A really dramatic scene though...
*sob* That was a beautiful chapter! It was really well written, really touching, and I specially liked the words in italics near the end. The way that Draco shows emotion in this really links well to the part earlier on when Harry is trying to persuade Draco not the join the Dark Side.
*wonders what will happen now*
..and you foreshadow HBP so much, its amazing!!
*sniff* That was an amazing fic Jenna!! :D
You made me laugh, you made me cry, you made me go *grrrr*
Your writing style is incredible, I really liked the way that you managed to put all these little ideas together, to make something so fun to read! *goes off to read sequel*
*comes in to randomly blurt out praises of Fate...*
Well done on winning the QSQ! *grin* *hugs* You thoroughly deserved this!
Seriously. Fate is amazing. Everything from the plot, to characters to little ideas/inventions, is all weaved together in a fantastic way, that keeps the reader *entralled* throughout! I must have read this fic multiple times now, but I still love it eveytime I read.
Amazing. Especially the ending. *huggles Sirius*
Once again, well done!!
*sniff* I LOVE THIS FIC!!! That last bit was so sad....plz update soon!
Author's Response: not a problem...next chapter should be up any day now
LOl...kinda random...I'd love to see Mrs Norris as a duck!!
Ron and Parvati? :o :o :o
Hmmm Hermione is a bit more random than usual here!! :D :D
As for chasing random ducks...well...*goes off to read next chapter* :p
So random and so funny!
Kind of different, but really interesting to read!
Fear, it circles round and round
Love that line! Got me dizzy, and *thinking* lol..
And the last line is beautiful.
Author's Response: Thank you, I\'m so glad you liked it and that it made you think! I love how you really thought about it rather than just reading and forgetting. Thanks!
*sniff* And yes you should continue! Though I see you already have, so I'm a bit late...:p
A bit unclear as to what has happened but I'm sure it'll explain itself subsequently... all in all, a good first chapter! I look forward to reading the rest!
Aww this is really cool! And I really like Ginny's fiery attitude! LOL
I gather this is a post OOTP and Pre HBP fic?
Yup I can definitely feel the love! Though the awkwardness kind of dominates at this point...
I see progression..lol
I'm still a bit confused as to what actually happened between Harry and Ginny, but will probably read the chapter again.
And 'vidio grams' was funny!
Aww thats cute!
Sweet! And I'll read the sequel!
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW *gets cute and fuzzy feeling inside*
And grrr for the cliffie! (btw I jumped in the air and whooped when I saw that this had FINALLY been updated, and weirdly enough, I didn't get sent another email...)
I really like the tension you've started to build up here, and the way you've displayed tension from the points of view of both people. This is a really expressive chapter, and I love the bit by Dravo at the end, and also that bit where he's defending himself for saving Hermione..LOL
I hope you update soon and that it'll get moderated quicker..grr
Love your work Sparx!! Keep going, wooo!
Author's Response: Yay for you feeling all cute and fuzzy on the inside!
But sorry about the cliffhanger! I really didnít mean for it to be a cliffhanger, but somehow, it just became that.
I was hoping the tension would come across, so I guess itís a good thing that it did! This chapter wasnít one of my best (personally at least), so it means a lot to me that you thought it was expressive! Oh, and yes, I did enjoy writing that bit about him defending himselfó it was probably my favorite part, so I\'m glad you liked it!
I\'m sorry itís taking me so long to update, but soon I hope! Thanks for the wonderful review and Iíll keep going for sure!
Yay! Thanks for not leaving us completely! :) I hope this chapter updates soon... I can't wait to read more of this story!
And congratulations on all the noms for Quicksilver Quills! I hope you win!
*sniggers* Woo we're getting somewhere!! Teehee....Now THIS is why Hr/Dr rocks more than R/Hr..lol :p
*goes off to read next chapter*
Author's Response: Oh yes, weíre getting somewhere for sure! LOLÖ Itís true that I would like Hermione to get together with Ron in the books, but playing around with Hermione and Draco is super fun (and I\'m sure youíll agree)!
oooh this is really really really good!!!! I like the way you're graduall 0ybuilding things up rather than the sudden 'I love you' that you get in some Hr/Dr's...
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I\'m happy to hear that you like the way the story is paced, and donít find it too slow or anything. Itís great because their relationship is gonna be built gradually for sure.
Congrats on the Dramione award Sparx!! :)
And woo love this chapter...those two are SO in denial..teehee
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I wouldn\'t have been able to win if it werenít for you guys though. So, thanking you sincerely. And yes, denial is definitely the key to this chapter!