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I. Am. Obsessed. With. Harry. Potter!
That's all that needs to be said!

Which Harry potter Marauder are you?
You Scored as Padfoot
You are Padfoot- aka Sirius Black! You are an extremely loyal person who will risk anything for your friends. You tend to be a bit of a rebel, and don't place much importance in family. But your friends mean the world to you. And they always will.


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Jemzi by Belledeg

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Jemzi Zabini is the seventeen year old daughter of Blaise Zabini and his wife Harper, and is about to join her fellow witches and wizards at Hogwarts for their final school year. Jemzi is famous for being the once best friend of Albus Potter. However, a mysterious argument last year that only the two of them were witness to has ruined their friendship and they are now practically enemies. No one knows the reason for their fall out, only that it has caused a great divide in their friendship group.

Jemzi's best friend and Albus' cousin, Rose, suspects that their friendship expired because of strange and unwanted feelings between them. Feelings which, despite their fall out, have not gone away. Feelings that are similar to those she has for a certain Slytherin...

So can the next generation of Hogwarts students learn to forget past actions and forgive?

Nominated for "Best Next Generation Story" and "Best Other Character" in the 2010 Quicksilver Quill Awards

This story features Harry Potter, Ginny Potter, Lily Potter, Luka Krum, Blaise Zabini, Harper Zabini, Zacharias Smith, Leon Holmwood, Tristan Wells, Rose Weasley, Scorpius Malfoy, Jemzi and Albus plus many more.
Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 06/09/10 Title: Chapter 15: The Wedding Part Two

Oops! Disregard my other comment because that was when i first started reading and I didn't get to read more! I love the brooding, troubled Luka! :)

Author's Response: Good! I quite like him too, and there should be more of him :)

Two is Better Than One by ron lover

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Hermione has to chose between Harry and Ron, between friendship and love.
Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 05/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: Between Friendship and Love

I enjoyed it!! I liked the fact that she wasn't with Ron, they are annoying together, like two polar opposites!

Author's Response: I liked that too! Thanks for the review.

Of Journals by Darkness Enshrouds

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: These are just a collection of one-shots I wrote out of boredom one day. Each story involves a journal, but that is the only thing they have in common. The stories are slightly random, don’t necessarily fit into any timeline, but I tried to stay true to the characters.

I hope you enjoy.
Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 06/08/10 Title: Chapter 1: Of Cowardice

It seemed at first as if it was for James to Lily but as I got to reading it more it seemed TOTALLY Ron and Hermione!

Author's Response: I've always had this theory that Ron's a lot more in tune with reality than he seems at times. He can be such a numbskull, but sometimes I'm sure it's just an act so, in the earlier books, Hermione wouldn't know how much he liked her. It was fun to write him like that, and make it so that Hermione's not the only one who's been thinking of them together...

But Given Unsought by MagEd

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The seven women who loved Harry Potter.
Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 07/27/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooooooooh!  This was so good!  I hadn't expected McGonagall, nor had I expected Molly Weasley.  These stories are so interesting seeing things from different perspectives.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad I could give you a few surprises and that you enjoyed the different POVs! :)

Some moment by ProfPosky

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: By time Harry meets him in book 1, Snape is a bitter, cold man. But what if his life had taken a different turn earlier? What if, before he had a chance to lose his best friend, he found out other people - girls even - could like him?

A bit of Snape!Fluff, although not as fluffy as some. There is some allusion to past sexual activit/innuendo, but nothing happens other than a kiss.
Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 04/08/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I enjoyed it a lot! The end of the story was very romantic!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, and I am glad you liked the ending. Part of my whole idea in writing the story was to make an In-character Snape grow into a character people could believe a nice person would want to be with, so your review helps me feel I've accomplished that. Thanks so Much!

Black Dawn by voldiegirl

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: It has been five years since the Second Wizarding War, and Scarlet Black is still trying to piece her life back together. Working as a columnist by day and helping select Death Eaters get their lives back on track, she lives each day with the hope of a better tomorrow.

Then, when an old enemy she helped put behind bars escape, Scarlet is tossed into a whirlwind of events that put her out of harm's way and into the reach of the one who still blames her for his brother's death-Charlie Weasley.

What happened during the past five years? Can two enemies work together for their own survival? Will there finally be a day when Scarlet can stop running?

She knows her past, but the future is another subject altogether...

*This is the sequel to "The Secret Life of Scarlet Black".
Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 08/09/10 Title: Chapter 9: Being Professional

I have a feeling that the dinner isn't going to end well. I mean, she was Fred's fiance! It would seem so weird if I was the family, most of all George! They are going to go BALLISTIC!

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 07/24/10 Title: Chapter 6: Heaven and Hell


Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 06/06/10 Title: Chapter 5: ...And I'll Puff...

I love the last two sentences! I am really curious about who he lost, of course his gf or something of the sort. I hope that Charlie and Scarlet fall in love because it would be perfect and Fred would want her to be happy. Cant wait for more!

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 05/01/10 Title: Chapter 2: Existence

I am thoroughly confused!

Author's Response: About what?

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 05/25/10 Title: Chapter 4: ...And I'll Huff...

I am still a bit confused by a lot of things. Like for example why she doesn't live with her son, i think it may be because she is in danger and not fit for a child at the moment. Also I am confused about why Charlie blames her for Fred's death, it's not like she killed him in the first place and she is going through a lot so it's even harder on her if someone is blaming her.

Welcome, Miss Malfoy by Raven Daniels

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: It's the sixth year for Harry Potter and his mates, and there are two new people to contend with.
Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 05/29/10 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I am very curious about why Madison keeps saying she isn't Draco's family. Of course there is the first chapter which shows when she ended up on the Malfoy porch, but they took her in so why would they be cruel to her? And I am also curious about why Madison asked about Harry's parents. In her own way it seemed like she was hinting that she was his sister, but... i don't know!

