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Taking Direction by WeasleyMom

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: What if the characters in the Harry Potter films were portrayed—not by actors—but by the book versions of themselves, as created by Rowling? How might things unfold on that set? What would the characters think of the changes made from the stories they’d already lived out… to the ones written for the script?

This fic is a series of one-shots, posted as chapters, each from the perspective of a different character who is dealing with the changes occurring between the book and the script.


Holy Movie Canon, Batman! This fic won the 2011 Quicksilver Quill Award for Best Chaptered Humor Story. Thanks so, so much!


Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 02/10/13 Title: Chapter 4: Fired Up

Surprised to see an update, but it was a good surprise! I never really understood the fire at the Burrow scene either...good point! Can't wait for more : )

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you agree about that crazy scene! Haha!

Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 10/11/10 Title: Chapter 2: Babe Magnet

This is a very clever idea! We know as fans how we feel about the changes but I've never thought about how the actual characters would feel if they were real people. Great job, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks! I find this is the healthiest way for me to channel my frustration with some of the choices that were made for the films.

Swimming Lessons by WeasleyMom

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Six weeks after the battle, Hermione puts on a bathing suit for the first time in nearly a year... scars are revealed as painful memories rise to the surface yet again.

I almost submitted this under dark/angst, but at the end of the day, I see it as Ron/Hermione. *shrug* Also, a gazillion thanks to my awesometastic beta Natalie, and to both Neil and Carole for helping me with all things British. :D

I'm thrilled to announce that this story was nominated for a 2011 Quicksilver Quill in the category Best Canon Romance. YAY!
Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 08/30/10 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

i LOVE your hermione and ron fics! its crazy to see the pain they went through and how it brought them even closer together (in the books and in your stories) : ) keep them coming!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. When reading the books, I often squealed "get on with it and get them together!" But now, I appreciate the way Rowling did it... with the hard times sealing the deal between them and making it all that much more intense. Thanks for the review!

Jealousy by hogwartsbookworm

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: What caused Ron's sudden hatred for his favorite quidditch player?

What made Hermione ask out a boy who "makes Grawp look a gentleman"?



Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 09/29/10 Title: Chapter 1: Green Represents More than Slytherin House...

I really enjoyed seeing inside the minds of Ron and Hermione during the most jealous times betweem them, although books apart. It's nice to see their side when we usually only see Harry's! I wish it would have continued to show a scene from Deathly Hallows, that would have been interesting. Great job, thanks for sharing : )

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. "I wish it would have continued to show a scene from Deathly Hallows." Actually, I have another R/H fic that is Hermione's pov during certain parts of Deathly Hallows. If you are that interested, perhaps you should read it!

Thank you for reading!

Letters from the Tent by WeasleyMom

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: A distraught Hermione takes quill to parchment.
Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 10/07/10 Title: Chapter 1: The Letters

I love the idea of telling the story through letters! It was nice to see Hermione's side of the story after Ron left since we already know Harry's. The emotions running through the words are the best part of this story, thanks so much, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks. The letter idea came from a prompt in TTB. Funnily enough, R/Hr were not allowed for the challenge, but this just would not leave me alone. So this basically evolved from that first drabble letter (the first letter of the series). I 'm so glad you thought it worked... thanks for the review.

Our Done Deal by Aria_Aurora1

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: He withdrew his arms from around her, and reached into the back pocket of his shorts. As he bent down to kiss her again, he took hold of her hand, and placed inside it a square box. “Happy birthday.”

This is the tale of a birthday… A seventeenth birthday, no less. It tells of a present given to a redheaded teenager by the love of her life, a gift that became the best present she would ever receive; better than all past and all future presents. It tells of a present she would never, ever forget.

Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 10/19/10 Title: Chapter 1: Our Done Deal

Just as you love Ginny and Harry as a couple, I love Ron and Hermione. That is why I am surprised that I was so touched by this story. The gift was very original, much better than the easily predicable engagement ring. It was nice to see them share a private moment in the quiet of the dawn. Thanks for sharing!

