next chapter into two so that it wouldn't be too long, so this chapter ended a bit shorter than the first one. But not to worry -- I will try to post the next chapter soon! I'm glad you are enjoying. <3
Really good chapter, can't wait to read more!! :)
Whoa, nice twist at the end. Really liked the chapter. Update soon. :)
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! The idea was a bit irresistable to me once I thought of it, I love the idea of Albus having subtle similarities to Snape, albeit without the greasy hair and oversized nose. XD As for updates, I've just finished my next chapter and hopefully it'll be approved, so you should see it soon! <3
OMG!! I can't see where you're going with this, which is good, it keeps me reading. Update soon. :)
Author's Response: Well, thank you! I guess it's good that my stuff isn't too predictable, I can't help but worry about that, when writing a Next Gen fic. ^^;; I've just submitted the next chapter, so hopefully it should appear within the next week! <3
I still cried. Lol You definitely did Ron and Hermione justice. You need to write more about them! :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Wow, I don't know why, but I cry reading this. It's all just so sweet. Ron and Hermione are just so perfect together. :)
Author's Response: Wow the fact that so many people actually cried from something I wrote still amazes me. I don't think I'll ever get over that. And I agree, Ron and Hermione are perfect together :) Thanks for the comments!
From the first time Rose Weasley saw Scorpius Malfoy on the Hogwarts Express, she knew they were fated to be enemies. At least, that was the plan. But as the years went on, she found that it was easier said than done. The gap between who she was and who her family wanted her to be was always widening. Her life becomes a tangled web of mistakes and regrets as she finds herself drawn to the one boy she was told to hate, until finally she makes a choice. A choice that might have just lost her the only one who had always been there for her…
Really cute! :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Awwwww! This is so sweet. I loved it! You need to write more Ron/Hermione fics. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I have been thinking about writing more for them. Just throwing around ideas.
Awwwww! Super cute! :)
Author's Response: Yay! First review! I'm really glad you enjoyed it :D ~Midnight Storm
Wow!! This is really good, can't wait for the next chapter. :)
So cute, loved it!! But the date at the top says Dec. 31st, I thought the story was set Christmas Eve. But still it was a great story. I love your James and Lily. Good job! (:
Author's Response: Hi! Thank you for pointing that out, that's the second time that has happened. I originally set it on New Year's Eve, which was why the date was Dec. 31st. I changed it to fit the prompt better. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for reading this story and for the lovely review - I really appreciate it! ~Gina :)
This was so sweet! I love your Scorpius and Rose, their adorable! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! :D Glad you liked it.
Wow! Really good fic! It's nice to read and put yourself in Ginny's shoes while the trio was missing and everything being so chaotic. Nice job! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you could empathize with her in this.
I really loved this fic!! Your Hermione was so well written and her emotions that you described are so vivid. Nice job! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I am pleased that you enjoyed it. I hope I remained true to the character.
Wow! What caused you to write a story of R/H's 1st daughter's death? That was super random. It was still a good fic though, I even teared up while reading. lol Nice job! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yeah I know it's quite random. I basically just wanted to use that song for a fic because I really love it and I've always thought that SIDS is really terrible, and that it must be hard for parents who have lost children. It took me a while to come up with the right characters to write this story around... and Ron and Hermione really seemed to fit. It's particularly sad for them, because they're trying to build a new life in the aftermath of the war, and then that is broken as well. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it and it's great that you found it emotional. Thanks for reviewing!