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I. Am. Obsessed. With. Harry. Potter!
That's all that needs to be said!

Which Harry potter Marauder are you?
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You Scored as Padfoot
You are Padfoot- aka Sirius Black! You are an extremely loyal person who will risk anything for your friends. You tend to be a bit of a rebel, and don't place much importance in family. But your friends mean the world to you. And they always will.


Padfoot
88%
Moony
88%
Prongs
69%
Wormtail
41%

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Black Dawn by voldiegirl
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 13]

Summary: It has been five years since the Second Wizarding War, and Scarlet Black is still trying to piece her life back together. Working as a columnist by day and helping select Death Eaters get their lives back on track, she lives each day with the hope of a better tomorrow.

Then, when an old enemy she helped put behind bars escape, Scarlet is tossed into a whirlwind of events that put her out of harm's way and into the reach of the one who still blames her for his brother's death-Charlie Weasley.

What happened during the past five years? Can two enemies work together for their own survival? Will there finally be a day when Scarlet can stop running?

She knows her past, but the future is another subject altogether...

*This is the sequel to "The Secret Life of Scarlet Black".

Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mental Disorders, Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations

Word count: 52254 Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/15/10 Updated: 08/16/11


Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 08/09/10 Title: Chapter 9: Being Professional

I have a feeling that the dinner isn't going to end well. I mean, she was Fred's fiance! It would seem so weird if I was the family, most of all George! They are going to go BALLISTIC!

 
Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 07/24/10 Title: Chapter 6: Heaven and Hell

Holy.... WHAT THE HELL JUST HAPPENED?! WHOA BABY!

 
Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 06/06/10 Title: Chapter 5: ...And I'll Puff...

I love the last two sentences! I am really curious about who he lost, of course his gf or something of the sort. I hope that Charlie and Scarlet fall in love because it would be perfect and Fred would want her to be happy. Cant wait for more!

 
Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 05/01/10 Title: Chapter 2: Existence

I am thoroughly confused!

Author's Response: About what?

 
Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 05/25/10 Title: Chapter 4: ...And I'll Huff...

I am still a bit confused by a lot of things. Like for example why she doesn't live with her son, i think it may be because she is in danger and not fit for a child at the moment. Also I am confused about why Charlie blames her for Fred's death, it's not like she killed him in the first place and she is going through a lot so it's even harder on her if someone is blaming her.

 

Welcome, Miss Malfoy by Raven Daniels
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 4]

Summary: It's the sixth year for Harry Potter and his mates, and there are two new people to contend with.

Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Alternate Universe, Book 7 Disregarded, Epilogue? What Epilogue?, Non-Consensual Sex, Violence

Word count: 5618 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
04/23/10 Updated: 05/29/10


Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 05/29/10 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I am very curious about why Madison keeps saying she isn't Draco's family. Of course there is the first chapter which shows when she ended up on the Malfoy porch, but they took her in so why would they be cruel to her? And I am also curious about why Madison asked about Harry's parents. In her own way it seemed like she was hinting that she was his sister, but... i don't know!

 

A Story for Charlie by Darkness Enshrouds
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 28]

Summary:

A boy. A girl. A budding romance. If only things never got complicated...

 

(Violence warning is for later chapters; I promise nothing graphic, it's just a caution)


********New chapter sent to queue on 1-2-13---should be up soon! :D***********

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Mild Profanity, Violence

Word count: 23318 Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Published:
05/04/10 Updated: 01/05/13


Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 05/13/10 Title: Chapter 1: A Few Weasleys and an Incident

REALLY GOOD!!! :) I enojoyed the fact that this story is going to be about Charlie because he seems so underappreciated!! Keep on writing!

Author's Response: Charlie's character is so much fun to write: like a nicer, more toned-down version of Fred and George. In my head, anyway. :D I'm glad to hear you like it! The next chapter should be up fairly shortly; I'm working on last-minute editing and then it'll be posted.

 
Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 06/06/10 Title: Chapter 4: A First Time for Everything

AW! This was such a GREAT chapter and I absolutely LOVE Ginny! She's amazing and my favorite character besides Venice and Charlie. Cannot wait for more chapters and it was once again written wonderfully!

Author's Response:

So far, out of all the chapters I've got written, this was my favorite to work on. Everything fell right into place and I'm really happy with it, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. Next chapter's already in the queue! :D

 
Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 06/14/10 Title: Chapter 6: And On Goes the Lightbulb

EEEEEP!!!! Oh. my. good! Good for her and I can SO see Charlie as the romantic type. sa-woon worthy! Somehow it seems as if she isn't going to get proposed to but my hopes are that she does. THEY ARE PERFECT FOR EACH OTHER!

Author's Response: Personally, if a guy ever did the flowers thing to me, I'd hurt him. That kind of mushy stuff makes me gag, but it seemed totally perfect for Charlie and Venice. Glad someone else agreed! :P

 
Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 06/02/10 Title: Chapter 2: A....date?

I really enjoyed it! While Ginny was a bit OOC, it was amusing to read how she was so hyper and ecstatic and I agree with what you said in the chapter notes. If my best friend was going out my with my favorite brother then I would be psyched as well!