Of Slayers and Champions by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •

After it was all said and done, Harry wanted a sandwich. However, Ron knew that what he wanted was far deeper and complex and maddening and insufferable. But could Hermione ever forgive him for leaving her behind? Could he ever forgive himself?


This story was nominated for a 2011 Quicksilver Quill Award: Best Canon Romance.

Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 10/19/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A cute short fic that made me smile. I like how it picked up exactly where HP7 left off before the epilogue, with Harry returning to his room. It was sweet to see Ron and Hermione having this romantic moment in the Common Room, thanks for sharing!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. sort of had a stray thought a while ago. Someone asked me what kind of sandwich Harry asked for, and I thought, "Hey, what would Ron (the one who is far more food-obsessed) want after the battle?" Well, Hermione...duh, lol.

Since this is not a ship I typically write, it's nice to know that it seems IC. Thanks for reviewing, and take care. :D


The Longest Walk of Her Life by charlottetrips

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Today is my wedding day. It should have been the happiest day of my life. It would have been, if only I was getting married to the right man. A Dramione story. Sequel now up "One Second Can Be A Lifetime"
Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 03/04/12 Title: Chapter 1: The Longest Walk of Her Life

Amazing! Romance at its best! Off to check the sequel now...

The Story of Ron and Hermione by WeasleyFamilyLove

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: A look at moments of Ron and Hermione's life through the years. The narrative alternates between their two POV.

For those of us that wonder what Ron and Hermione's life would be like through the years.
Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 11/23/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two: Growing Up

Wow I was completely blown away by this story! I have never read anything like it! It is nice to see what may have happened after the epilogue. Hermione and Ron are the cutest couple, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you! And I can finally say Chapter Three is up so enjoy and I hope you like the way it ends!

Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 11/24/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three: The Golden Years

I never really thought about how wizards might like longer than muggles but I guess it makes sense! I loved seeing this version of their life through the years. Thanks for sharing, very creative idea!

Author's Response: I'm fairly new to fanfic but I know from the books that wizards live longer but apparently there is a debate as to how long exactly. I chose to make the average lifespan at least 150 years old but obviously they can live longer or die younger just like in real life. I wanted Ron and Hermione to have a longer life so they are definitely older than 150. Anyways, I'm glad you liked the story! Thanks for sticking with it until the end!

All Alone by savvy33

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: She left him. Two years later, he still hasn't picked up the pieces and moved on.
Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 11/23/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That's it?? The end?? I was hoping that would continue into more chapters but I liked the sneak peak into the mind of Ron. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D Truthfully I think it could go on too, so I might add more.

I'll Miss You by Quill And Ink

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: September first was not a day Hermione was looking forward to. As she boards the train, she
must say goodbye to those she loves.
Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 11/24/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww so bitter sweet! I enjoyed seeing this little window into what may have been, thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks! I really enjoyed writing it and I'm glad you liked it!

The Priceless Orb by Immunity

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: After the Dark Lord's victory, Hermione is given a chance to live under one condition- to marry Draco Malfoy and continue the dwindling bloodline. Refusing to succumb to her destiny, Hermione devises a plan to escape and reunite with Ron before the wedding. Will she be able to successfully carry out her plan with the wedding a week away without Draco Malfoy knowing? Or will she unexpectedly fall in love with him?
Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 01/29/12 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Absolutely loving this plot! I would say I hope you update soon, but since you havent updated since 2010, I find that highly unlikely. It is a shame, because you really do have the beginnings of something good! Interesting concept. I'll add this to my favorites just incase you choose to finish it : )

Ginny Weasley and the Deathly Hallows by fizzingwizzbee

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: This is the untold story of Ginny Weasley through her sixth year at Hogwarts. Harry has vanished on a secret mission taking Hermione and Ginny's brother, Ron with him. Ginny is left with no choice but to try and keep life going as normally as posible, but it would seem life has other ideas.
Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 12/23/10 Title: Chapter 1: The Seven Potters

I love it! Wonderful idea for a story and my only complaint is that this first chapter was way too short! Can't wait to read more : )

Author's Response: My next chapter is almost written. It's been a little delayed because I've been taken down quite badly with flu for the past week. Hopefully however I will be able to get it submitted soon. I can promise you the next chapter is going to be alot longer!