A Story for Charlie by Darkness Enshrouds

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •

A boy. A girl. A budding romance. If only things never got complicated...


(Violence warning is for later chapters; I promise nothing graphic, it's just a caution)

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 05/13/10 Title: Chapter 1: A Few Weasleys and an Incident

REALLY GOOD!!! :) I enojoyed the fact that this story is going to be about Charlie because he seems so underappreciated!! Keep on writing!

Author's Response: Charlie's character is so much fun to write: like a nicer, more toned-down version of Fred and George. In my head, anyway. :D I'm glad to hear you like it! The next chapter should be up fairly shortly; I'm working on last-minute editing and then it'll be posted.

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 06/06/10 Title: Chapter 4: A First Time for Everything

AW! This was such a GREAT chapter and I absolutely LOVE Ginny! She's amazing and my favorite character besides Venice and Charlie. Cannot wait for more chapters and it was once again written wonderfully!

Author's Response:

So far, out of all the chapters I've got written, this was my favorite to work on. Everything fell right into place and I'm really happy with it, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. Next chapter's already in the queue! :D

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 06/14/10 Title: Chapter 6: And On Goes the Lightbulb

EEEEEP!!!! Oh. my. good! Good for her and I can SO see Charlie as the romantic type. sa-woon worthy! Somehow it seems as if she isn't going to get proposed to but my hopes are that she does. THEY ARE PERFECT FOR EACH OTHER!

Author's Response: Personally, if a guy ever did the flowers thing to me, I'd hurt him. That kind of mushy stuff makes me gag, but it seemed totally perfect for Charlie and Venice. Glad someone else agreed! :P

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 06/02/10 Title: Chapter 2: A....date?

I really enjoyed it! While Ginny was a bit OOC, it was amusing to read how she was so hyper and ecstatic and I agree with what you said in the chapter notes. If my best friend was going out my with my favorite brother then I would be psyched as well!

Author's Response: I sort of hated writing Ginny like that, but her response just seemed to fit, and it's totally something I would do too (although I only have one brother, and he's getting married in two weeks so I'll never know for sure :P). Ginny might bit a little OOC again in the next couple chapters, but when you read them you'll understand why :D

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 06/02/10 Title: Chapter 1: A Few Weasleys and an Incident

Congrats about the whole brother getting married thing!! And I feel that everyone is entitled to get giddy sometimes. Like there have been times when I'll randomly giggle to myself or burst into song! :)

Author's Response:

Aww thanks! And it's good to know I'm not the only one that will randomly giggle...it's great until it happens to you at work, and your customers end up looking at you like you've completely gone insane :P

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 06/02/10 Title: Chapter 1: A Few Weasleys and an Incident

The same thing happens to me, except it's during school. I'll be in the middle of World History and the teacher will be talking or we're doing something in the book and all of a sudden I burst into laughter. It's hilarious because I get stared at and the room goes dead silent! :) EMBARRASSING AND AWKWARD!

Author's Response: I bet the people that stare are just jealous because they're not cool enough to be crazy. :P (it does make life such fun, doesn't it?)

To Be Forgotten by Nymphie THE Original

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This rainy day, Severus tells his story about his and Lily's deteriorating friendship.
Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 05/22/10 Title: Chapter 1: On This Rainy Day

I enjoyed it a lot and I love the rhyming! and congrats on this being your first published poem! :)

Enjoying your poem,

Author's Response: Thanks sooo much!!! I read it on mother's day to my relatives, who enjoyed them. Then I asked my really strict English teacher if she would give me her opinion on them, and when she told me she had enjoyed them, I decided to give it a try.

What Makes the Ride Worthwhile by MagEd

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: The seven women who loved Remus Lupin.
Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 05/26/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I enjoyed the one-shot because I have RLS (Remus Lupin Syndrome)!! It really is quite sad actually. Well, I have more of a SBS (Sirius Black Syndrome), but Lupin is close third because of my FWS (Fred Weasley Syndrome). I liked Dorcas because, it's a kickass name and I have read loads about her in other fan fictions. I also liked how he meant to Ginny and I was not expecting her to be on the list. I also enjoyed the OC's! And Hetty Bayliss was clever thinking on your part!

Author's Response: Haha, those sound like some serious syndromes ;) I'm glad you liked this, especially that you liked the parts with Dorcas and Hetty, because I wasn't sure how those would be received. Thanks for the review :)

Love, Friendship and Other Things I Fail At by U-No-Poo

Rated: 6th-7th Years •

I didn't mean for this to happen. Really. My plan was to get through sixth-year without doing any more damage to myself. I've already wrecked so many good things in my life. I thought I was done with my self-destruction.

Apparently, I'm not. Because falling in love with Albus was not part of my plan.

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 05/28/10 Title: Chapter 1: Forgive and Forget - Or Not

I really enjoyed the chapter and I know exactly how it feels to be shunned by like half of your friends, especially your best friend. My old best friend is now the most popular girl in the school and won't even acknowledge me anymore!

Author's Response: I'm really glad you responded. I know exactly how you and Maddy feel; it's happened to me as well. In fact, this story's pretty much just an recount of the past few months for me - what will happen to Maddy is (mostly) are exact same things that have happened to me. Except I didn't go to Hogwarts. I'm writing this because I think every teenage girl knows this feeling of alienation and how much it really sucks. I think we'll all be able to relate to it, enjoy it and hopefully learn a little lesson or two along the way! Thanks for the review, and I'm sorry for the long response! Hope you keep reading! ~ Jordana :)