Interesting idea. My only critique is that it seemed strange (and this is just my opinion) to have the "other type of magic" it just didn't seem to fit with the harry potter world. I like it though.
Author's Response: To what are you referring, specifically?
It was such a pleasant surprise to find this story! I had read your previous one and been disappointed that stopped writing it. It is great so far, I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Oh wow, I really can't believe there are still people out there who read the first one. I'm really, really, really sorry I disappointed you. I promise not to do it this time around. I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far.