One Second Can Be A Lifetime by charlottetrips

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Imprisoned, alone, about to lose his life. Some would say that there love was never meant to be. But Draco would disagree.
The companion piece to "The Longest Walk of Her Life."
Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 03/04/12 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Is this the end?? I hope not...I was hoping for more of a happy ending from Draco and Hermione, especially after all they have gone through. I enjoyed the prequel to this one, please write more soon!

A Mourning to Remember by hermy008

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: A revealing tale starring everyone's favorite ginger and brunette pair. It's been a year since the defeat of Voldemort, but things are far from over. After a year of absence, Ron and Hermione are back again at Shell Cottage to help Fleur prepare the house for her baby shower. Needless to say, old memories come to the forefront and painful discoveries are made. Hearts are broken and healed again.
Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 02/18/11 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Sooo if they are at shell cottage a year later, Ron bought the ring and kept a secret for a year??? Doesn't seem likely. Cute chapter, but again it is all over the place and isn't making sense. Hope that as more chapters are added it will all come together, thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: no, i don't think that he kept it secret for that long, it all depends on when he and hermione were planning on going to austrailia to set her parents memories back, and i leave that time period to the readers imagination. even though i really didnt touch on this point, i could see hermione going back to finish school, (after the summer though, so theres a chance to rebuild.) so during the summer (maybe) would be when they go, but its entirely possible that they went some other time before their spring holiday, so im not entirely sure on that one. i hope it makes sense later, but i've only got one more chapter left, so we'll see how that goes. thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 03/02/11 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This was definitely the best chapter! Although the quote "Where else am I going to go?" made me giggle because it sounds like the Twilight movie. Very sweet morning after the proposal/flashback...thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: umm, im afraid to say this for fear of being jumped by certain people...but i sort of "borrowed" that line from that unmentionable movie, because i liked it so much. i thought it fit for it, though, so i guess it really doesnt matter where i got it from...thanks so much for the compliments too, im glad you liked it. :D

Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 02/04/11 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Again, enjoying this fic very much, but still confused. I feel as though we are thrown through the journey with Ron and Hermione with no explanation of the relationship or what is really going on. Hoping for more clarification in the future, looking forward to additional chapters. Thank you for sharing!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you're looking forward to the next chapters, and I think that they will definitely deliver (and hopefully will clear some things up for you as well.) thanks for the review! :D

Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 01/31/11 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Finally a new Ron and Hermione fic! I'm a litte confused, but enjoying it anyway! Would like to know why they werent together for the past year before this reunion at Shell Cottage. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: well, i dont know if ive explained this before or not, but to ron and hermione, its pretty obvious that they were and are "together", but to everyone else, it just looks like a normal ron/hermione relationship, complete with angst and bickering. :) so i guess they've been together for a while, but they havent really made it public yet. does that make sense? trust me, theres definitely more to come. :D

The Colour Red by rather_be_athogwarts

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It was Christmas time at Hogwarts once again, and the Gryffindor common room looked particularly festive. There was a huge Christmas tree in the corner, the tinsel glittering in the glow of the fire place. Red and gold garlands were hung around the room, as well as several sprigs of mistletoe. Reddest of all though, was Hermione’s face.

“Ron, just shut up!” Hermione yelled, jumping to her feet. “You just don’t understand at all!”

Hermione ran into the dormitory, slamming the door behind her and leaving Ron spluttering in her wake.

A short, fluffy and emotion filled fic set in Ron and Hermione's sixth year at Hogwarts. AU warning is because Ron and Lavender were already together at Christmas in book 6.
Reviewer: BookWorm530 Signed
Date: 02/04/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Quiet Moments

adorable idea for a fic! its nice to see a glimpse of hermione and ron's private moments without harry since they are never revealed in the books. can't wait to see ron's reaction to hermione's outburst, post more soon!