Author's Response: I sort of hated writing Ginny like that, but her response just seemed to fit, and it's totally something I would do too (although I only have one brother, and he's getting married in two weeks so I'll never know for sure :P). Ginny might bit a little OOC again in the next couple chapters, but when you read them you'll understand why :D

 
Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 06/02/10 Title: Chapter 1: A Few Weasleys and an Incident

Congrats about the whole brother getting married thing!! And I feel that everyone is entitled to get giddy sometimes. Like there have been times when I'll randomly giggle to myself or burst into song! :)

Author's Response:

Aww thanks! And it's good to know I'm not the only one that will randomly giggle...it's great until it happens to you at work, and your customers end up looking at you like you've completely gone insane :P

 
Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 06/02/10 Title: Chapter 1: A Few Weasleys and an Incident

The same thing happens to me, except it's during school. I'll be in the middle of World History and the teacher will be talking or we're doing something in the book and all of a sudden I burst into laughter. It's hilarious because I get stared at and the room goes dead silent! :) EMBARRASSING AND AWKWARD!

Author's Response: I bet the people that stare are just jealous because they're not cool enough to be crazy. :P (it does make life such fun, doesn't it?)

 

To Be Forgotten by Nymphie THE Original
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary: This rainy day, Severus tells his story about his and Lily's deteriorating friendship.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 309 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/16/10 Updated: 05/22/10


Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 05/22/10 Title: Chapter 1: On This Rainy Day

I enjoyed it a lot and I love the rhyming! and congrats on this being your first published poem! :)

Enjoying your poem,
DownWithTheCarrows113

Author's Response: Thanks sooo much!!! I read it on mother's day to my relatives, who enjoyed them. Then I asked my really strict English teacher if she would give me her opinion on them, and when she told me she had enjoyed them, I decided to give it a try.

 

What Makes the Ride Worthwhile by MagEd
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 19]

Summary: The seven women who loved Remus Lupin.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 6959 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/25/10 Updated: 05/25/10


Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 05/26/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I enjoyed the one-shot because I have RLS (Remus Lupin Syndrome)!! It really is quite sad actually. Well, I have more of a SBS (Sirius Black Syndrome), but Lupin is close third because of my FWS (Fred Weasley Syndrome). I liked Dorcas because, it's a kickass name and I have read loads about her in other fan fictions. I also liked how he meant to Ginny and I was not expecting her to be on the list. I also enjoyed the OC's! And Hetty Bayliss was clever thinking on your part!

Author's Response: Haha, those sound like some serious syndromes ;) I'm glad you liked this, especially that you liked the parts with Dorcas and Hetty, because I wasn't sure how those would be received. Thanks for the review :)

 

Summary:

I didn't mean for this to happen. Really. My plan was to get through sixth-year without doing any more damage to myself. I've already wrecked so many good things in my life. I thought I was done with my self-destruction.

Apparently, I'm not. Because falling in love with Albus was not part of my plan.



Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity, Substance Abuse

Word count: 21972 Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Published:
05/26/10 Updated: 01/15/12


Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 05/28/10 Title: Chapter 1: Forgive and Forget - Or Not

I really enjoyed the chapter and I know exactly how it feels to be shunned by like half of your friends, especially your best friend. My old best friend is now the most popular girl in the school and won't even acknowledge me anymore!

Author's Response: I'm really glad you responded. I know exactly how you and Maddy feel; it's happened to me as well. In fact, this story's pretty much just an recount of the past few months for me - what will happen to Maddy is (mostly) are exact same things that have happened to me. Except I didn't go to Hogwarts. I'm writing this because I think every teenage girl knows this feeling of alienation and how much it really sucks. I think we'll all be able to relate to it, enjoy it and hopefully learn a little lesson or two along the way! Thanks for the review, and I'm sorry for the long response! Hope you keep reading! ~ Jordana :)

 

Seventh Year Slytherin by WeasleyMom
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 13]

Summary: Kenley Allen was about to begin her seventh year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, and she was more than ready. The summer holiday had seemed longer than usual with her mum traveling frequently and Kenley running out of things to do for amusement.


Things change, however, when she reluctantly accepts an invitation from her new step-father to join him in Diagon Alley for the day. Chance meetings and awkward conversations abound.


**beams** This story won the third round of the Character Clinic Triathalon! Category: original characters

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**beams again** This story was nominated for 2010 Quicksilver Quill ~ Best Original Character


Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 5259 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/28/10 Updated: 05/29/10


Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 05/29/10 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

It was AMAZING!! I really enjoyed it and you should make like a chaptered fic based off of this, it would be really enjoyable!! I love how you made James and Kenley (pretty name) and it would be nice to read about them and learn about them more in depth!

Author's Response: Thank-you. :) I will not deny that I do intend to continue this story as a chaptered fic, though I am not clear on exactly how it is going to look. (Don't go watching for it next week or anything... hehe.) But it is really encouraging to hear that you think it could work and be interesting. It will be more character driven than anything else, much like this one-shot. Thanks again for taking the time to leave a review. I appreciate it so much!

 
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