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My Troubled Tyrant by Belledeg
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 517]

Summary: Past Featured StoryKeedie Dante has experienced many amazing things during her time at Hogwarts, including the hushed up drama that was the Chamber of Secrets. However, with two overachieving friends and a headmaster who does not even know she exists, Keedie feels that perhaps her seventh year will not be too spectacular. However, Dumbeldore sees her potential as a writer and enrols her in a simple writing course. Here, she meets the mysterious and terrifying Tom Riddle and they instantly get under one another's skin. She is drawn to his dark determination towards some unknown goal and he is fascinated by her, in every way. However, Tom's friends do not approve of Keedie and her unconventional ways and Keedie has many people trying to keep her away from the dark young man as well. Something inside tells Keedie that she can make him better, but even he assures her that this is an impossible task. But she's not one to give up easily...

"He is a dark one, Keedie. Try not to let him consume you entirely."

This story has the characters Albus Dumbledore, Armando Dippet, Moaning Myrtle, Rubeus Hagrid, Aaron Dante, Harry Potter, Ebony Abbott, Minerva McGonagall, Melena Creevey, Ollivander, Gregor Holmwood, Horace Slughorn and, of course, Tom Riddle and Keedie Dante...enjoy!

Winner of "Best Romance Between Other Characters" and nominated for "Best Female OC" in the 2009 Quicksilver Quill Awards

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity, Violence

Word count: 152689 Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
03/08/09 Updated: 09/06/09

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 04/14/10 Title: Chapter 9: Right Here In My Arms


Author's Response: I agree! :) Keep reading

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 04/15/10 Title: Chapter 27: Goodbye My Lover

Just sayin! :) Please get working on jemzi also!

Author's Response: Thanks, will do :)


Soldiers by dominiqueweasley
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 95]

Summary: "There are many stories between the lines." - Jo Rowling, about the Black Family Tree.

Cedrella's goal all her life has been to be the perfect Black. She has impeccable manners, commands respect, is always composed, and has never had a friend in her life. But Cedrella has a secret that is about to get a lot more complicated…

Septimus is the youngest of seven Weasley brothers. His dearest wish for his seventh year at Hogwarts is to meet the mystery girl he once saw dancing in the Owlery in the dead of night…

This story is a romance, but it is also a story about family, owls, and what it feels like to know you are worth something.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Sexual Situations

Word count: 94988 Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
11/22/09 Updated: 05/03/11

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 05/22/10 Title: Chapter 2: Got to Get Back to Hogwarts

I absolutely positively love the beginning song choice!! It's my favorite AVPM song, alongside Granger Danger.

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 05/22/10 Title: Chapter 6: Careful

I love, love, love, love your story!!! :) Septimus reminds me of all of the Weasley's that we see in the Harry Potter books and his family reminds me of the Weasley Family that we see so often! The mentioning of his family and the close relationship they share is quite enviable!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'm having a great time creating another Weasley clan. :)

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 05/31/10 Title: Chapter 7: Tip of the Iceberg

*SQUEAL!!!* That was a greaaat ending!! And I enjoy the fact that because of J.K.'s Black Family Tree we know that Cedrella and Septimus end up together!

Author's Response: Haha I know, it kind of ruins the suspense, doesn't it?


Shine a Light by Sapphire at Dawn
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 28]

Summary: Clariss Flint has always thought herself a normal teenage girl who attends Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. However, during her sixth year at Hogwarts she begins to experience flashbacks to the past, where she experiances the life of Miss Ara Grey, a girl who attended Hogwarts in the seventeenth century. Clariss uncovers Ara's dangerous affair with the handsome Potions Master of the time, and as she becomes more and more involved with discovering what happened to the lovers, she notices that their lives are incredibly similar. Clariss begins to find love of her own at Hogwarts, and an ultimatum leads her to discover just how much the dead can influence the living.

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Student/Teacher Romance

Word count: 23178 Chapters: 9 Completed: No
11/28/09 Updated: 09/19/10

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 06/03/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

:)! It was really well written and I am looking forward to reading more since I am very curious about her predicament with the visions.

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 06/02/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It was interesting hearing all of the rumors that people made up about the events that occurred in the final battle and before that! Also, there haven't been many stories where they are centered on Lily Potter. More of them revolve around Albus Potter and Rose Weasley (and of course Scorpius Malfoy).

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, Brooke :) Sarah x


Jemzi by Belledeg
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 260]

Summary: Jemzi Zabini is the seventeen year old daughter of Blaise Zabini and his wife Harper, and is about to join her fellow witches and wizards at Hogwarts for their final school year. Jemzi is famous for being the once best friend of Albus Potter. However, a mysterious argument last year that only the two of them were witness to has ruined their friendship and they are now practically enemies. No one knows the reason for their fall out, only that it has caused a great divide in their friendship group.

Jemzi's best friend and Albus' cousin, Rose, suspects that their friendship expired because of strange and unwanted feelings between them. Feelings which, despite their fall out, have not gone away. Feelings that are similar to those she has for a certain Slytherin...

So can the next generation of Hogwarts students learn to forget past actions and forgive?

Nominated for "Best Next Generation Story" and "Best Other Character" in the 2010 Quicksilver Quill Awards

This story features Harry Potter, Ginny Potter, Lily Potter, Luka Krum, Blaise Zabini, Harper Zabini, Zacharias Smith, Leon Holmwood, Tristan Wells, Rose Weasley, Scorpius Malfoy, Jemzi and Albus plus many more.

