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The Journey Back by Gmariam

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Hermione is working for the Department of Magical Law Enforcement on repealing old laws that favor purebloods, while Ron has recently left the Auror Office to join his brother at Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes. When Hermione decides to move to Australia to be with her parents, Ron is forced to confront the reasons behind her abrupt decision. Yet there is more going on than he realizes, and a simple proposal takes him to the other side of the world, where they will face one last test of their love. This story is now complete!
Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 05/21/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

I LOVE the plot...already one of my new fave Hermione/Ron fics! I enjoyed seeing the father/son talk between Arthur and Ron. I hope his plan works! Can't wait for more : )

Author's Response: Thanks so much, I hope it works too! I'm glad you enjoyed the beginning and hope you enjoy more! I really appreciate the encouraging review! ~Gina :)

Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 06/30/12 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten

Awww such a sweet ending! I'm glad she said yes (finally!). Great job, I thoroughly enjoyed this story : )

Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 06/21/12 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

Thanks for the update...I look forward to the final chapter! So happy that Hermione is safe and Ron saved the day : )

The End of Her World by DarkSunflower

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •

"Love is the sweetest of dreams, and the worst of nightmares."

- William Shakespeare, A Midsummer Night's Dream


In short, this is the end of Book Seven, the end of Voldemort's rein.


From Ginny Weasley's perspective.


Note: This is a one-shot!

Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 06/02/11 Title: Chapter 1: The End of Her World

I love fics that take place during the HP books but they are from a different character's POV! Fabulous job with this difficult task : ) Can't wait to see more fics from you!

Author's Response: As do I! :) Thank you very much; I'm working on a new fic now, but I want to finish the majority of it before I begin posting. Thank you for the review! :)

The Phoenix Or The Flame by GinnyRULES

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Several years after the final battle, Dudley Dursley is struggling to come to terms with his past and the things he has done wrong. His life is turned upside down when he meets a charming young witch and is drawn into a path that leads him back into his cousin's world.
Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 07/22/12 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Excited for an update, even if it was short. I am glad that Dudley had decided to talk to Pavarti again and to be more accepting of the wizarding world. It will be so cute to see them as a couple and to see Dudley attend Harry's wedding. Update ASAP!

Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 08/17/12 Title: Chapter 9: CHAPTER NINE

Thank you for the shout out...you are so sweet! The story about Parvati being haunted by her ex boyfriend is quite interesting. I was excited to see that our couple is finally dating and I of course can't wait for the Potter-Weasley wedding...love this fic, update soon!!!

Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 06/15/12 Title: Chapter 5: CHAPTER FIVE

I'm glad that Harry and Dudley's meeting went better than I thought but I feel so bad for Pavarti! Thanks for such a quite update...can;t wait for more!

Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 06/21/11 Title: Chapter 3: CHAPTER THREE

im glad parvati is back in this chapter! after i read the first chapter i had hoped that she would invite dudley to the wedding but i enjoyed seeing hermione doing this favor for her best friend harry. can't wait to see what happens next : )

Author's Response: Thanks, I really appreciate the continuing reviews! :) Hermione works great as a catalyst in fanfic, but don't worry there will be some cute moments between Parvati and Dudley coming up. Stay tuned!

Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 06/11/11 Title: Chapter 2: CHAPTER TWO

very excited to see another chapter so soon, but im really confused by the telephone conversation...i thought the magical world didnt use phones?? it doesnt really seem to fit. i like how you got hermione involved now, she is my favorite hp character : ) i hope the entire trio enters the story at some point and i look forward to dudley seeing parvati again! loving this fic!

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I understand your point about the phone. However I felt that in a post-Voldemort world the wizarding community would become more tolerant of muggles and people like Kingsley, Mr. Weasley and Hermione would work hard to integrate new ideals into the Ministry. So my reasoning for the "Ministry of Magic service telephone" was that perhaps while agents from Muggle Liaison (like Parvati) are working in the muggle world, they might need to contact the Ministry in an unobtrusive way. Also, Hermione is one of my favorites as well and I'm excited to get her involved. The whole trio as well as many others will appear later on. Stay tuned and more will be posted soon! :)

Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 06/09/12 Title: Chapter 4: CHAPTER FOUR

It definitely has been a long time since this story has been updated, but I'm glad it is back! I am a little disappointed by how short this chapter was though : ( I look forward to seeing Dudley and Harry meet face-to-face...update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for sticking around and for taking the time to review! The next chapter has been submitted and is quite a bit longer, so stay tuned for that :)

Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 06/20/12 Title: Chapter 6: CHAPTER SIX

Hmmm Dudley had run away to the Wizarding World...hope he finds Parvati soon! I enjoyed his meeting with Hermione and him realizing that some witches can be "normal". Write more soon!

Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 06/20/12 Title: Chapter 6: CHAPTER SIX

Hmmm Dudley had run away to the Wizarding World...hope he finds Parvati soon! I enjoyed his meeting with Hermione and him realizing that some witches can be "normal". Write more soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I love writing Hermione, so I'm glad that came across well. I've got a lot going on with real life writing but I'll try to get a bunch more updates in before summer's end. Cheers :)

Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 06/03/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ooooh very interesting concept! i hope dudley goes to harrys wedding and starts accepting the wizarding world...cant wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback, I can't wait to see how people will feel about my plans for Dudley. More is on the way! :)

More Wandless Magic with Malfoy by jenniferes

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Hermione Granger and Draco Malfoy attend the Wizarding University of Paris the year after they graduate from Hogwarts.

This is a sequel to the Dragon Does the Tickling, where Hermione Granger and Draco Malfoy complete their seventh year at Hogwarts after the war.
Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 04/21/12 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: Goyle's Tale

Always happy to see an update from this fic : ) Amazing shower scene...perfect way to get them back together! I was a little thrown off by how embarrassed Hermione was...they were having sex for almost a year, she should be used to it. When I said I was hoping the reunion would be more emotional and romantic I didn't necessarily mean sex, although that's always an added a bonus. I meant Draco saying how much he missed her and realized he couldn't live without her, etc, etc. Hope to see more of that as the fic goes on. Can't wait for more : )

Author's Response: I may be projecting a little bit -- I am always embarrassed myself when I write the sexy scenes -- so maybe I made Hermione more embarrassed than she needed to be. I also struggle to keep Draco in character, but make him express his devotion to Hermione. I'll try to be a bit more expressive with him going forward (although the story is pretty much entirely written at this point). Thank you again for your thoughtful review! Jenny

Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 05/01/12 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Waiting and Revising

Although this seemed to be just a filler chapter while we wait for the plan with Goyle to go into action, I still enjoyed it : ) I can tell you are starting to set up the plot for the next story with Draco and Hermione's summer plans. I think they should transfer to the wizarding school in London. They could spend more time with Harry, Ginny, Luna, Neville, etc. and maybe everyone could accept Draco more. Keep up the great work! Can't wait to see Hermione as Narcissa and hoping to see the protective side of Draco : )

Author's Response: You are right -- I am setting up the next story. No transfer plans, though -- but that's an interesting idea! The next chapter is coming soon. I'm not sure how protective Draco is in it. I tend to like Hermione in the brave heroine role! Thanks for another thoughtful review! --Jenny

Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 03/12/12 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Eavesdropping and Compromise

Last chapter I was frustrated at Draco...now I am frustrated at Hermione. Draco is trying to talk to her about Goyle and making out with her and she says she is too busy...isn't this what she has been pushing for?? I was relieved to see Draco open up about his feelings about being scared of losing her. My favorite part was when Hermione over heard Draco's fight with Goyle. It showed that he really loves her

Author's Response: I'm actually glad you are frustrated with both of them. I'm trying to create a realistic situation where it's not all one person's fault. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. Thank you for your review, Jenny

Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 03/24/12 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: From Bad to Worse

Oh no! If you hadn't already promised a happy ending for Draco and Hermione I would be very upset with you! I can understand why Draco felt the way he did. He was hoping that he found someone who loved him for him and forgave him his past and Hermione broke his trust. Interested to see what really is going on with these stolen artifacts and can't wait to see the fate of our fave characters. Update soon!

Author's Response: I'm glad I let that spoiler slip, then! It would be sad to get reviews from upset readers! I'm glad you can see both sides of things. That's what I'm hoping to do. The next chapter is in the queue already. Thanks, Jenny

Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 02/05/12 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Goyle Brings Trouble

Yeah for updates!!! I absolutely agree with Hermione...Goyle should not be there...it has bad written all over it! I really want to know how the professor and healer knew all abour Draco's condition...and how the healer knew Hermione?? Hmmm...interesting...more please : )

Author's Response: I've got a lot of moving pieces in this story right now. I'm glad you are intrigued! I'm working hard to tie it all together going forward. Thanks, Jenny

Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 03/04/12 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Loyalties and Secrets

Oh no : ( That was a very sad chapter but I'm actually okay with it. It was inevitable that this fight would happen between Draco and Hermione. I do wish Hermione would have actually voiced her thoughts about wanting to know about Goyle because she didn't want Draco to be hurt with is involvement. I hope that they are able to work things out. I can see both sides of the argument but I am definitely siding more with Hermione here...Hope to see another new chapter soon : )

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I'm glad you are okay with things so far. What's a story without some drama, eh? First we're getting some relationship drama, but soon we'll have action-style drama too. I hope you like it! --Jenny

Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 06/08/12 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39: The End of Freshman Year at WUP

Always exciting to see an update to this story...but it seems the plot is slowing down now. It's nice that you outlined a few of Hermione's thoughts about sophmore year at the end, but none of it included her relationship with Draco. I feel like they should be progressing but they are just staying in one place. I hope to see more well known characters in the summer chapters. Hope yo see more soon!

Author's Response: This is the final chapter of the story, so that's why things slowed down. I suppose I need to put "the end" at the bottom! I'm not sure what you are looking for in terms of relationship progression, perhaps because I dated my husband for four years in college. The next story will start in the summer and continue through sophomore year. I'll probably start posting in a couple months -- I like to have it at least half way done before I begin posting. Thank you! Jenny