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I. Am. Obsessed. With. Harry. Potter!
That's all that needs to be said!

Which Harry potter Marauder are you?
You Scored as Padfoot
You are Padfoot- aka Sirius Black! You are an extremely loyal person who will risk anything for your friends. You tend to be a bit of a rebel, and don't place much importance in family. But your friends mean the world to you. And they always will.


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A Story for Charlie by Darkness Enshrouds
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 29]


A boy. A girl. A budding romance. If only things never got complicated...


(Violence warning is for later chapters; I promise nothing graphic, it's just a caution)

********New chapter posted on 3-20-2014***********

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Profanity, Violence

Word count: 28732 Chapters: 12 Completed: No
05/04/10 Updated: 04/20/14

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 06/14/10 Title: Chapter 6: And On Goes the Lightbulb

EEEEEP!!!! Oh. my. good! Good for her and I can SO see Charlie as the romantic type. sa-woon worthy! Somehow it seems as if she isn't going to get proposed to but my hopes are that she does. THEY ARE PERFECT FOR EACH OTHER!

Author's Response: Personally, if a guy ever did the flowers thing to me, I'd hurt him. That kind of mushy stuff makes me gag, but it seemed totally perfect for Charlie and Venice. Glad someone else agreed! :P

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 06/02/10 Title: Chapter 2:

I really enjoyed it! While Ginny was a bit OOC, it was amusing to read how she was so hyper and ecstatic and I agree with what you said in the chapter notes. If my best friend was going out my with my favorite brother then I would be psyched as well!

Author's Response: I sort of hated writing Ginny like that, but her response just seemed to fit, and it's totally something I would do too (although I only have one brother, and he's getting married in two weeks so I'll never know for sure :P). Ginny might bit a little OOC again in the next couple chapters, but when you read them you'll understand why :D

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 06/02/10 Title: Chapter 1: A Few Weasleys and an Incident

Congrats about the whole brother getting married thing!! And I feel that everyone is entitled to get giddy sometimes. Like there have been times when I'll randomly giggle to myself or burst into song! :)

Author's Response:

Aww thanks! And it's good to know I'm not the only one that will randomly's great until it happens to you at work, and your customers end up looking at you like you've completely gone insane :P

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 06/02/10 Title: Chapter 1: A Few Weasleys and an Incident

The same thing happens to me, except it's during school. I'll be in the middle of World History and the teacher will be talking or we're doing something in the book and all of a sudden I burst into laughter. It's hilarious because I get stared at and the room goes dead silent! :) EMBARRASSING AND AWKWARD!

Author's Response: I bet the people that stare are just jealous because they're not cool enough to be crazy. :P (it does make life such fun, doesn't it?)


To Be Forgotten by Nymphie THE Original
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary: This rainy day, Severus tells his story about his and Lily's deteriorating friendship.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 309 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
05/16/10 Updated: 05/22/10

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 05/22/10 Title: Chapter 1: On This Rainy Day

I enjoyed it a lot and I love the rhyming! and congrats on this being your first published poem! :)

Enjoying your poem,

Author's Response: Thanks sooo much!!! I read it on mother's day to my relatives, who enjoyed them. Then I asked my really strict English teacher if she would give me her opinion on them, and when she told me she had enjoyed them, I decided to give it a try.


What Makes the Ride Worthwhile by MagEd
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 19]

Summary: The seven women who loved Remus Lupin.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 6959 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
05/25/10 Updated: 05/25/10

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 05/26/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I enjoyed the one-shot because I have RLS (Remus Lupin Syndrome)!! It really is quite sad actually. Well, I have more of a SBS (Sirius Black Syndrome), but Lupin is close third because of my FWS (Fred Weasley Syndrome). I liked Dorcas because, it's a kickass name and I have read loads about her in other fan fictions. I also liked how he meant to Ginny and I was not expecting her to be on the list. I also enjoyed the OC's! And Hetty Bayliss was clever thinking on your part!

Author's Response: Haha, those sound like some serious syndromes ;) I'm glad you liked this, especially that you liked the parts with Dorcas and Hetty, because I wasn't sure how those would be received. Thanks for the review :)



I didn't mean for this to happen. Really. My plan was to get through sixth-year without doing any more damage to myself. I've already wrecked so many good things in my life. I thought I was done with my self-destruction.

Apparently, I'm not. Because falling in love with Albus was not part of my plan.

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity, Substance Abuse

Word count: 21972 Chapters: 5 Completed: No
05/26/10 Updated: 01/15/12

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 05/28/10 Title: Chapter 1: Forgive and Forget - Or Not

I really enjoyed the chapter and I know exactly how it feels to be shunned by like half of your friends, especially your best friend. My old best friend is now the most popular girl in the school and won't even acknowledge me anymore!

Author's Response: I'm really glad you responded. I know exactly how you and Maddy feel; it's happened to me as well. In fact, this story's pretty much just an recount of the past few months for me - what will happen to Maddy is (mostly) are exact same things that have happened to me. Except I didn't go to Hogwarts. I'm writing this because I think every teenage girl knows this feeling of alienation and how much it really sucks. I think we'll all be able to relate to it, enjoy it and hopefully learn a little lesson or two along the way! Thanks for the review, and I'm sorry for the long response! Hope you keep reading! ~ Jordana :)


Seventh Year Slytherin by WeasleyMom
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 13]

Summary: Kenley Allen was about to begin her seventh year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, and she was more than ready. The summer holiday had seemed longer than usual with her mum traveling frequently and Kenley running out of things to do for amusement.

Things change, however, when she reluctantly accepts an invitation from her new step-father to join him in Diagon Alley for the day. Chance meetings and awkward conversations abound.

**beams** This story won the third round of the Character Clinic Triathalon! Category: original characters

**beams again** This story was nominated for 2010 Quicksilver Quill ~ Best Original Character

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 5259 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
05/28/10 Updated: 05/29/10

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 05/29/10 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

It was AMAZING!! I really enjoyed it and you should make like a chaptered fic based off of this, it would be really enjoyable!! I love how you made James and Kenley (pretty name) and it would be nice to read about them and learn about them more in depth!

Author's Response: Thank-you. :) I will not deny that I do intend to continue this story as a chaptered fic, though I am not clear on exactly how it is going to look. (Don't go watching for it next week or anything... hehe.) But it is really encouraging to hear that you think it could work and be interesting. It will be more character driven than anything else, much like this one-shot. Thanks again for taking the time to leave a review. I appreciate it so much!

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