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Self Injury, Sexual Situations, Slash, Strong Profanity, Violence

Word count: 93043 Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
01/31/10 Updated: 09/14/10

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 07/28/10 Title: Chapter 17: Letters

LEON AND TRISTAN HAVE SOMETHING GOING ONNNNNNNNNNN!!! OOOOOHHH!! I KNEW IT!  *does little/ginormous happy dance*  Tristan, stop rejecting this side of you!  it isn't very becoming!

Author's Response: How do we know it's Tristan? ;-) x

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 05/22/10 Title: Chapter 10: Jemzi's Epiphany

FINALLY! I thought she would never ever see that she felt something for Albus! :) Cannot wait for the next chapter, I am on the edge of my metaphorical seat in anticipation, waiting to see what she will do next!! P.s. you've created such wonderful characters!

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, she's finally caught on. Next chapter is written and should be up soon :P

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 05/29/10 Title: Chapter 12: Jemzi Needs Finishing

Oooh Lalaaaa! haha :)! I hope that she doesn't go to finishing school, but I know there is probably going to be loads more drama dealing with the subject!

Author's Response: Of course, that's how I work :)

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 05/07/10 Title: Chapter 8: Christmas Part Two

I reallyy want Albus and Jemzi to get together!! Like reallllyyy badly! And you're like my favorite Author on here and I hope you write more for MFF!

Author's Response: Next chapter should be to your liking, and it'll hopefulling be up soon. Thanks a bunch :)

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 09/01/10 Title: Chapter 22: Calm Before the Storm

Thanks for the Tom/Keedie chapter!  :)  Can't wait for the end, but I'm a bit scared...  I know how you ended MTT and I'm wary as to whether this one ends similarly.  Then there is always the FHV which ended happily, so it could go either way.  There are butterflies in my stomach in anticipation for the oncoming two chapters!! 

Author's Response: Some people clearly know me too well...Next chapter will indeed have some twists

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 06/06/10 Title: Chapter 14: The Wedding Part One

I LOVE Scorpius' reference to the CoM class!! That was a hilarious part of the books and I loved that he enjoyed it! :) I feel as if Luka likes Lily but then there's the fact that he is a lot older than her! And i felt bad for Gigi when Jemzi yelled at her but I can see where she was coming from in a way. Over all it was a wonderfully written chapter and i enjoyed reading it!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. And Luka's only three years older ;-)

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 05/16/10 Title: Chapter 9: The Phantom of Hogwarts

She is so oblivious!! And thank you for posting so soon and you are my favorite fan fiction author on this website and this is one of my favorite stories!! I really really hope to see her finally understand he has feelings for her and they finally go out together!!

Author's Response: So glad you like it; next chapter soon :D

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 04/13/10 Title: Chapter 6: Hey, Weren't You My Best Friend Once?

PLEASSEEE write more!! I AM DYING INSIDE!!! P.S. I love how amazing u created Albus to be!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you, I'm in the middle of writing more, so never fear :) Also, love the username :D

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 09/16/10 Title: Chapter 24: Jemzi and Albus

Absolute fantastic ending!! I'm so glad to not have to bawl my eyes out and I'm so glad nobody died!! And I agree with it response in the last chapter, Gryffindors are always doing things that are heroic, which is why both Jem and Al deserve to be Gryffs!

I'm surprised your not going to study writing. You're wonderful at it and I would totally buy a book if you were the author!!

Is this your last fix before going to Uni? Just wondering!

I hope you keep writing!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. Yeah, I couldn't let anyone die :D

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 08/19/10 Title: Chapter 19: Hidden Powers

This story definitely deserves best gen and best OC. Jemzi is an amazing character who is totally relatable and someone who,if given the chance, I'd want to be. The story is just amazing! It has such a thick,juicy plot and I love how it references things from your other stories. You also give such life to the characters that you write about! Whenever I see you update chapters, it makes my day!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you. It's nice just to be nominated, but I'm glad to have your good opinion :)

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 08/19/10 Title: Chapter 20: Love Means Slowly Losing Your Mind

EEP!! Yay for Luka being back! I was also so happy about the Leon/Tristan love scene! Leon, stop being a prick and come out of that large closet you live in! Tristan, don't give up hope buddy! And I am very curious as to who this Bastien bloke is!

Author's Response: Yes, indeed, Bastien will be explained soon enough. Plenty more Luka, Leon and Tristan to come :D

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 08/19/10 Title: Chapter 21: Visits From the Past

I. Am. So. Confused. With. The. Ending!!! WHAT THE HECK?! I'm thinking arranged marriage, but I don't know if i'm correct! WOW!

Author's Response: All will soon be explained, nothing as dramatic as an arranged marriage, never fear :)

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113 Signed
Date: 08/01/10 Title: Chapter 18: Tristan

A great chapter!  I get what you meant in your answer to my review that it wasn't tristan!  Urgh!  Leom, why are you such a holmwood????  It's truly aggravating!  Scor is one of my favorite characters!  i love him so much and I feel so bad for him.  It also makes a lot more sense about why he broke things off with rose!  Update soon! :)

Author's Response: Will do, next chapter's in the queue. Plenty more from Scorpius in the future :D

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